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Reviews for The Canalized River

By : susanna
  • From LadyRonin on February 13, 2008
    i thought the legend was the real one (stupid me) because i remember hearing or reading it somewhere but once i got to the author's note i was like oh yeah it did not say anything about the same sexes (nice yaoi vamp on an old legend). i like how you are getting them to realize the importance of the other. sometimes in oder to get to the sexin people speed things up but i much prefer to have actual story then read pointless or useless smut (although on occasion everything is all good). what about the teams that went to help jiraiya will they be reappearing in the story again or was it when sasuke spoke to sakura. what about jiraiya are sasuke and naruto going to go and help him only to arrive to late. i can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From dkf on February 13, 2008
    I dunno. I think he'd miss Iruka at least a little :P.
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  • From dkf on February 13, 2008
    KYUUBI. ZOMG *Dies* ...yes, i know. It killed people. On command though. Its a fox, I love foxes. kyuubicute. squee.
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  • From lexjamandme on February 12, 2008
    Okay. First this line gave me shivers. Amazing insight that I have never seen put into words. Absolutely perfect:

    Everyone admires him for his courage, Sasuke thought, and nobody realizes that he is just not able to see any danger.

    Interesting descriptions of both of the inner 'workings'. I also liked their individual thought and attempts in comforting one another. As always an excellent update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 12, 2008
    Another great chapter! Please continue!!
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  • From LadyRonin on February 12, 2008
    i like the idea of everyone having a happy place to go to and that sasuke's was starting to freezeover (i thought that was true to life). thanks for answering my question about the title. i can't wait til the next update.
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  • From dkf on February 12, 2008
    Chp 28 Banter was adorable XD. I really like that Suigetsu talked Kisame out of fighting btw. Ch 29 was nice in that Sasuke and Naruto have obviiusly changed...but I think they can still be friends/more. Heh. Naruto, pot calling kettle. Ch 30 - YAY JUUGO. SQUEE. CH 31 Awe, Sasuke has some decency XD. heheheh.
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  • From lexjamandme on February 12, 2008
    Okay... seriously... I check the 'new' stories everyday and still I missed one? How? But again... more for today I guess.
    I actually have a lot to comment on, your story always gets me thinking, but now I find I'm too tired to do more than say keep up the amazing work. I look forward to the next and I loved the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto. When Naruto was questioning Sasuke's position as leader... very well written.
    I'm write a much better review next time... I promise.
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  • From spoon10488 on February 11, 2008
    very interesting Kyubi isn't sealed any more. hmmmmm. What happens next. Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2008
    I'm glad they were able to help save Juugo. I like him. I'm just surprised that Kyuubi actually helped save his life? Maybe it due to Nartuo's and Sasuke's influence? I hope so. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From leanne on February 11, 2008
    I though some of the story I don't like. I do however like your story despite what I dont' like. Hopefully this comment makes some sense probably doesn't I don't make sense when it's 4am. I just want to see where you are going withthis story and the relationship with Naruto and Sasuke. I love how you are taking it slowly. the thing that drives me nuts is the way you end the story at it's flowing, I dislike cliff hangers of any kind ggrr! so please continue to write even if you drive me nuts with cliff hangers.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 11, 2008
    oh my gosh the suspense. why did the black stuff flow to kuubyi to be eaten i do not think that is good. isn't that stuff supposed to be homicidal urges. what will that do to the kuubyi. will it weaken the seal and that's why he decided to help. how was naruto able to move around and get karin if sasuke was in his mind and the kuubyi was in juugo's. i really can't wait to see the next chapter now.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 10, 2008
    and there we have it the beauty that is touching between two sexy boys and looking forward to more intimate sights in the future. and i am not talking about physical intimacy (although that would be nice) but emotional closeness. i can't wait to see the nxt chapter.
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  • From ANON - Halskr on February 10, 2008
    Thanks for the updates. I really liked these last couple of chapters. Everything was much clearer. The part with Karin and Suigetsu was well thought out and funny. I really hope that hebi sticks around in the manga.
    Thanks for sharing
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2008
    I'm glad that Sasuke and Naruto are getting closer and are actually talking instead of fighting. Hurry with the next chapter!!!!
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