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Reviews for The Canalized River

By : susanna
  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2008
    Oh no!! What will happen now? I have faith that the rest of the Sasuke and the team will save Naruto and break the genjutsu. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Sabine on February 17, 2008
    Keep up with the good work! You are truely an amazing and talented writer. I love this story and I love the fact that I don't have to wait that long to be able to read a new chapter. Take care! Huggies
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  • From mrk33 on February 17, 2008
    The story is progressing extremely well. I love the fact that you went awy from the typical good versus evil.
    This is refreshing. It would be nice if the manga followed suit.
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  • From dkf on February 17, 2008
    Awe ;.;.
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  • From ammay on February 16, 2008
    holey shit i love the godamned stuff you write i never knew i could read well or type good while im drunk off my ass but ill sit around and read your works all night!!!! yeah lets get wasted!!!! whahooo keep the stories up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 16, 2008
    That's the way Naruto! Will Sasuke kiss Naruto? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From lexjamandme on February 16, 2008
    I love this story, but it is so detail and so throught provoking that I can't do anything else while I'm readng it and when someone else makes me try I get... very cranky.
    The last line was beautiful of course. I adored Sasuke 'growth',for lack of a better word, throughout this chapter.
    Oh and favorite line:
    The words were meant for Naruto, but Sasuke also heard the words that Suigetsu had not spoken aloud: “We should have picked you up much earlier.” When would the grudge wear off?

    It's just that you have made his team a joy to read... for the first time. Until the next.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 16, 2008
    yeah finally together and the iceman crackth. i like how sasuke in actiality likes sweets but doesn't eat them in remeberence of his aunt and uncle it shows another side of the old avenger and matyr denying himself (which is so the bible). i am sad cause i guess we are nearing the end you did say that this story was 36 pages long (unlessluclily you extended by some chapter). sometimes the less questions i ask mean that the story chapter had answered them all and possibly some previous ones as any good author would (that would be you) and tighned up the loose ends. i can't wait to see the enxt chapter.
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  • From ANON - Halskr on February 16, 2008
    Well thanks for the update. I haven't been missing; instead, I decided to read several chapters at a time since most of the questions I end up with get answered like in the next chapter. The bit about the dark half of the Kyuubi is well thought out. Is this part a guess on your part or is it part of the manga. I know the manga mentions that Naruto has the light half, but I dont remember any mention as to the other part. Anyway, it is a creative way of explaining it nontheless. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From LadyRonin on February 15, 2008
    i think it was very canon to have naruto look at juugo talk with him and then state to himself i didn't have it as bad as i thought. this shows juugo in a way that i have never thought of before. i never think of what his life what like before he was with oochimaru and this made me do so and i thank you for that (anyone who can help me think outside of the norm is always good to me). was the black cloud that was inside of juugo kuubyi's dark half or did the darkness that was inside of juugo just act like a replacement since it had the same content. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From dkf on February 15, 2008
    I think Juugo and Naruto would get along, personally...
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  • From LadyRonin on February 14, 2008
    another great chapter. i haveesome questions but i will wait to see how the next chapter plays out toa sk them. i really like this story and can't wait til the next chapter.
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  • From dkf on February 14, 2008
    That wait and see worries me XD. Interesting how Naruto's sorta anti-gay yet loves Sasuke..
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2008
    I'm glad Juugo and Kyuubi are both doing ok. Also happy that Naruto is staying with Sassuke and his team. He's better off with them than with Kohona. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From lexjamandme on February 13, 2008
    I love the baby steps they are taking, watching them grow older, more mature, more together... and the legends were brilliant.
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