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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From Hellagoddess on March 15, 2008
    “I can see someone pulling back the curtains. Holy hell, is that your mother? She’s hot.”

    I laughed and laughed and laughed and laughed and couldn't stop for a very, very long time.

    Just wanted to say how brilliant this story is. I've been following it for some time now and can't recall if I've reviewed it previously - If not - You deserve all the reviews in the world. This is just the right mix of humour and angst in a story - there's bad things happening but you don't let the events drag everything down. It's just so wonderful! Please keep updating!
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  • From TimeFlys on March 14, 2008
    Chapter 10: Thank you for the lemonade! It was very yummy! XD lol – The kids were an unexpected, (but pleasant) surprise. I love the four-year-old deciding Naruto was his. (Very CUTE!) Can’t wait till the next chapter. Maybe we’ll have enough lemons to have a full glass of lemonade. (Sends hopeful look towards author…)

    Thanks for the update.

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  • From Imagy on March 14, 2008
    I totally squeeled when I saw that a new chapter had been posted
    not that you don't update regularly
    gods no..
    but it's that I am just so in love with this story
    AND NAOKI
    OMFG HE'S SO CUTE~!
    such an adorable little Chee-ha ^o^
    can't wait to see what happens next, lovey
    caoi for now~!
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  • From ANON - Damp on March 14, 2008
    GODDAMNIT!! I CAN'T TAKE IT!!

    -Damp *The suspense is KILLING ME!!*
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  • From Kimra on March 14, 2008
    I really enjoy this story and can't wait to read more. :D
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 14, 2008
    I loved the chapter. I liked the flashbacks b/c I really want to know more about Naruto's past. Really great chapter.
    update
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  • From ANON - animelover on March 14, 2008
    i almost forgot ... that line where Fuguko asks Naru if his boys "tattling" is his influence WAS THE BOMB!!!!!! my cats looked at me crosseyed while I laughed hysterically. LOL!
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  • From ANON - animelover on March 14, 2008
    whew! i don't know how you do it, but once again youve blended humor and suspense in a nice neat package! one minute, you have a cute lil Chee Ha stealing Naru away, then we have an announcement that someone just tried to kill sasu and kakairu AGAIN!!!

    absolutely brilliant work! and i love the flashbacks; i'm curious to see why the friends split up after the custody battle.

    anxiously awaiting your next update ... oh, no pressure or anything, just weave your magic like you always do!
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  • From despairs on March 14, 2008
    Naoki is adorable! Sasuke better watch out, he's got some competition for Naruto's affection *giggles*
    The SasuNaru action in Sasuke's room was hot. I like how he can make Naruto's brain shut down so easily lol.
    Oh my, now Itachi is super pissed...nobody attacks his little brother and favorite minion. Great chapter (as always)
    Now I'm extra eager to read the next one...especially after Sasuke said, “Welcome to the fold, Naruto.” Woo! Go Sasuke, get your blonde!
    Mmm possessive Uchiha's are absolutely sexy.
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  • From ANON - coma288 on March 14, 2008
    Wonderful story.
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  • From Vox on March 14, 2008
    *holds up a banner saying "WE LOVE DEVIL-TACHI!"*
    1) I love you. If I've never said that before, I'm so sorry.
    2) *worships your Itachi and begs for more, 'cause he's so adorable when he's being all possessive*
    3) You will give us the name of Itachi's spouse soon, won't you? *glare, glare, glare*
    4) Since I've been holding it in for a while... *squeal!*

    Damn it, my Uchiha is slipping... ^^

    Love!
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  • From bloodstone on March 14, 2008
    You are evil! You hear me, EVIL! You have to update, and I mean soon. *glare* ..... Great chater! ^__^
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  • From charmpit on March 14, 2008
    Ho-lee shit! Someone has lost his freaking mind, trying to take out Sasuke! I love the phone call Itachi made--hey hey, he's calling in the f-ing cavalry to protect his own, I freaking LOVE it! So is Sasuke going to give it to Naruto now, or what?! He could sure use something to relax him, after all...
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on March 14, 2008
    yay yay yay chapter 10 is here!! This however is chapter 9s review. why? bc i'm lazy and didnt review before but i think you're so awesome you should get reviews for EVERY chapter! :)

    I may have said this before but bah! THIS is my all time fav chapter so far! fabulous fabulous utter fabulociousness. When sas' dad walked in i nearly pissed myself with laughter not to mention sasuke's responses in his mind to each person's comment 'et tu brutus?' LOL you slay me.

    Then there was just sooo much naruto sasuke interaction in this one! yaaayyy!!! naru not wanting to go home and be alone, then knowing sasuke would take his mind off everything *fangirl squuueee time* lmao Oh, and of course we got to see the first impression thing from naruto's point of view :D wondering how everyone wasnt stopped in their tracks staring at demigod sasuke Gah! i adored this chapter, in fact i'ma go read it over now b4 chapter 10. review ya later meng.

    p.s. that asprin thing hahahahahaha, worse when naruto took it anyway... good times good times
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  • From gaara89 on March 14, 2008
    Omg! Did Sasuke just really propose to Naruto? I can't wait for the next chapter.
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