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Reviews for A Long Time Coming

By : KoibitoFemme
  • From himesamadakko on January 21, 2008
    GYAHAHAHAHAHA!!! THE SMUT WAS GREAT. THE ANGST WAS GREAT! AND KIBA WAS JUST GREAT! I WON'T BE VISITING FOR A WHILE HAAA... PLEASE READ MY NEWLY POSTED STORY. A STORY IN THE SAKURA ROOM. WEHEH, I HAVENT' HAD THE TIME TO EDIT THE SMUT YET, BUT I'M WORKING ON IT!!!
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  • From ANON - ciera on January 12, 2008
    Hey, I loved your story too many drinks. As soon as I finished it, I went looking for this story. = ) That song you put on here is by System of a Down. Just thought I'd let you know that. Oh, and I look forward to more great stories by you!
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  • From solitare1 on January 12, 2008
    I for one loved this short story. And I'm glad you gave in to your friend and put the part in you hated. It really made the story better(even if you hated it). I'll be looking forward to the next installment of your series and finding out if Neji can handle Menma and whst Naruto is having this time. JA

    Good luck with your move and BE SAFE!
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  • From MoveThemHands on January 12, 2008
    AHHHHHH I LOVE YOU!!!

    This story was just perfect! The flashback did make me cry and sometimes I say I'm near to tears or that was really sad but this trully got me crying!

    Great great job!

    *laughs* The best ending ever!! XDD

    At first I wasn't going to read this, I kept passing over it and going "bleh" then I decided to read it after the reviews it got and I'm soooooo glad I did!
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on January 12, 2008
    Thank you so so so so so so so much. I am sorry for the heart ache you went through to write this for me, But please know I am grateful. I myself have lost three babies to miscarriages. You must of known that, cause I truly felt this story was written for me. I believe I told you of my misfortunes when your family were going through there loss. I loved this story every moment of it. The fight the angst the humor the lemon it was all great and exactly what I would have asked for if I was holding your hand as you wrote it. Thank you so so so so much.
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on January 12, 2008
    YAY!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!! The ending was so funny, but the flashback nearly had me in tears. It was really, really sad. It is hard to make me cry, too. You managed to do another great story, and I am paitently awaiting the next.
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  • From himesamadakko on January 12, 2008
    crap... this one's good, i would have liked to co=write this, you know, add some more angst to wrench their guts? well anway good job on this one!
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  • From mls on January 11, 2008
    I Loved It!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!
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