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Reviews for Assassin King

By : CassandraIncognito
  • From ANON - Lanie12777 on January 15, 2008
    I am really looking forward to reading more of this story, you've started it out great! Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon please!^_^
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  • From hisoka on January 15, 2008
    youve already caught my interest now im only hopping to find out who hes found that has piqued his interest.poor gai his death was for a noble cause,hope you update soon
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  • From KoibitoFemme on January 14, 2008
    Very cool I can't wait to see the pairing and the return of Naruto. When will he get the title of Prince I wanna know real soon so please update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - fan on January 14, 2008
    great fanfic
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  • From DesperadoSweetie on January 14, 2008
    Wow that was really good. I didn't expect it to be Orochimaru who was the Assassin King.

    It was sad that Arashi couldn't care for his son. I mean it wasn't his fault that his mother chose him over her own life. But I understand the grief he was facing. It wasn't very clear at the point that he was made 4th Assassin King if he had started to have some sort of relationship with Naruto or if he still just tolerated him by letting everyone else raise him. It felt like he did care for him or at least at some point he started to feel for his son otherwise he wouldn't have Naruto take his spot in the 12 elite.

    It was sad that Naruto really had no emotion for his father when he was kiiled but then again, as stated already, he never had a relationship with his father (or aleast it wasn't clear whether he did or not).

    Will Naruto meet someone to fall in love with and will that be Sasuke? I hope it will be, since you did not state what the pairing(s) will be.

    Great first chapter. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From DragonsDancers on January 14, 2008
    next ch naru/sasu? please
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  • From MoveThemHands on January 14, 2008
    *laughs* You are that~ cool!

    But oh my god, I almost started crying reading that one paragraph dedicated soully to explaining how everyone died...the way Tenten died is defiantly a way I can see it going down but damn woman! I know all the characters were minor and not really a paragraph to pay attention to but still *sniffles*

    This story is so awesome!! I can't wait for the update! >< Oro bastard and his lies!
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