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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - Damp on April 17, 2008
    Is Orichimaru going to get killed? Because I think he deserves to be tortured and then killed slowly and painfully. -.-

    -Damp *Yes, killed slowly and painfully.*
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  • From Vox on April 17, 2008
    *squeals!* I'm in love. With the story, with your characters, with you.. Are you available? ^^

    It was great. I'm loving what's coming - otherwise known as, "We FINALLY get lemon!". Thank you and love you.

    Oh yea, if you get the time, post this over on y!Gallery. Plenty of people would love to read this. There's a link to mine in my profile, so you can drop me a line.

    Love!
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  • From Jiro on April 17, 2008
    Nice action sequence! Wow, think what would have happened if Sasuke had waited an extra 15 minutes *shudders* Hooray for happy endings!

    P.S. I *loved* Itachi's warning: "Be careful, little brother, that when this is over that you are still a man Naruto can love.” I swooned at that. BRILLIANT! Can I be your groupie?
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  • From gaara89 on April 17, 2008
    More!! I need more!!!!!!
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  • From charmpit on April 17, 2008
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

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  • From hieisdragoness18 on April 17, 2008
    oh man! wow! normally i don't review on aff but i frickin LOVE this story. itachi being the "devil", naruto and sasuke "minons", GARRA and the others " Duckies" its just too damn funny!!!!! i mean so many time since i strted to read this i've been rolling around laughing so hard i cry. i think my favorite line is when in chapter 11 sasuke says to itachi " Put on you Evil Lord of Darkness panties" or something like that. i laughed so hard when i read that that i woke my mom up. please update soon


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  • From Kimra on April 17, 2008
    Awesome. I like when people stop bad things from happening. :D
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  • From crazychemgeek on April 17, 2008
    Yay Sasuke has rescued Naruto, now it's time for his "reward!" ???
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  • From despairs on April 17, 2008
    Yay! Naruto wasnt raped, Sasuke wasnt raped...Itachi was making grown men wanna cower n cry...Chrissy is a very happy girl! :D
    I love the way Sasuke went right to Naruto after the snake bastard was shot. And I love the way Itachi already refers to
    Naruto as his bro-in-law. lol it was cool seeing Mr. Uchiha lose his composure ever so slightly and showed his human side, even
    if it did kinda freak Kakashi and Iruka out a bit :P Ugh but the only thing is Orochimaru isnt dead..they shouldve shot him in
    head...or the groin area at least...if he didnt have that particular part of his anatomy anymore maybe he would threaten less people.
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  • From Gwyllion on April 16, 2008
    OH SWEET HEAVENLY LORD! This was such a fantastic read that I'm literally incoherent! O__O I practically cried and laughed in every chapter (not in that order) in reading this. The way you wrote Kakashi and Iruka as Naruto's adoptive fathers were my MOST FAVORITE parts. Especially on Kakashi's undying commitment, love, pain and suffering for his Sunshine. Absolutely BEAUTIFUL! It's so long since I've read a long and amazing fics such as yours. Would you so happen to be in Yaoi!Gallery? I swear, you have fans flocked over there and I just want to pass that message along. Once again, thank you for sharing this wonderful fic. I love it so very much. Please do keep up the awesome work! Will wait patiently for more future posts. ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!
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  • From SDRR on April 14, 2008
    I'm like, totally addicted to this story. Love it!
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  • From masteryoshi88 on April 13, 2008
    What happen next? You have to write another chapter, please?
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  • From ANON - naylezkiesqy on April 13, 2008
    this story is genius.., so please please pretty please.., don't rush things up.., don't end it all too quickly., we all love a never ending suspense.., besides, this story is too good., i don't want it to end..,
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  • From on April 11, 2008
    OMG! I TAKE BACK MY LAST REVIEW! I WAS RIGHT! ITACHI IS GOOD.
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  • From crazychemgeek on April 11, 2008
    You just keep on writing more and more fantastic chapters. Everytime I think it can't be topped I end up laughing my ass off.

    “So stop the big brother shit, put on your evil, lord of the darkness panties and find out who took my goddamn dobe!”

    Possibly the best line ever, although Kisame's line "Isn't he supposed to be your innocent little brother?" was gold too. Can't wait for the next chapter, looking forward to seeing Sasuke sweep in and rescue Naruto
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