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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - kanaro on March 29, 2008
    Oh no! You can't leave it there! I need to know what happens next! Great story, update soon please.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 29, 2008
    OH MY GOD!!!!!
    That was a crazy cliffhanger!!!
    I knew something bad was about to happen when Kabuto was the officer. Orochimaru isn't really dead! Ack!
    Great writing!
    update!!!
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  • From ursweetheartless on March 29, 2008
    nnnnoooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!

    that ending was evil... EVIL...
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  • From Jelp on March 29, 2008
    GAH! The long length of this chapter does NOT make up for the wait because you left it THERE. GRRRR. Meanie.

    Just kidding. :-) Nothing needs to be "made-up for" with a long wait since you have such a great story!

    I really like the part towards the end with the Kakashi-Naruto discussion about Naruto saying he loves Sasuke, and Kakashi pretty much saying that he already knew that. :-)

    As always, looking forward to the next chapter! Not that I need to really tell you either of these points as you probably already know, but amazing story, and keep up the great work! ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on March 29, 2008
    I have to tell you... you have NASTY sense of the dramatic... That was a horrible(for the reader) place to end it... However if you want the critique from a writer... it was brilliant
    That, however, does not mean that I REALLY hope that you don't make us wait too long for another chapter!! Because It will drive me nuts!
    And I'd say more about how perfect your characters are, but I'm certain I've said that before!
    Slave
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  • From drivven on March 29, 2008
    AAHHH!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Poor Naru-chan. *beats evil cliffy with FairyNiamhs nerf bat*

    Sasuke and the Devil to the rescue??
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  • From wpriest696 on March 29, 2008
    That was intense! I about broke the ledge off my desk I was gripping it so hard by the end of the story. I CANNOT wait for your next chapter. You have possibly written my favorite story ever, though All the Small Things is a close second.
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  • From Ihadadream on March 29, 2008
    This story is FAN-TAS-TIC!!! cliffhangers in every chapters! I can't stop reading and re-reading it! I simply love it!
    How cute 8 y-o sasuke was, in love with a blonde blue-eyed cello player! Thanks for telling us about itachi's wife and what happened to her. It's so sad... but little naoki really takes after his father, he is soooo CUTE when he is with 'naru'! Now everyone knows they are not truly engaged but it's only a matter of time...
    Kakashi's reaction to the new couple was illarious (growling, really?).OMG Sasuke can't be dead, right? though if naruto hadn't called him he would have died in the car's explosion. Is Orochimaru still alive? since kabuto, his eternal accomplice, covered form him as a police officer...
    It will be HELL to wait for next chapter! As for the no-lemon i guess we will have to wait for SasuNaru's honeymoon, right?
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  • From Mija on March 29, 2008
    oh lex lex lex you are sooo killing me, I LOVE THIS FIC so much and then the cliffy comes and I want to pull out my hear and scream NOOOOO at the top of my lungs, then i wait and wait for a new chapter, then get all animated when I see a new one up, please for the love of my meager sanity update soon, pretty please, with a nakid Itachi on top covered in Red??? hehe love the whole devil minion thing, too funneh,,great wonderful read, hope to read anoter soon huggles and smiles MIja,,,:-)
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  • From skyblueeyes on March 29, 2008
    O.M.G! i lov3 your story but i wanna noe whats gonna happen. your killing me softly man,,,, please you hav e to uload soon im begging yu. :) i want to noe whats gonna happen
    you champion please upload bye :)

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  • From ANON - DARKON on March 29, 2008
    DAMN!! This story is getting better as it goes along.

    I have a feeling that the "snake bastard" is behind Naruto's kidnapping.

    I am looking forward to future updates.

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON.


    DARKON
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  • From Vox on March 29, 2008
    Okay, so... the first thing that comes to mind - or really, came out of my mouth when I got done - is *beep*. All I could see was Sasuke engulfed by those flames, inevitably with burns on him, and Itachi and Fugaku getting -that- phone call. There is a small army of chibi in my mind saying "Oh, f*ck," in unison.

    The second thing was... "Aww!" Poor Itachi. My opinion: he deserves a happy ending, too - if nothing else, he had to put up with Sasuke and Naruto this whole time, and he -didn't- kill them. I admire his self-control. I know, stories don't always work that way, but there's always a sequel. *nudge, nudge*

    *worships the ground that our Mischa (yes, I've nicknamed you) and Itachi walk on*

    Love!
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  • From digiditz on March 29, 2008
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!

    That is all.
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  • From DragonsDancers on March 29, 2008
    thats a mean place to stop next ch please
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  • From roro237 on March 29, 2008
    I'm getting my pitch fork out dog-gone-it (that's for the cliffie) ^_^ That was so good!!!!!!!! ^_^ Can't wait to read you next time.
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