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Reviews for Stripped Bare

By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - Hatake Sienna on April 25, 2008
    This is so exciting XD I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon >.
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  • From ANON - zvyx on April 22, 2008
    Well I've just finished the story up to chapter 8, taking up 5 hours of my time. I've got to say though, that was one of the most worthwhile 5 hours I've ever spent reading. Brilliant writing that really captures the innocence of Sakura and the abrupt situation she is thrust into. All the characters all believable, and I love the way you are handling the shift between Kakashi and Sakura. To be honest, I really can't think of a way to improve your writing; I'm sure others who are more qualified can, but I think you have a natural talent and knack for creative writing. This has been one of the few fiction pieces on AFF that have really made a lasting impact on my mind, and I thank you for it. On another note, I visited your livejournal today, and am truly sorry about your current situation. I hope it all improves for you, and good luck for final exams =)
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  • From mkakashi22 on April 22, 2008
    A good start indeed. This story was definetly lengthy. You weaved an interesting story non the less.
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  • From Yuikey on April 18, 2008
    Chapter 8

    That great chapter. Sakura lap dance was pretty good.
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  • From ANON - Zee on April 15, 2008
    I don't think I've reviewed this before, but I've been following it for the last few chapters. I really love the idea, and you're a really good writer! It's nice to see a story that's hot with a plot. (Which sounds really silly now that it managed to rhyme itself, lol)

    Keep writing, I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From tasukigirl on April 15, 2008
    I'm totally loving the sexual tension between Sakura and Kakashi. I really hope we get to see more of them together down the line. Also, one thing that struck me as off about it is that I don't think Sakura would be entirely uncomfortable being naked around just the girls. Japan is the land of onsen and public baths. Sure you're self conscious at first, but after 5 minutes of being in a room/bath full of naked women, it rubs off. I think she would be much more self conscious in front of men. But nudity in general isn't as big a deal in Japan as it is in more heavily Christian countries.
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  • From ANON - faye_tatsu on April 15, 2008
    Great story I really want to see how far kakashi is willing to go even though his thoughts are trying to push him to actaully wanting a lap dance its a great story please write more!
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  • From ANON - Mike on April 15, 2008
    Hey. Just wanted to let you know that as a fellow writer, I can appreciate the fact that there are people like you out there who put the effort in to make a DECENT story. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic, and I just wanted to say congrats on a stellar piece of work.

    Cheers.
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  • From AndDown on April 12, 2008
    Wow. This is something really original, and i can bet that you've put alot of work into it. I've been sitting here reading it for the past 3 hours, and it's almost 1AM! A fave of mine, no doubt about it!
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  • From nekomiko17 on April 11, 2008
    Another great chapter! I love how long they are! Can't wait till next time.... :P
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  • From Imagy on April 11, 2008
    wow
    nice updatee, babe
    Sakura is definately comming along nicely
    her initail extreme case of nievete (sp?) in the begining was kind of annoying
    it's great to see her becomming much more confident and aware
    I really hope that in the end when she goes back to Konoha
    she shows Sasuke exactly what he's been missing
    any who
    can't wait to see what'll happen next!
    'til next time, babe~!
    :3
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  • From ANON - Sam on April 10, 2008
    Great story. Keep it up.
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on April 10, 2008
    Still so freaking amazing and entertaining! I jump for joy every time I see this updated. Your setting huge standards for future Kakashi/Sakura fics for sure, simply awesome! I love the lap dance part thought she was going to get caught a few times lol. Too bad the guy was a dud and Tsu-whatever is shady I wonder what's up with that Hoe lol well update as soon as you can you have me quite addicted!

    Loves Arry
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  • From ANON - angel on April 09, 2008
    Yay you updated again and it was so worth it!

    Sam did well on her first lapdance..and seeing Kakashi get jealous is always a plus. lol Have to wonder if Sakura will be giving him one in the future and those booths..what makes me think there will be a situation where Kakashi/Sakura have to use it.

    anyay, I hope you enjoy your spring break and will be looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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  • From SweatyCup on April 09, 2008
    WOOOW...First lap dance went like THAT!!Whoa!Sakura IS a fast learner but DAMN she's doing it like a pro!And Kakashi is getting jealous!!But other than that I love your story its GOOD!Hope you post more soon!
    Love Always^
    ^DeiDei
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