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Reviews for The Canalized River

By : susanna
  • From LadyRonin on February 05, 2008
    i love how sasuke and naruto meet for the first time. especially how sasuke tells naruto to stay close to him so he can protect him (aww that is so sweet). can a chick say sugar shock alert. i have a feeling that itachi isn't dead yet and wait for his "surprise" resurrection. i have a feeling that the raven put them in an illusion as well so that they never really hit itachi with sasuke's illusion or naruto's winnd blade. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Halskr on February 05, 2008
    I am a little confused by the speed you pull everyone together here. Are all of the characters in one location? Or, are there seperate battles being fought in different spots? I got the impression that Sasuke split the team up a bit, but he is aware that the others are fighting. Other than that, I liked the chapter and your guesses as to what is happening in the manga. All I can say about that is I really cant wait till the next episode to find out what happens.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 04, 2008
    another great chapter. i will hold off on the questions for now and wait and see if sasuke and naruto meet in the next chapter (becausee of course i can't wait til that happens). i wonder how the new humbled uchiha is going to act when they talk for the first time. can't wait til the next update.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 03, 2008
    i was just making sure that i am not being discouraging or troublesome with all the questions that i ask. repentant and guilty sasuke is a sexy sasuke by the way (i really liked this chapter). i just have one qucik question and that is if naruto has kuutbis advanced senses and has tracking sasuke for two days why hasn't he caught him yet (he's not that bad of a ninja you know). i hope that i am conveying my love of this story correctly and i can't wait to see the next thrilling chapter.
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  • From spoon10488 on February 02, 2008
    I just read the next chapter. It is cool, too. I hope Naruto's deal with Kyubi doesn't go sour.
    =)
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  • From monrque on February 02, 2008
    So is Naruto going to use the key.
    Would not it be foolish of him not to.
    or is he not going to for right know.

    I know that i would use it. I for one would not want to go
    mad if i did not have to
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  • From dkf on February 02, 2008
    I meant Card, not Car. I'm typo city lately...Awesome chapter :3.
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  • From spoon10488 on February 02, 2008
    I'm glad Sasuke's team followed him. I hope they find Naruto soon.
    Cool chapter. Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From LadyRonin on February 02, 2008
    first i want to say sorry if it seemed like i was complaining. it's just that i am a reader who likes to ask questions because i want all of them answsered (as much as possible anyway) by the end of the story. like why doesn't kuuybi want naruto to use the key. will he not be able to reunite with his other half if he does. why if he really is the light ( i thought you might throw that n there for a twist) isn't he a little nicer. i can't wait to see how you did the pein and jiraiya fight. also since the uchiha know so much about the kuuybi can sasuke differenciate between the light and the dark. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 01, 2008
    another great chapter. when i thought on how you was potraying sasuke as rash and immature is in actuality the way he is (canon) on the inside even though kis---(bad speller) would never put it out there like that i believe that the hints are there if you look for it (avid rereader) and you have it right on the money. the way he ran to oochimaru and how he keeps following his big brother around for vengence just proves it, but it wasn't until i aw your story that i realized thanks for that. my one quick question is how did sakura not see sasuke save naruto, where was she at. if she is a ninja why would she turn away from the enemy. since she say naruto when he transformed shouldn't she be used to seeing it. why is sasuke so fearful of being caught by kakshi, isn't he techinally strronger than him. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From dkf on February 01, 2008
    YAY~! HEBI FIC~! Not enough Hebi fic in the world. I love this so much.

    ...canibeyourslavepleaseXD?
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  • From dkf on February 01, 2008
    Wild Car Hebi eh? I like that.
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  • From lexjamandme on February 01, 2008
    And just like that Sakura has been redeemed. I am such a fickle soul apparently.
    I can't wait until they find Naruto. I excited to see have Team Hebi interacts. I think he'll be a marvelous addition to their functioning disfunction.
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  • From lexjamandme on January 31, 2008
    And today's lesson little Naruto shall be about a little thing called 'stranger danger'.
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  • From spoon10488 on January 31, 2008
    Awesome chapter(s). I first one kind of faked me out. I was like, 'wow that was very summarized' but I got the point so it was good. I wonder what Sasuke's new plans are. I hope his team still follows him.
    Naruto was lucky to run into a friend of ero-sennin. I wonder what the message is? I guess I'll find out later.
    Great as usual. Can't wait for more.
    =)
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