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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From Raholea on February 24, 2008
    aww, man, i love the suspense! sasuke's gonna have hell to pay with both itachi and naruto, and honestly, i hope kakashi and iruka both survive this whole ordeal. and that naruto doesn't try to rip sasuke apart for the little slip- up of proclaiming themselves engaged. i like the work! keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - Lechan on February 24, 2008
    OMG I laughed so hard I was crying at the end there. I must say that I am addicted to this story. I Loved "For the Love of his Son" and this one just made me an avid fan of your work. ^-^ I'm just burning up with questions now, ranging from Please let the gaurd be normal and not a scum bag working for Orochi-asswipe, to OMG please tell me what I think happened to NAruto when he was five did not happen... to LOL How will Sasuke explain this one. ^_^ great story, can't wait for more. And now I'm off to read your newest story. ^-^
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  • From Vox on February 24, 2008
    *blushes!*

    Umm, wow, um, thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

    Let's see... canon, Naruto and Sasuke make sense. He was unnaturally close to both of them... Of course, for difficult decisions, the kami gave us threesomes for a reason.
    *still blushing!*

    Oh yea! I love you for giving us a wonderful, heart-felt Itachi moment alongside his normal bastard-ness. I love you for humiliating our poor Sasuke by revealing his 'engagement' to everyone (and I can't wait for Naru-chan to find out!). I love you, love you lots and lots for making me laugh and making an otherwise horrendous weekend awesome. I can now give a happy screech and send my roommate running for his computer to read the newest chapter of your stories.

    Much love!
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  • From Jelp on February 24, 2008
    WOW! I love it, love it, love it! You're so great at making readers jump from one emotion to another, especially at the end there. The second to last scene it's :GASP: someone is following Naruto! And then, it's HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! SASUKE GOT CAUGHT! That's great. This story is great. You are great. :-) Keep up the great work. :-D ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 24, 2008
    Yea!!! an update!!! Thank you thank you thank you.... oh and more please.
    You write so wonderfully and I love the way you write your characters!!!
    Thanks
    Slave
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  • From charmpit on February 24, 2008
    Thank you thank you thank you! I have been waiting--with bated breath, no less--for an update to this fic. It's so exciting! The whole schpiel about Neji's red tie was delightfully engaging. I love GaaNeji almost as much as I do GaaNaru! And, once again it appears, Sakura-chan gets the proverbial shaft. Oh, well...can't be helped I suppose.

    Now then: as much as I do enjoy the plot of this fic (and I do, I'm not patronizing here), how many more chapters must we all wait before Sasuke gives in to his urges and plunders the fair Naruto? I can hardly wait!

    You are a phenomenal fanfic writer.
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  • From ANON - animelover on February 24, 2008
    what an absolutely perfect cliffie! OMG!!!! somehow you manage to interject some humor in the angst. terribly clever of you! i'm just dying to see how sasuke gets out of this situation, and i'm guessing orochimaru is the hitman's boss; but then the question is what would he gain since naruto is an adult? hmmm, maybe kakairu are haunted because there's some uchiha money involved?

    so many questions, so little time. lol! carry on!
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  • From ANON - SMEE on February 19, 2008
    First, I would like to say that I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR ITACHI. He makes me cackle and squirm with glee. Second, are you still sending out update messages? If so, I would love to be added to the list. This story has me competely captivated.
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  • From ANON - nlb on February 18, 2008
    This story is beyond awesome. I admit, at first I was a bit sceptic, but you've made me a believer. ;-)

    The emails sent between individuals(...mainly to and from Itachi)were highly amusing, the characters were as IC as one can possibly keep them in a modern day AU(...I love your Itachi), Naruto's relationship with his parents(...both pairs of them)was realistic and detailed, the explanations that were given for both boys' circumstances in life and personalities were believable, Sasuke's thoughts regarding his "return to Uchiha speak from now on" were hilarious despite the circumstances and I can't wait to learn what will happen from now on(...the whole "we believe it was not an accident" has me on my toes).
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  • From ANON - Alice on February 17, 2008
    You are brilliant. I love you. *huggles*

    No but seriously. Your story maketh me much happiness ^____~
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  • From Vox on February 17, 2008
    Your writing is getting quite a bit better as we go along. I am waiting, with barely-baited breath, for the next chapter. (I think I check your story three or four times a day...)

    I would like to note two things: one, Itachi needs more love. We adore Itachi, especially evil Itachi, but it would be cute to watch him get bowled over and fall for someone. (I can already see the glaring and cussing this would involve. ^^) Two, if Kakashi and Iruka are in any way perminantly harmed, that dragon won't save you. It is a physical being, and as such, still bound by physical laws. It can only kill so many of us at once. We number in the thousands. Someone will get through.

    Much love, as always!
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  • From crazychemgeek on February 17, 2008
    OMG This fic is awesome. I read the first chapter ages and ages ago and I can't believe how much you've updated since then. Can't wait to see how things pan out from here, and how Sasuke will explain the fiance thing to Naruto.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 16, 2008
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!
    ACK! How could you leave it like that? Does that mean Minato's and Kushina's death wasn't an accident too? (Well, an old lady was the cause but still... you never know). Who would want to kill Kakashi and Iruka? I hope both of them pull through... don't let them die!
    update
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  • From DragonsDancers on February 16, 2008
    you have to hurry with the next ch please
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 16, 2008
    ... it's a conspiracy?! that damn bitch nurse!! burn! burn in hell woman!! (clearly the nurse, not you :)) what if kakashi ends up with hypoxic brain injury?! noooooo! *sniffles* and then sasuke lying to the doctor is gonna come out now? oohh dear lol what a disaster ha! OH YEAH! sasuke wondering if anything had gone on with kiba and naruto was hilarious. albeit that it lasting 2 secs... reaching for the funny moments in this one you can see :S oh well
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