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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - TGyamiBakura on April 05, 2008
    OMG.......................O_O This story is fuxing amazing! I don't think I've EVER read a more well-written, entertaining, funny *I was LOL-ing the whole time*, eerily in-character AU fanfic in my entire life...o.o;; You, my dear, win. God...Gai...XDDD Itachi...omg i've developed a whole new love for him just because your story. The dark lord...Lucifer LMAO! So true. It's so believable it's ridiculous! Sasuke's character in this story is perfect. There couldn't be a better way for him to fall in love with Naruto without it going OOC. All i can think is "damn...you really know your Uchihas" I didn't think that seeing Naruto's more "intellectual" side would make me so happy until i read this. Awesome. I really REALLY hope you continue this...I'll bookmark this and everyday check to see if there's updates because i really like it XDD. I hope Sasuke is okay T______T PLEASE LET HIM BE OKAY!
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  • From ANON - Danni on April 05, 2008
    AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate cliffhagers!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story!!! Please post soon!!!!!!!!!! *gives a plate of brownies*
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  • From nyge98 on April 03, 2008
    This was the best chapter so far. The ending broke my heart especially with the cliffhanger. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From Pinksweetheart3 on April 01, 2008
    hey that is so not cool I was totally into that then you just... new chapter please cause I am in love with this fic oh and if you could possibly e-mail me the next chapter is out I would love that me e-mail address is thediffrenceisimme@yahoo.com plz update and inform me !!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on March 31, 2008
    OMG! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!! How could you leave it at that? I think i might die if i don't know what happens next!!! Even though that was a nice long, revaling chapter. Poor baby naruto, i can only imagine the horror of having your baby taken away from you. i wonder if in that situation getting a random note makes you breath easyer, knowing their is a chance. anyways, another wonderful chapter... as if i could expect anything less from you.
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  • From ANON - naylezkiesqy on March 31, 2008
    Quoting Sasuke, 'Fucking genius! that's what you are!'

    L.O.V.E it.., every single thing, every detail, every portrayal, every email, every dialogue... love the way naruto call kakashi dada, and love the way kakashi call naruto sunshine and being very protective about naruto (we don't get to see it in the real series..,)
    .., oh,. i just can't get enough of it.., so, please update soon before I decide to blow your body to pieces..,

    oh, btw, have i mentioned that you are a fucking genius??
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  • From bloodstone on March 30, 2008
    oooh some ones going to die. Than brot back just the torcher them and kill agin,slowly. Please update as soon as you can! Please?!?
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  • From ANON - Anassa Thalassa on March 30, 2008
    Your writing is really fantastic. This is probably one of my favorite fan fictions that i have read. I hope you continue updating when you can. I really want to know what happens!
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  • From DismalAbstract on March 29, 2008
    Want MORE! I think this is a great and really well written story! Can't wait for next chapter!
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  • From spoon10488 on March 29, 2008

    The white haired man smiled innocently and pushed up wire rimmed glasses with two fingers, “Kabuto Yakushi, sir.”

    The snake bastard lives! Not for long because I'm going to kill him myself! *grabs Yaoi Fangirl armor and a heavy metal bat* "I come for you, you slimy snake! Let my Naru go!"

    Poor Naru-chan and Sasuke. Not again! I hope Naruto will be okay. Man is Itchi going to be pissed when he finds out. Kakashi going to have a heart attack.

    Can't wait for more!
    =)
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  • From crazychemgeek on March 29, 2008
    Oh God! What a way to end the chapter. So much happened and now you've left me hanging on the ledge, waiting to find out what's going on! Please make sure you update fairly soon, or I shall die from not knowing :)
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  • From animeaddict666 on March 29, 2008
    YOU!!! ARG!!! Bad cliffy! My God, this is so good though. I really loved how you kept having everyone say, "Why not brother, or cousin, or crazy uncle who no one...?" That was comic genius and had me rolling. Very entertaining, well=plotted and well paced story. I am truly enjoying it. Five Stars! Oh, and the parody of Itachi and the Duckies and Minions, is just too funny. I fell in love from the start. I actually think the first chapter was one of the best. And I love how you work in the funny e-mails and texts. So very office humor. J'adore! Write More!

    ~AA666
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  • From ANON - lo on March 29, 2008
    That was an exciting chapter! I even like the way you include the flashbacks. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From Imagy on March 29, 2008
    WHEE
    another chapter!
    I love you, hun
    truly I do
    but MAN
    what an ending!
    that's like super-mondo-explosion cliff hanger right thar
    and it makes me seriously hope that it won't be another two week until the next chapter is up
    cuz I totally can't wait to see what going to happen next!
    'til then, hun ^o^
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on March 29, 2008
    ANOTHER CLIFFIE? NOO!!

    But once again another heart-stopping chapter. You pull out so many surprises I swear, I was going to have a heart attack. Kakashi waking up, Kabuto being the doctor which therefore tells me Orochimaru is NOT dead, and the kidnapping at the end. I loved it aboslutely loved it.

    Please please update soon!
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