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Reviews for The Dance

By : SumiHatake
  • From ANON - Anise on April 30, 2008
    You updated! *snugsu* I was so happy to see a new chapter I've been wanting to see what happens next between these two :)
    This really isn't going to be easy for them is it, part of me thinks that Iruka should talk to Kakashi but judging by how their last conversation went that just might make things worse. I loved the little interaction with izu/ko/anko that makes me want to know just what it is they get up to on the weekends ;) Hopefully real life allows you some time to sit down and write because I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on April 29, 2008
    Welcome back to the land of writing. Nice chapter, man Kakashi is mad huh? Can't blame him. Iruka is really struggling to keep some resemblance of friendship with him. Was great to read the story again. Hope you can fit time in to write with as much work as you do. Take care.

    littleolmee
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  • From angeloffire015 on March 28, 2008
    so good, poor Iruka and Kakashi, can't wait for next chapter
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  • From ANON - Anise on February 18, 2008
    (3) I'm so happy you updated but this really wasn't a fun chapter was it, you certainly had an interesting take on Mizuki and Iruka's relationship. Mizuki's always portrayed as just outright evil but I like how you at least attempted to give him some redeeming qualities, he couldn't always have been all bad if Iruka liked him at one time. Poor Kakashi and Iruka though they're already screwing up and they've barely begun, can't wait to read what's coming! :)
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on January 31, 2008
    Hee, hee you were right I don't want to miss the smut. Well done! Hmm is it just me or is there two different points of view on this going on? I mean Iruka is a little hesitant about it at first until the lust takes over but it seemed Iruka was worried about it being a 'one night stand with a friend' while Kakashi was really possessive acting. The way you presented Kakashi it was like he seen this as a lot more than just a one night stand between friends. At one point he even was thinking of Iruka being his . . . 'Mine' . . . that is what he was thinking when they were moving towards having sex. Is this intended on your part? Is this going to be a problem in the future; like the next morning? If so lol this is going to be interesting as heck. Or am I reading too much into this?

    littleolmee
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on January 31, 2008
    Finally here. Well this is an interesting start. You described the dancing in a very hot way. Hee, hee their protecting one another from girls. I wonder what Tsunade wanted? Off to read ch 2.

    littleolmee
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  • From ANON - Anise on January 19, 2008
    You certainly don't waste any time do you, I love horny dirty talking Iruka! This was a very steamy chapter and as always I look forward to more :)
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  • From ANON - Awyr on January 16, 2008
    I like this! BTW, there ARE Iruka-screwed-up stories out there, but they're few and far between. It's great that that's what you're doing!
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  • From KareNeko77 on January 16, 2008
    Hey. Hey you. HEY! Don't toss that naked plot bunny out there and then just dangle a bit of the story as bait...we need more. More I tell you!I want to know how Iruka screws it up! You're right, this is not the usual pattern! Your readers will go mad with curiosity, especially with such a nicely-crafted scene to kick off the action. Please update soon, this is great! I'll just be sitting here twitching and chugging energy drinks in the meanwhile...grrrr.
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  • From ANON - Anise on January 16, 2008
    So nice to see you writing this pairing again, I saw you had a story about Gai and I just couldn't bring myself to read it, anything that might have to do with him and possibly sex just makes my brain hurt. But Iruka and Kakashi I don't hesitate at all and I loved how after dancing together just once they're already starting to feel possessive of each other. Such a fabulous first chapter they would be gorgeous out on a dance floor together, I look forward to seeing what your going to do after this start! ^_^
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