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Reviews for Pictures

By : Totaltruth
  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Interesting beginning. . . . I like how you snuck in the first-person. . . . Okay, I’m a little confused as to who’s narrating. But it’s still really good. Kinda eerie (but that’s what you were going for ^_~). . . . Oh, okay, the POV is switching. Cool. . . . Some of this jumping around is confusing me. When/Where/Who??? ?_?'
    Interesting how you put the lyrics as dialogue.
    Very poetic. . . . Huh? Are they having sex after all? How did it jump to that? I didn’t see it! õ_õ
    Okay, I like it, I like it.

    Interesting! I’ve never read one like that! I was a little confused, but it was kind of a good confusion. You might have achieved the goal you set in the A/N!
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  • From Telpei on February 04, 2008
    I really loved this story! You had me guessing the whole time as to who was the photographer and who was the muse. I think you definitely had the whole 'stalker' theme going very well, which was your intention I believe based on the song choice. I like how you worked the lyrics into the 'dialogue' of the story. I found this oneshot was really creatively written, and I truly enjoyed it! Awesome! :)
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  • From ANON - ursan-canine on January 23, 2008
    awesome. you definitely got the sensual-creepy thing going on. lovely lovely oneshot.
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  • From monrque on January 23, 2008
    that was very good it reminds me of something i would write. it was very poetic. I enjoyed reading it.
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  • From hikarichan20 on January 22, 2008
    I loved the way it read like poetry... or it sounded like poetry in my head... is was subtly erotic... not many people write eroticism well on this site... it's mostly just smut...but you write erotically very well. I loved it!
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  • From ANON - Damp on January 22, 2008
    What just happened??

    -lostANDconfused
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  • From spoon10488 on January 19, 2008
    very unique story.
    =)
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  • From Hen on January 18, 2008
    That was a pretty good AU. Now I totally want to hear that song!
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  • From MichiyoInue on January 17, 2008
    I actually kinda liked it. It is rather inspiring and I am now drawn to my sketch book. Keep on doing what you are doing, I love the symbolism, and gently drawn images you invoke.

    Dace
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