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Reviews for The Demilitarized Zone

By : lexjamandme
  • From Jelp on May 12, 2008
    OF COURSE WE WANT AN EPILOGUE! :-)

    Amazing! I love how Naruto came back to Sasuke at night and did his whole introduction thing. :-) I really enjoyed the e-mails and text messages throughout this entire fic, and I especially love how you put them in to show how the story was moving forward without breaking things up too much. Well written, and nicely done!

    I really do hope you have an epilogue. Update soon! ~ Jelp
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  • From shadowsonata on May 12, 2008
    Would I read it? Does 'hell yes' answer your question? LOL. I. Love. You! This fic has so many great moments in it. And the text messages? Pure comical genius! I look forward to reading more fics from you.
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  • From nyge98 on May 08, 2008
    That was so beautiful. I will cry when this story ends.
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  • From blueh on May 04, 2008
    this story is just beyond.... AMAZING! not forgetting, HOT too!!! I love the way you piece the characters. Especially Itachi - the Devil, Lucifer, Lou!, Sasuke and Naruto - the minions (LOL), and lastly... the duckies! Seriously... genius. I adore your other stories too! I have yet to start on All the Small Things just cuz I can't find enough time to even rest, not to mention to read. I can't wait for the last chapter and epilogue.
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  • From ANON - poke_the_kitty@hotmail.com on April 30, 2008
    *has a seizure and dies*

    Oh Em GEE!! That was so good, I think I might have drooled on my keyboard a little. XD

    Keep going sooo good. *shakes fist*
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  • From LindyStar on April 29, 2008
    *throws back her citrus....ahhhh, so refreshing, but it didn't cool me down a bit!* Lovely. Gaara is my hero for this line, “Would you like to hear what is ‘fated’ for you later today?” LULZ. And of course, our brotherly love interactions are priceless.
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  • From Jelp on April 28, 2008
    As usual, I loved the chapter!

    I loved your little disclaimer at the beginning about the lemonade. :-) Made me giggle. Actually, it came out more like a delightfully, wicked cackle, but giggle sounds so much nicer!

    This part made me cack---er---giggle again: “Dobe,” Sasuke said grateful that his voice sounded normal, “I can see your ass.”

    I don't quite know what to make of the laughing sound that came out of my mouth with this: "You goddamn, son of a bitch, asshole. Die. Die. Die." Followed up by: "P.S. I am telling mother you called her a bitch."

    I did notice an error in your story, one I've made before that people have corrected me on. I felt the need to let you know that this is not correct: "Naruto arched violently when the bundle of nerves deep in his body was brushed." It's not a bundle of nerves. It's the prostrate which means it's a gland, not a bundle of nerves. Common fandom error.

    Loved, loved, loved the sex scene! Beautifully written. Looking forward to the last chapter and epilogue! :-) ~ Jelp

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  • From ANON - animelover on April 28, 2008
    OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! whew! that was so flippin' hilarious! itachi needs to be slapped, HARD!!! taking pictures, sending employees over at inappropriate moments, texting? it was just too much, and the lemonade made me pucker before it really hit the glass (you KNOW what I mean!).

    sigh, what a way to start a week. honestly, if you'll give me po box address and a promise to send me an autographed, spiral-bound copy, there $100K in Monopoly money on its way to you. ;-)

    you so rock! can't wait to read the final chapters. oh, and please let orochi get assassinated or something (he didn't pay pein's fee!) for real this time.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 28, 2008
    Beautiful, funny, perfect and breath-taking. All of these describe this chapter.

    I was so happy when everybody was reunited, and I absolutely cracked up at the line, "The scarred man smirked before looking at the occupants in the bed, “Hello, law abiding citizens,” his gaze shifted to the three Uchihas, “Marginally law abiding citizens,” and then his eyes fell on Kisame, “… citizen.”"

    I literally had to go back three times and read it again. Hilarious.

    And the way Sasuke was so possessive over his name being on Naruto's back made me positively giddy. Lastly, the long-awaited smut was simply perfectl. So well done. All the emotions, descriptions, and dialogue fit the scene wonderfully. And you definitely did not dissapoint in the sexyness factor.

    I loved it. Please update soon!

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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on April 28, 2008
    That lemon had me impersonating Iruka in episode 1 when Naruto pulled the Sexy Jutsu. And I laughed my ass off at the Text Messages. Ibiki's line about law abiding citizens etc. etc. was brilliant! Oh this chapter was just a barrel of smexy fun mixed with a slight worry. I have a nasty feeling that Orochi-slime is gonna make one more appearance, hopefully he'll die in a horrible way this time like falling into a vat of acid or being crushed by part of a falling building. Itachi as always is a hoot, you write him in all his Dark Lord-ness so very well.
    Excellent chapter, I'll be waiting for the next with blinding anticipation. Oh and you deserve cookies for that lemon (sends you cookies and chocolate and dragon snacks for Fluffy)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 28, 2008
    YAY!!! I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!! SasuNaru... yum!
    So good. The text messages between Itachi and Sasuke were funny as hell.
    *gives 100 cookies* Enjoy!
    update!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on April 28, 2008
    ahhhhh!!!! so good I had to read it twice!!!!! LOOOOOOVE it. Thanks soo much. Can't wait for the next one!!! This is my favorite fic out right now!!! luv ya your slave
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  • From ANON - Amnestria on April 28, 2008
    I really really really LOVE this story. I'm your fan. Good job, continue please.
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  • From animeaddict666 on April 28, 2008
    How you managed to make Naruto and Sasuke sickly sweet and in character is beyond me. Loved it. Hot. I am so very glad your writing one more chapter. You sure do deliver! Keep up the great work.

    ~AA666
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  • From ANON - Catherine on April 28, 2008
    yay!! for lemonade,

    I must admit after reading your warning at the top, I was waiting for the happy lemonyness,

    It was like O_o in the hospital bed?... no? in the car? ... no...? where? and then it was yes! its finally happening! but the duckies!
    Love it!
    Thanks so much for this chapter!

    This story has quickly become my favorite sasu/naru story!

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