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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on February 26, 2008
    Oh my where to start? The last line from Itachi? Wonderful I snickered for a full minute. The little flashbacks are much like chocolate chips in mint ice cream, a delicious little extra that blends so well with an already wonderful treat. I have to say that my curiosity about what's happening and what has happened in Naruto's past is rising to insane heights. Does the blank spot in Naruto's file have something to do with his issues with rain? And I'm positively on the edge of my seat with the ups and downs in the relationship building between Sasuke and Naruto.
    I have to apologize for not reviewing sooner. I actually haven't been on AFF very much lately and I never got an update alert from fanfiction.net about the most recent chapters so I thought you hadn't updated yet.
    Anyway, wonderful update and thanks for the dragon loan. For Itachi intimidation purposes one dragon is effective, two growling at him shuts him up pronto. Keep up the good work and I'll keep reviewing (when I see an update that is )
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  • From nyge98 on February 25, 2008
    I can't believe you left me on a cliff hanger. I can't wait till the next story.
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  • From Imagy on February 25, 2008
    O you would have to end on that note, wouldn't you?
    buuuuuuut
    I loved it ^o^
    and I so can't wait for more
    this is seriously one kick-ass fanfiction, though
    it's, like, totally amazing in every since of the word
    so please
    update soon~!
    :D
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  • From ANON - Rai on February 25, 2008
    “Now, little brother, this is exactly what I was referring to when I asked if there was anything ‘more’ you would like to share.” - XD!
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  • From ANON - minn yun on February 25, 2008
    stroller scene and the file's picture are so cute. pity that we don't have more of them. but dad!kashi and papa!ruka are 2 loving ppl, i can't see 1 without the other. and with their sunshine, what a happy fun(ky) family they make together. i hope they get better very soon.
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  • From LadyLaran on February 25, 2008
    *giggles* the Duckies aren't too happy. Excellent update!
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  • From digiditz on February 25, 2008
    Another evil cliffhanger. I am so proud. I will be obsessively checking several times a day everyday until you update.
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  • From ANON - Charlie on February 24, 2008
    Hinata fainted. Right? I really like the flashbacks in between. It really gives us an idea of what happened in the past.
    I really hate Orchimaru so much. I hope he gets what's coming to him soon.

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  • From despairs on February 24, 2008
    I'm still stressing over Kakashi and Iruka =[ But this helped cheer me up..

    'Kakashi stood up and walked toward the stroller. Looking in he saw his Sunshine cuddled up to a dark haired baby who had his pale hand lying against Naruto’s scarred cheek. Both babies were asleep and had the slightest smiles on their tiny mouths.'

    Aww! How cute was that?!

    But then i went back to worrying at the end...when Naruto was 5 Orochimaru must have abused him -cries- I'm not really a nail biter type person but this is really making me want to start.
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  • From nekochannya on February 24, 2008
    The plot thickens as expected... nyah!! I want to know what happens!!! nYah!!! I love this story so much!!1 Great job! Good pace and as always darned cliffies...grrr...
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  • From gaara89 on February 24, 2008
    Please update soon!
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  • From NiChee on February 24, 2008
    i luv u so much! luv this fic to bits n pieces! i hope u update asap coz i can't wait to find out more. its getting really interesting!
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  • From MissMayumi on February 24, 2008
    gah! You ended it too soon! =[

    Oh well, it was still pretty interesting, and I couldn't stop reading.

    *giggles* Honorable Judge Watanabe!
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  • From ANON - lo on February 24, 2008
    Good chapter this story is coming together wonderfully.
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  • From bloodstone on February 24, 2008
    ...I...I d-.....umm....well...My mind is blink. I am in shock. O.O That was fucking alsome. I love that chappter! XD The sean with Sauske and Naruto as babys, was just so...*SQUIL!*...CUTE! I love it! Please, please, please update as soon as you can. I really need to know what happens next! Great Work! ^___^


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