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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - Alicia on April 10, 2008
    hi, i loved your story for the love of his son, and i love this one too, you seem to have a thing for Naruto getting kidnapped by Oruchimaru..only this time Itachi isnt involved, but yea anyway love it and keep up the fantastic story!!!
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  • From on April 09, 2008
    *explodes* Cliffhanger! This is written so well! I absolutely love the take on Itachi and Sasuke's relationship. It was kind of how I viewed it, sort of, until we figured out all Itachi wanted was Sasuke's eyes. Man, when I read stories with like Itachi and Jaraiya in them, it is the only way it really hits me that they are really dead now. Especially Jaraiya. I don't know what that just had to do with your story, but! It is awesome! Good! Amazing!
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  • From spoon10488 on April 09, 2008
    Ah I hope they save Naruto in time! Poor Naru-chan. Hurry Sasuke, hurry!
    Love this story. I can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From Vox on April 08, 2008
    Take your time, babe. You've got two stories going and a lot of stuff going on. Why don't you get one of them off your plate before you worry about keeping up with our Dark Lord Itachi's demands (since we all know that if you start writing him, he will -demand- you attention for the rest of your life). Other ideas for our lovely: Suigetsu and Kakashi.

    *clings to the author and to The DMZ for dear life*

    Love ya!
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  • From Lechan on April 08, 2008
    I fucking love your way of writing. I was addicted with "For the Love of his Son" and now this one has me just spinning. I LOVE how you build up the characters how the plot seems so smooth and flowing. I know--or think I do--what's comming next but still it eats me alive just waiting for the next update. These are quickly becoming my favorite fics EVER from any fandom and that is sasying alot. I think its because I can rely on you to deliever almost every week, and I get the outcome I want most but in a surprising fasion that doesn't appear dull, sickeningly sweet, or just down right over dramatic. Your stories are sweet but real, funny but angsty, and the bad guy gets his ass handed to him with swift actions. ^-^ I fucking LOVE Itachi and Sasuke in this one. I love how diabolically evil Sasuke is capable of being, and how Itachi is the "Devil". the realation ships in this story simply leave me flabbergasted. You are an amazing writer and I stand in awe of your fics. Please, please, continue this story as you have been, and I really hope to see Orochimaru get slaughter by both Uchiha's this time. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Myloveforyou on April 08, 2008
    I love this story so much. You are very good at writing it. Caould you please email me when you update? Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From Rockyshores on April 07, 2008
    Wow that was an adrenaline packed cry fest. Very good chapter!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 07, 2008
    Fantastic. Had my heart pounding by the end of the chapter. Can't wait for the next one :)
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  • From Imagy on April 07, 2008
    OMIGOSH
    OMIGOSH
    O-MI-GOSH~!
    total and complete suspence!
    it's fatal..
    and I'm dieing to know what'll happen next..
    can't wait~!
    'til then, hun ^O^
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on April 07, 2008
    i'm on my phone right now & i was too lazy to log in but, oh-my-fucking-god, i had to review for that chap. just one thought was going through my head when all of interrogations and such was going on: this. is. fucking. awesome. it's like a uchiha mafia in this bitch! ^__^ fricking itachi and SASUKE! totally awesome chap despite the current situation! i would have never noticed the shortness compared to the last chap if you didn't say something in your a/n. fucking sasuke's crazy ass! *glomps him* his methods of getting information inspire me something fierce. wow. the next chapter is gonna be a one remember. ok, my rant is over. i'm so gonna bug my friend in CA and make sure she's reading this. looking foward to your next update whenever that maybe. have a great day . keep up the wonderful work!

    ~Devious
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  • From Infek on April 07, 2008
    O_o Fuck, this is incredibly exciting. I had to read it in one go, I just couldn't stop.
    I love your depiction of Itachi and SasuNaru is a wonderful pairing in this story.
    I do hope all will be well with them...
    Looking forward to an update!
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  • From Deandraquin on April 07, 2008
    I really love this story, it's one of my favorites. I can't wait for the next chappie.
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on April 07, 2008
    I love you. and by love you I mean I love your brain for coming up with this story. SasuNaru is love. (as is ItaNaru) and Itachi is a great and awesome devil. And Sasuke as mad as he was in this chapter was sexy. Evil!Sasuke is always fun. I look forward to the next chapter. Crazy!Naruto or not...cause he is fun too...
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  • From Jelp on April 07, 2008
    I should be in bed right now, but I saw the update, and said to myself, "If I get all my work done by 11:30, I will treat myself and read this tonight!" Looking forward to reading this chapter helped me get through all of my work, so thank you very much!

    I really enjoyed this chapter, especially the I-am-even-scarier-than-Itachi Sasuke moments. Then it was nice and sweet at the end where Sasuke and Naruto had that mental thing going. So great! Looking forward to the next chapter! :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - DARKON on April 06, 2008
    DAMN! I knew it! The snake-bastard lives!! I hope Naruto won't be in his clutches for very long.

    A VERY, VERY PISSED off Sasuke is really SCAREY. I wouldn't want to be in Orochimaru's shoes right now.
    I think that there will be no doubt of his death if Sasuke gets his hands on him.

    Excelent fic. I am enjoying this fic a lot. Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon.



    DARKON
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