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Reviews for Stripped Bare

By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - Johnn45 on July 15, 2008
    Love the story but it's been a while for a update so please continue with the great work.
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  • From LunayaWolf on July 15, 2008
    Update please~! I love this story and really want to see you continue this.
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  • From LadyPiro on July 12, 2008
    This is the best Kakashi/Sakura fic I've ever read. Please keep up the wonderful writing!!
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  • From ANON - Kittykaos on July 08, 2008
    I have really enjoyed "Stripped Bare". It has what I look for in any story. GREAT attention to detail and plot line. I hope to see more chapters in the future. Take your time and get them done the way you want them
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  • From ANON - Elayne on July 05, 2008
    Hi there, J-pop Princess. I started this comment over and over again, not knowing exactly how to begin and with what. On one hand I wanted to write something a little bit longer than 'Yey, that's fantastic, update quicker', from the other I felt a little stupid, because I didn't (and in fact I still don't) know if you read this stuff here and it seemed like most of the people satisfy themselves with a short comments. I saw you encourage comments so here I go. In fact I'd have written anyway...

    I'm not native in english therefore please don't mind the whole bunch of spelling mistakes and the awkward language I use.

    I found myself watching Naruto in the middle of june examinations, 10-14 days ago, I was bored to death from studying. Two days later I was already addicted and was drooling over Kakashi O_O. Honestly I didn't expect I'd like such a long anime and especially one that targets kids more or less. But it seems I was wrong ecpecially since I finished the 220 + 63 episodes in a week or so.

    My excitement with the anime and the obsession over Kakashi brought me here and I found myself reading various fanfics with him as a protagonist. I honestly didn't know he's usually paired with Sakura. At first I thought it's a strange couple, after all there's nothing going on between them in the series, hardly any interaction. Besides I thought almost everyone hated her character (that goes for my friends here). Actually I started to like her very much after she began to train under Tsunade in the series. After reading 4-5 fanfics about Kakashi x Sakura I started liking them immensely as a couple.

    I was really excited and impressed about this fanfic, it's different from the others and more in my liking. It has an actual plot that moves the story in a direction which is a good thing. Well it's not a Noble prize candidate either but it doesn't need to be ;). It gives a great number of opportunities for provocative scenes and happenings with the characters which the main purpose I think. Most of the fics I read were just plain and static, like pictures with no beginning and no end. There were no plot at all, just good old graphic smut scenes which are ok if you look for that stuff only, I suppose. Personally I prefer some kind of story, even a cliched one, to introduce the reader slowly and gently to a certain setting, to create and swallow him into a vivid atmosphere and make him feel comfortable, make him care about the characters and the plot. For the most part of the women readers, I think, the way itself to the sensual scenes, the provocative little details, the teasing along the way, are the things that really matter and make an impression. Which leads me to another thing (or rather two things) I wanted to compliment you for - the style and the pacing. I just love all the details in the scenes, the thoughts of the characters from a different perspective and presented several times. Also the fact that the story doesn't rush (it's quite teasing, you know :P) or become boring (as long as there is even a single moment of interaction between our two lovely characters, which is a little more intense than the one(s) in the previous chapter) it's a fantastic rhythm. It's just so to my taste. Keep the good work on details and rhythm(pacing) of the story, it's really wonderful.

    I read the last chapter of the fic 5 days ago and I check the site every day for a new one. I don't know how long it takes you to write a chapter (I hope it's not a whole month every time :P, 'cause we're going crazy then), but I hope the next one is coming out soon :). Just hope you're not out of inspiration or too busy.

    This comment turned out a long one and probably awfully boring, for that I'm truly sorry. I hope you read it some day :D. Wish you tons of inspiration and free time. :P
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  • From moonlady9 on June 25, 2008
    when r u gonna update! i've been waiting for too long! i'm having withdrawl symptoms! lol but really hope u update soon! i luv this story!
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  • From LyeLye on June 24, 2008
    Im still checking on this story every day, X.x
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  • From tigredesi on June 21, 2008
    omg love it keep it comingg, story is highly addicting. I cant wait till there is some more saku/kaka action and im still wondering of the kidnapper!! love it
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  • From ANON - Hatake Sienna on June 20, 2008
    That was great. All the detail was to a 'T' Great idea for making another way for Sakura to have sex with out actually having sex. Nice work
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  • From chocmilkchan on June 19, 2008
    hello...just checking in...really like the story...still having withdrawls...hope to hear from you soon! :)
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  • From bgreenwivy on June 18, 2008
    If only she had humped Kakashi. Just kidding but still...Or even better if he knew she had seen his face. It was a good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Clau on June 17, 2008
    it is so not stalking xo
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  • From ANON - Clau on June 17, 2008
    cant wait for more! ill be reading the fic in ff now though. so i can know when u update ^_^.
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  • From thefoxylady630 on June 13, 2008
    Ah, good stuff, good stuff. Another great chapter. I can't wait until you post the next installment. I love how it almost seemed as though Sakura would ask Kakashi to be her first so that she wouldn't have to have mr. yellow eyes steel her virginity but then it didn't happen. I sear thats where I thought you were going and then you came up with that brilliant but naughty (you naughty author you) way forestalling the inevitable. Simply genius my friend! Simply genius! But if they don't fall into bed soon I might just die of anticipation! Arrrgh! Thats so cool that your going to anime expo,I'm going too. Whoo hooo, been trying since high school! I'm gonna be a total nerd and dress up, my last bit of fun before graduation, sniff, sniff. Keep it up chick! And hurry up, your avid, rabid readers are anxiously awaiting!
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on June 09, 2008
    Long and delicous I can't wait for chappie 12. The smut was great and the attraction grows I loved the part when she contemplated raping him for a split second lol twas great I know I would've hehe update soon please!
    and have a awesome time at anime expo when you go.

    Loves Arry
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