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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - rai on February 16, 2008
    OMG! >_< THE PLOT THICKENS! OMG! I WANNA KNOW! And i love the "i'm his fiancee"-thing, totally brilliant! :D

    love this, it's freaking awesome! looking forward to next chapter, AND THANK YOU FOR THE EMAIL! please keep it up, and keep sending me those emails :D

    much nerdy yaoi love,
    Rai
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  • From ANON - cant tell on February 16, 2008
    fucking awesome! im always at the egde of my seat! u rule!



    Your Admirer,
    ~cant tell~
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  • From ANON - PureEbil on February 16, 2008
    Oh, the plot thickens. Man, I can't begin to verbalize how much this story kicks ass. I love how Sasuke has verbal diarrhea, though. He's so cute. I wonder how Naruto will react to the news. Was the insulin really an accident? Was that a tip off? I suppose I will have to wait for the next installment of TDZ. AAAAhhh! So many cliff hangers! Please don't make this a habit or I fear I shall go bald... & then I'll sue you (unless you put a disclaimer: warning reading of this chapter could be hazardous to your hair) ^_^

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  • From despairs on February 16, 2008
    I really like how you intertwined the past with the present in chapter 7. It was so beautifully written that way.
    This chapter had me in tears almost all the way through. I'm so worried about Kakashi and Iruka. Please let them be okay =[
    I loved how Sasuke stayed with Naruto the whole time and how he claimed to be his fiance..that part made me smile :D
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  • From spoon10488 on February 16, 2008
    “I’m Naruto’s fiancé.”
    I loved that part!
    But still... WHY?!? Why does life suck? Poor poor Naruto!
    Evil, evil nurse! I'll strangle her with my bare hands. She did it on purpose, I just know it! That which! I'll beat her to death with a rubber chicken!
    Detective huh. I hope the detevtive, figures out what's going on. Why would someone want to kill Kakashi?
    I'm glad Sasuke is there for Naruto. Poor, poor Naru-chan.
    I still love the “I’m Naruto’s fiancé.” part.
    Please update soon. I can't stand the wait! Please, please please!
    Poor Naruto.
    I love this story, it makes me giggle and cry.
    =')
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  • From bloodstone on February 16, 2008
    ....WTF?!?!?You have got to get the next chappter out, and out now. I have to know what's going on. Are they saying the car accsadent, wasn't an accsadent or that the mix-up in mid wasn't an a accsadent? O.O What is going on? There both school teachers right? Why the hell would someone attack a teacher.... a discruntle student? o.O? I don't know. All I know is you need to update, and update soon. This is going to kill me untell you do. Good Work on the chappter! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Hige on February 16, 2008
    Parents both in coma at the same time... ouch... Dx
    Poor Na-chan...

    and Sasuke will have a lot of trouble explaining to Naruto just what the hell was he thinking when he said they're engaged.

    awww i hate sad stuff...

    Thanks for updating :D
    ^^


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  • From ANON - lo on February 15, 2008
    Wow, chapter seven was heavy. It actually was tugging at the old heart strings. This chapter was wonderfully written.
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  • From MissMayumi on February 15, 2008
    omgsh! No...Iruka and Kakashi cant die!!!

    Please don't kill them off =/

    I wonder who hit them..orochimaru, perhaps?
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  • From Imagy on February 15, 2008
    and the plot thickens!
    What a wonderful twist, babe ^o^
    I also love hearing Sasuke's views on the whole matter
    it's actually really insiteful, and hilarious
    aaaaaand~!
    I can't wait to see what happens next!
    'till then, lovey :D
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  • From ANON - TsubakiTsukihime on February 15, 2008
    I have read all of your stories so far & I have to say this is my favorite. I love the way you portray the characters, especially the e-mails, those amuse me to no end, and sasuke's inability to control what he says is great too. I can't wait for more chapters, you are a wonderful writer.
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  • From LadyLaran on February 15, 2008
    Not an accident? OMG!!!! You better update this soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2008
    Wow
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  • From MoveThemHands on February 15, 2008
    This story is made of pure win.

    I started to tear up when Kakashi finally got to Naruto's crib and stayed there with him. And mixing light comedy with something so sad makes a person very bi-polar feeling.

    Damn this chapter was just too powerful.

    I can't wait for the next chapter, and if someone actually did do this on purpose I think that will be the only time in my life that I will try to jump through the computer to kill me some people.
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  • From Nanaka on February 15, 2008
    I love this story... i so can't wait for the next chapter... when i finished the last i just stared at my screen for a min as if it could some how magically make the next chapter appear... i laughed so hard once i realized i was doing that.
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