Click Here!

Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From Gwyllion on April 19, 2008
    OOooooooHHHH!!! A new chappie! yay! What a lovely surprise this morning! :DDD This one really gripped me. Such an intense and long awaited part too. I'm so glad that both teams came out unscathed...well.....minus the injuries of course. Hope Oro suffers hard and long after this is over. Please! I hope you will be adding more flashbacks of Naruto when he was younger. I just can't enough of our little sunshine with his dada and papa. So friggin' ADORABLE! My teeth just hurts from all that sugar coating. ;) Once again, thank you so much for updating. It totally made my day! Please keep up the great work! :D
    Report Review

  • From Lechan on April 18, 2008
    Again you leave me speechless. I knew Naruto had to be saed but still I was on the edge of my seat in antisipation. I Really do love the Uchiha Mafia that's going on, Kisame rocks my socks and NAruto's impromptue singing was to die for. I was waiting for "The song that has no end" and "I know a Song that gets on everybodies Nerves" ^-^ I was amazed and I really love how you depict Naruto. I hope this gets updated soon, even knowing that it was just updated I can't wait for more. Selfish? Perhaps but damn you have made me an addict. Woot, I can't wait for the family reunion and for the Smut that sould come around soon, not to mention the fact that duckies still have to see them and then Sasuke and NAruto seriously have to get married... OOH I cna't wait. Also, I adore the way you wrote Itachi in this one. I must say I am most impressed with him and his character. His chilren are well written and for being OC's they make me smile and again I am in Awe. Once more, love your story endlessly, and hopefullly I'll see an update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Missy on April 18, 2008
    Must....have.....MOREEEEEE!!!!! :P
    Report Review

  • From sonotgoingthere on April 18, 2008
    I'm trying to decide what I like more - the plot, the writing, or the emails from Sasuke & Naruto to Itachi (which are brilliant!).

    Great story! I looking forward to the next chapter!
    Report Review

  • From nyge98 on April 18, 2008
    I trully LOVE this story. I can't wait till the next chapter.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - animelover on April 18, 2008
    ya know, reading this fic just totally wipes me out. wow!!!!!!!!! and i just love happy endings. then again, there's that angst, sadness, with a side of waff thing you've got going. geez, you're just flipping brilliant!

    don't know how many chappies are left, but it's been a sweet ride so far .. thanks!

    oh, and i just luuuuuuved the "itachi giving sasuke advice" bit. ;-)
    Report Review

  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on April 17, 2008
    ack. you evil, evil person you. leaving it there...ack.

    really good chapter though. i loved all the interactions. kakashi/iruka/fugaku, sasuke/kisame/itachi, etc....
    Report Review

  • From Raholea on April 17, 2008
    *cries* poor poor naruto. but at least he's relatively safe now, with the Uchihas, and can be loved and coddled back to health. i hope you have a really happy ending planned for this!!!!!
    Report Review

  • From Imagy on April 17, 2008
    NOOOOO
    THE EMOTIONAL TERMIOL!
    it's been cut off!
    how ever shall we survive?!?!
    I looking forawrd to seeing how everyone will react!
    will they finally admit that they're in love with each other?
    will a confession even be nessecary?
    what happens next?!?
    I can't wait to find out!
    'til then, lovely ^0^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 17, 2008
    Amazing chapter! I loved hte fight scene. I'm so glad Naruto and Sasuke are reunited :)

    Please update soon!
    Report Review

  • From Jelp on April 17, 2008
    YAY! Sasuke to the rescue! ^_^ I'm so glad that Orochimaru didn't have time to do anything to Naruto. That would have scarred him a bit much. Now Sasuke and Naruto really do need to consumate things in the next chapter...right? Right? PLEASE?!?!?!? I'm sure I'm not the only one begging for some smut in the next chapter.

    Even if there's no smut, this story is so great that it definietly makes up for it. :-) ~ Jelp
    Report Review

  • From ANON - qwerty on April 17, 2008
    Yay! They're safe!!!! That was intense. Great chapter!!
    update!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sancta on April 17, 2008
    :Worships:
    Report Review

  • From spoon10488 on April 17, 2008
    Whoa very thrilling chapter. Yeah Kabuto's dead and that snake ass is hurt. I hope they don't take he to the same hospital as Naruto and Sasuke. I loved this chapter. I can't wait to read more.
    =)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anassa Thalassa on April 17, 2008
    :) you updated! Love the story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!