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By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - qwerty on March 06, 2008
    Jesus! That was funny. Of course Sasuke's lie would have a snowball effect. Wait! Let me guess! Sasuke and Naruto will go along with the supposed engagement and they admit their feelings to one another. Right?
    That last scene with Orochimaru (I don't buy that he's really dead) and his collage of Naruto pics was creepy as hell. I guess next on the hit list is Sasuke!
    Great chapter.
    update
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  • From Vox on March 06, 2008
    First of all - *hugs* I'm sorry life is all icky right now. Just remember: gorgeous yaoi-smut makes all things better.
    Second - I missed you! Whaa, a whole week without you - I felt like I was going into withdrawl! I mean, a whole week without my Itachi being my Itachi... *shudder*
    Third - Mwa ha ha! Poor Naru-chan. Poor Sasu-kun... though he deserves it, really. Watching this little meeting with Sasuke's mother is going to be positively hilarious. I can't wait.
    Last - remember, we're not pressuring you. We know evil stuff comes up. We just love you, and them, and it's like not seeing a best friend for days on end. We just miss you.

    Love ya!
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  • From ANON - NiChee on March 06, 2008
    please update soon! i'm loving this so much. it's 12 mn, i just got home from a stressful exam and fun but tiring outing with my friends. i'm so tired, but once i saw that u updated, i just had to read the new chapter!
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on March 06, 2008
    Okay so snake face is dead and Naruto has a creepy ass stalker. I somehow get the feeling that Sasuke is about to become a 'target' and I'm thinking that whoever (other than Naruto) wants to take a chunk out of him is gonna choke on the poisonous nature of our favorite broody minion. That's if the Prince of Darkness doesn't get to them first. So who could the stalker be (thinks) if it's who I think I may go into a murderous frenzy, not towards you but a generalized frenzy.
    Okay now that you've waded through my inane babble I'll tell you what I thought of this chapter. It went from funny, Sasuke's thoughts on everyone's reactions to his 'engagement' and the Uchiha brothers being 'concerned' when their dad spoke almost poetically in particular, to sweet, the closet scene, to fluffy and slightly steamy and back to funny. You had me laughing and going AWWWWW, nearly dying of laughter when Naruto attacked Sasuke in the bathroom after seeing the newspaper, I knew exactly what the paper said before the stalker scene by the way, and the way you ended it? My eyes were practically kissing my computer screen they were so wide open. Another excellent chapter and even more questions. Who killed Orochimaru? Who is the stalker? Who sent the information about the 'engagement' to the paper? (personally I'm betting Itachi, it's a great way to torment Sasuke) Keep up the great work. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From Loupiotte on March 06, 2008
    I managed to hold back from reading this fic for almost two months. I knew I would feel frustrated if I had to wait for the updates. You know what? I hate being right and I should have waited for it to be completed.
    You don't cease to amaze me. How do you manage to use the same characters in several entirely different stories, playing totally different roles and still keep them canon? Wow.
    I refuse to read All The Small Things until it's well under way. Weirdly enough, it's a measure of my appreciation.
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  • From Kimra on March 06, 2008
    Sorry that was a poor excuse for a review!

    I love this story! Reading it is actually the highlight of my day. I hope to read more soon!

    There. I think that was better. :D
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  • From Kimra on March 06, 2008
    ha ha. I love Naruto and Sasuke interaction.

    I'd be happy if it was all just ahppy interaction, but I'll read on through the plot anyway! :D
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  • From Halskr on March 06, 2008
    Thanks for the update. I think Naruto took the news very well!!!

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  • From getd0rky on March 02, 2008
    First, let me just say that you are a goddess. Goddess. I never ever review for people. Not because I don't like what I read, but because I'm so lazy I make Shikamaru look good. I've read every one of your fics except 'All the small things' which is next. But this story is my favorite. I want to cuddle it. I love your writing style, I love the concept, I love Sasuke being childish, I love Naruto being adorableish and mostly I love Itachi being all that is Evil and great. :) Is that fangirly enough for you?

    If you ever get any flamers knockin' at your door I'd be more than willing to get violent in the name of SasuNaru.

    That being said: UPDATE SOON OR I'LL DIE!!! Please and rice?

    Ok how about this, I'll bribe you with pretty and/or sexy fanart for your sexy fanfics? Sound gravy? I'll do anything!!! *is desperate*

    -the obviously dorky one
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  • From YamiKaeko on February 29, 2008
    omg omg omg! It took me three minutes to stop laughing...seriously funny. hahaha specially the part where Sasuke text'd Itachi, pure humor! Please update soon!
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  • From spoon10488 on February 29, 2008
    That so awesome! I love the ending, the passed out secretriy (My Spelling no good :p). Anyway I love the whole court thing it was so well thought out. I'm so interested in this. What's going to happen next? Why is the guard following Naruto? I need to read more! Please update soon.
    =)
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on February 28, 2008
    read this ages ago but i was too busy laughing at the end to reply and i KNEW that it wdnt be updated for at least a week grrrr so i had time to come back an review :)

    Obviously the sasuke naruto interaction is my fav parts in this but i have to say the whole trial thing was intense! poor poor kakashi having to go through that at 20 and having them pry into his personal life and all, trying to get through school. damn orochimaru bastard! and what happened in the 'time skip' in naruto's file... sigh more bad things *cries* and it was so happy when we started. angst! where are u coming from?! *tries to beat it away* lol

    So of course i was cracking up at the end as i already mentioned, i wanna see how sas gets out of this one, what will naruto say when he finds out, oh and is the guard following naruto with malicious intent?! O_o Lets find out!
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  • From on February 27, 2008
    Woohoo! Great story, great story! Naruto and Sasuke are pretty decently characterized. Normally I DESPISE KakaIru(you know, because that passionate 2 minutes conversation they had back 3 years ago way really something), but you kind of made me like it :) Plot is fabulous. Do you happen to be reading "Blackmail and Betrayal"? Another NaruSasu. Your story just reminded me of it because Sasuke had a murder attempt on him in there by a nurse slipping into his hospital room. One negative for the story: I was really hoping that their first kiss/makeoutness would have been more, hm, angry kissing? I don't know. Continue, por favor!
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on February 27, 2008
    yay! this story is so good!!! what happened in the break of narutos life, and minato's heir? Heir to what? can't wait to see narutos reaction when he finds out him and sasuke are engaged, thats going to be surprising. either way i love the hint of neji gaara, i am a huge fan but their is so little fanfiction out there for them.
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  • From ANON - cant tell on February 26, 2008
    awesome 8th chapter!! i love you!!! cant wait for the next one



    Sincerly
    ~You Secret Admirer
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