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By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - Bella on August 24, 2008
    LOVING this series, the writing style is detailed yet i have never found a lack of pace! The characters are realistic yet resemble the characters from the show identically.
    Well done! Keep up the great work darling!

    x.o
    Bella M
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  • From Kaysan on August 24, 2008
    Just one before Christmas?! Are you serious? What will I do until then? (Pout) I seriously get giddy and squeal like an idiot when I see this has been updated. Sort of embarrassing, actually. Anyway, this chapter freakin' rocked! It may not have had any KakaSaku interaction (sadly), but damn if it didn't satisfy! So, if yellow eyes is a shinobi and Miyabi seemed out of sorts and then seems to have left on her own, I'm guessing it's a jutsu he's using to lure them away. Should be harder for our pair to stop him if he isn't forcibly taking the girls. Ah, the suspense! Can't wait to see an update! (Hopefully before Christmas, though I understand school can take all of a person's free time, so no pressure). Hugs & Kisses!
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  • From LadyApollonia on August 22, 2008
    First of all, let me tell you how much I love this fic. BEYOND love for this fic. However, I could honestly strangle someone for Sakura having to leave because she couldn't keep her clone in place. I really could. For the love of all things Naruto, PLEASE update extremely soon! If they don't have sex soon, I'm going to scream.
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  • From E1224 on August 19, 2008
    You EVIL woman! Building up to all that tension, and then, nothing. GAH.

    Let me make one thing very clear. While I'm not usually a fan of Naruto, the few dozends of episodes I watched with my younger brother piquied my interest, and let me say that this is, by far, the single best piece of Fanfiction I have ever read. Naruto fanfiction or not, is IS, quote, the best piece of writing I have ever read.

    Your writing, while flowery, detailed and descriptive, moves at a nice even pace and is easy to follow, with albeit incredibly rare mistakes that go entirely un-noticed unless, like me, you read over it four of five times.

    I read it through at one point after happening across it by chance. Your characters all have their own personalities and are well rounded, imaginative with their own quirks and flaws, like they all contribute to the story and make it more worthwhile to read. In between the utterly delicious sex scenes is the swelling, wrought emotion of the dancers who reflect on their past experiences, and it really makes the reader feel the pain, the desperation.

    Daijaku needs particular praise, sometimes I don't quite know if I should love or hate him. While he did "save" the girls from poverty and illness, at the same time its as though they are prisoners, but he has his moments of politeness even if it is fear of Sakura.

    I absolutely ADORE your spot on portrayl of Kakashi. As I said, I have only seen a few episodes, but his character I happened to find very interesting. While we can honestly feel his utter need for Sakura develop, we can also see why, and it goes far past the reason of "OMG YOU HOT LET'S SEX" and into Kakashi's own experiences, mindset, and personality. While he is an awful pervert and ladies man, he just can't seem to get his head around how much he would love to have Sakura if just for one night. And every time he gets close, boom, something happens to stop it, and the frustration is cringe-worthy.

    As or Sakura, beautiful, BEAUTIFUL. Even through her transition into a sexual perdator, she keeps her compassionate heart, she doesn't become cold and hateful, which was something I expected from the beginning. I love how it happened so gradually over time as she found her sexuality and revelled in the euphoric feelings while Kakashi looked on, and the tension between the two is near an unbearable point where I found myself saddened that there was no chapter 14.

    The tension had my hear pounding and turned my hands clammy against my dammed laptop. The love scenes, while cut short by the plot, were steamy and breathtaking, and thankyou, THANKYOU for describing Kakashi's face before they got to the actual sex. Sigh, I love those tempting little details.

    An incredible piece, and I highly anticipate your next update. Don't keep us waiting now, I have already attached myself to this like a lampree eel!
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  • From SweatyCup on August 15, 2008
    Damnit I was hoping she was gonna dance this chapter!DX
    You know how to leave a person hanging!
    BUT I do LOVE the chapter :}
    It was so steamy but then it just turned sad at the end.*sigh* Both of them are so confused :-/
    Can't wait til next time!
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  • From Sexgoddess2110 on August 14, 2008
    Oh My you deserve a Fanfic award that was amazing!! so Dark and sad in the beginning, but then Hot and steamy at the end! I can't wait for more. They finally touched YAY!!!! I hope they kiss for real soon hehe and Sakura finally have that prgasm I mean come on hehe Kakashi has had many but poor sakura hasn't had one yet lol. Well update soon please J-pop P!

    Loves ya,
    Arry
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  • From JediSpiceGissia on August 13, 2008
    Yay, Chapter 13!!! Damn it, you are such a tease! ^__^ I don't think Kakashi can take much more (or me for that matter :P) and I really hope you write them together soon. Really enjoying the story, and looking forward to when you can do an update, Thank You!!
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  • From ANON - Lindsey on August 12, 2008
    OOH! Youre evil!
    Wow.
    Just Wow.

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  • From ANON - puppydog on August 10, 2008
    I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU, I LOVE YOU!!! What Kakashi was doing to Sakura was hot! Please keep going! Did I mention I love you?!
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  • From BloodyA on August 10, 2008
    You are the worst, no the best, no the worst, no! Grah! I can't decide. But you are a horrible, horrible tease. LOL That was... wow.
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  • From kissthesky237 on August 09, 2008
    I can't even tell you how much I adore this story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2008
    You tease! You meanie! You just like to see us cry in frustration. Finally Kakashi has a chance to make his move and Sakura doesn't want to stop him and you just find a way to ruin it all! I knew it was getting too good to be true. Please update soon. You're killing me here!
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  • From rxtechgirl on August 09, 2008
    I really do love this story. Keep up the good work and I will keep reading.
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  • From ANON - SeacatSD on August 09, 2008
    OMG you're killin me! I just about stood up and cheered when Kakashi made his move and then cried when Sakura ran out! Arrrggghhhh....

    You're a great writer, very good with adjectives in the lemons (I mean limes you tease!). Keep it up and get those two together!
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  • From ANON - anon on August 09, 2008
    oh my god..that was fucking hot!! sucks that she didnt get to cum though..man but that was still so hot, I love the way you describe it and I like the way you write it so that its not just a story based on sex. Its a story that has sex in it, but it has an actual plot line. I love it and I hope that you get to update soon! wow, now im not going to be able to sleep because of this! damn that was hot, next thing you should write is oral sex between her and kakashi, now that would be really sexy! damn! update soon please!!! PLEASE
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