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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - Damp on March 29, 2008
    There were. . .so many things that killed me during this chapter. ARGH! You're killing me! Forcing me to wait for the next chapter will be the death of me!

    -Damp *I'M GOING ON A HUNGER STRIKE TO SHOW MY UNHAPPINESS!!*

    ps
    You will be held responsible for my death. Because there are so many things working against you. I could die from waiting so long, or the starvation will get to me. DO NOT KILL ME!!

    jking >.
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  • From ANON - animelover on March 29, 2008
    R U KIDDING ME?!?!?!?!?!? That has GOT to be the BEST cliffhanger I've seen on this site, and I'm not sucking up. OMG!!!!!!!!! you know oro is alive is kabuto reported him dead. whew, i'm exhausted after reading this chapter. once again, you inject humor with delicate grace and timing. geez, you're a genius.

    ok, naru is kidnapped and sasu got blown up; the uchihas are going to TEAR IT UP!!!! cool, let the games begin and thanks for the x-tra long chapter. i know how can get out of control, so you've definitely made up for it. LOL!
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  • From charmpit on March 29, 2008
    "Why not brother or cousin or crazy uncle no--"

    That's too funny.

    Naruto and Sasuke just can't get a break, can they? Someone wants that tan blond ass more than Sasuke does! Holy shit, I can't wait for the showdown!

    Please write more!
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  • From NiChee on March 29, 2008
    oh my...that was the best chapter ever! so orochi(pedo)maru is still alive huh? dang...i hope u update soon! this chapter was awesome!
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  • From despairs on March 29, 2008
    Wow...thats one helluva evil cliffhanger there =[ I think my heart stopped for a second at the very end. I just realized that when i read your stories i feel like i'm reading a transcript to an actual movie...it's just that damn good.

    I got all teary eyed at the part where they found Naruto in that basement in a cage with bugs and all bruised up -sobs- that was traumatizing.
    But Kakashi is awake now...yay! But now i'm worried about Sasuke...boo! lol my emotions are literally all over the place...well done :P
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  • From ANON - -xyz- on March 22, 2008
    HI,
    I found this story today and I read it through.
    I loved my ass off at how you depict the Uchihas. Just great. How you descibe their dark and emotionless behaviour and still make them good people. (Even Itachi!!!! It's the first time ever that I don't want to see Itachi dead. I usually hate this character with a passion, as is probably intended from the mangaka) And turn it into a very nice running gag. It's great and not overdone. And the rest of the characters: very well done! And I liked how you fit everyone in the story.

    I want to thank you soo much for sharing this story because I needed something to make me smile today. I needed to read a story that smells of happy end and makes me laugh and is still very interesting and not a run-of-the-mill story.
    So: thank you!

    And may I please be a greedy little fan and ask for more soon?!?
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  • From Mort on March 17, 2008
    I didn't know what to expect-
    But, this entire story has been a pleasant surprise, and wonderful read-

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  • From LadyRonin on March 16, 2008
    now we know why you have a pack of draons evil cliff hanging lady. i read all your other one shots and i really liked them especially the transformers one you made me go and watch the movie. i can't say anything else except please update soon.
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  • From spoon10488 on March 16, 2008
    Very hot chapter. Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on March 16, 2008
    I LOVE IT! Amazing, exciting, interesting, delicious and so well put together. I can't get enough.

    I must profess my adoration to all of your stories, they are all so amazing in each their own ways but this one...this one makes my heart pound. It is so eloquent, so well written. It makes for a much better read when you give the flashbacks of their pasts incorporated into the present scene. And the way you portray Naruto and Sasuke and their relationship developing is just perfect, PERFECT!

    This is one of the best Naruto stories I have ever read on AFF.net. I love it, absolutely love it. Please, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Hannah on March 16, 2008
    Oh man, oh man, oh man.

    This story... so far, has made me so fuckin' happy.

    And I don't know why.

    I'm not even a Naru-fan.

    Bu it has all the right humor, and all the right turns, and goddamn, Naruto plays the cello.

    How the hell did you even come up with that?

    If I had known this story was here, I would have gotten the internet back months ago.

    Where did you get the title, anyways?

    Because, if I'm right, it seems like something outta Calvin and Hobbs. ...like their both in bed and Calvin has cold feet or something. Iunno.

    Anyways, this fic... is a masterpiece. And one of the only ones that I'll ever stick around for.

    God, I hope it keeps going.

    Thank you, for being so awesome.
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  • From Jelp on March 15, 2008
    My first reaction is...omg...Itachi reproduced...and the second thought is HAHAHA! All your Uchihas love Naruto! :-)

    Hmm, this is really sad. It's so sad that Naruto didn't get to know his biological parents. Iruka and Kakashi are his parents, no doubt about it, but it's still sad. I feel bad for Naruto to have to struggle with thinking between those who he didn't know, and those who he knows who have loved him.

    I really hope Mikoto breaks out some Sasuke and Naruto baby pictures. That'd be great! Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
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  • From LadyLaran on March 15, 2008
    *shivers* and now the devil himself is entering the playing field. Oh my gods, this plot gets heavier and heavier. Is Naruto going to be able to handle living at the Uchihas like that? lol..the little boy is too adorable!!!!
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  • From ANON - nichee on March 15, 2008
    yeesh. i'm dying of curiousity here. i can't wait for the next chapter. please don't torture me ^_^
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on March 15, 2008
    little bit of mixed feelings about this one... is that why i'm reviewing so quickly??? tons of good stuff tho Tons :) naruto saying what will sasuke's mother think about him being an abusive fiance, then the 'girly' comment with poor 'distracted by sasukes hotness' naruto agreeing hahahahaha ROLLING

    Of course the babbling naruto outside the hospital was too adorable. 'will they like me?' aawww of course naru chan! *glomps*

    Sasuke's mom is hot... lol nuff said.

    Now my biggest shock ITACHI HAS CHILDREN??? whoa. whoa man. one an absolutely adorable chibi crazy over naruto rofl cute.

    The mixed feeling came in with: WHY does the fam still not know ab the engagement being false?? its just sitting there eating at me because they kept getting interrupted.. i just feel like its ALREADY snow balled enough, it needs to end theeennn 'welcome to the fold naruto' WTF??? wat the hell does that mean sasuke?! he wants to keep the engagement going? he's trying to say naruto is like family now?? what? And lastly, as much as i want lemon lol i thought sas didnt want their first to be when he was 'distracting' naruto. hmmm mixed indeed LOL

    OK finished rambling! damn this was long. i love love love this story as ALWAYS. eagerly awaiting next esp now that big baddy 'tachi has put out his own hit.. poor unsuspecting fool this stalker is :D
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