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Reviews for Stripped Bare

By : emeraldfire84
  • From Sexgoddess2110 on March 02, 2008
    Phew done! hehe Read all 6 chappies in one day I loved it! I can't wait for her debut haha Love your original characters and the slow development between Kakashi and Sakura but I hope he doesn't end his 'dry spell' with some slutty girl that'll suck ass. well Hope sakura knocks Kakashi for a loop when he sees her peform. Update when you can please

    Loves Arry
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  • From ANON - Mizu Bushin on March 02, 2008
    Oh, I was so happy when I saw you updated! I like how it teeters on the edge of sex, yet it's all very beautiful. I dunno, but I LOVE how you write!
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  • From Imagy on March 02, 2008
    Wonderful~!
    ^o^
    I can't wait until Sakura actually starts dancing in front of people...
    so, update soon, lovey~!
    :D
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  • From ANON - angel on March 02, 2008
    thank you for updating. I was going crazy waiting and checking every day. lol

    It's nice to see that the other girls are helping Sakura and giving her confidence.

    Kakashi's got it bad. lol Don't think him picking up another girl is going to help him forget about Sakura. lol

    Looking forward to see Sakura dancing with Kakashi watching. lol
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  • From Tricia1224 on March 01, 2008
    I love it that the other girls gave her pointers. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From EroSage on March 01, 2008
    cant wait for the sex (if there is any?? is there plz tell me there is....!!)
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  • From ANON - puppydog on February 27, 2008
    It is pretty good! Keep it coming!
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  • From melvin3228 on February 22, 2008
    This is killing me I need more!!!!!
    I love it so far!!!
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  • From tamiri on February 12, 2008
    Good job, this chapter definitely set the environment Sakura was going in. Can't wait till the next chapter where sakura actually strips...wonder how Kakashi will react? Jelousy? Rage?
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  • From Tricia1224 on February 11, 2008
    This chapter was awesome. I like how you have the other girls portrayed. That makes the owner seem like he has more of a heart. Then there is trouble with a capital T. I am looking forward to the next chapter to this story.
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  • From Lunar84 on February 11, 2008
    I really enjoyed this chapter. It gave us a look at the type of club, personalities of girls, and the owner Sakura is going to be dealing with. Though something about the "star diva" is rather suspicious. I'm glad Sakura encountered a relatively friendly environment. I have a feeling though "Pinky" is going to become quite famous really soon. At least I hope so anyway. I wonder who was in the front row eyeing Kit? Could it be a kidnapper? Or perhaps was it Kakashi?


    Details were superb. I only noticed one spelling mistake. It was in the first few paragraphs and I believe you meant to type "they" not "the"
    Chapter flowed beautifully. I know sometimes school and work have a way of slowing things down. I'm looking forward to the next chapter as usual. Please update when time permits.

    Also looking forward to more Sakura/kakashi sexual tension!!!! ~_^


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  • From ANON - angel on February 11, 2008
    yay! another update!

    I know you had a rough time with this chapter but I just wanted to say, I like it. :)

    so Sakura had no idea that she had to take off her top. Guess Kakashi has some explaining to do! lol Wonder if she will get a quick lesson from Kakashi or have one of the girls help her out and watch Kakashi get an eyeful. lol

    anyway, have a feeling that Sakura is going to take the spotlight from that girl so she needs to watch her back. :(

    Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From Imagy on February 10, 2008
    wow....
    can't wait to see what happens next, lovey~!
    :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2008
    The wait was worth it! Very nice job!! Can't wait for the next chappy!! I just love this pairing...okay Sakura just sounds good with everyone...maybe not Neji...well yeah but no! Anyway, nice writing!

    P.S. You are a great fic writer and I have seen your reviews for other authors. It is because of this that I ask you for help! I read a fic here...I am almost positive, about Naruto and Sakura. Naruto comes back after 6 years of training with Jiraya. He and all the rookie 9, minus 1 are all 20. He is depicted as sauve...and cool! He fights off an ANBU who still sees him as the 9 tail, Ino is with Shika, Shino is engaged to Hinata. It was 2 chapters long so far. If you see anything like this can you email me? PLEASE!! My email is not hidden but just in case .

    Thanks and keep up the good work!!
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  • From undercoverfreak on February 03, 2008
    so awesome chapter, and don't worry about taking time, I am also a student and work so I know how busy things can get. Loved the chapter, espcially sakura's mirror performance, and the arousal scene, so awesome!! Jo
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