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By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - Just_Lovely on October 27, 2008
    Oh. wow... you need to upload the next chapter!! You are the best, and I have drawn a fanart for this story in tribute. (And in hopes that it will help you find your muse.) the link is if you would like to give it a look. Keep writing, and get out the new chapter, I'm dying to know what happens!!!!
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  • From chocmilkchan on October 21, 2008
    Halloween is creeping closer! I'm excited for the hinted update. You have me itching with anticipation. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2008
    Oh my goodness! Surely you can't leave us hanging like that! I'm in such shock, that was outstanding, so much has happened in that chapter. Your stories are absolutely amazing and I can't stop reading (: Thank you x
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  • From hanakocinnamon on October 11, 2008
    This isn't even one of my fandoms and I still yelled "Arrrrrrrrrgh!" at the ending (or lack thereof) to chapter 15. I know you're busy, but an update would be *highly* appreciated, and, looking at the reviews, by a good number of people other than myself.

    If it's half as interesting as your stories, at this rate you'll get me watching the bloody show...
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  • From ANON - LaLa on October 05, 2008
    wahhh this chapter was really good!
    i'm excited for the next chapter
    will they find Yellow? what will happen to Sakura?
    ohh i cant wait!
    please update soon!
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  • From Titavi on October 04, 2008
    I love your story! The tension between Kakashi and Sakura is fantastic! His emotional response is great and exactly how I would picture him reacting. Personally I picture Sakura being more mature and already to have had sex by the time she is 18 but they way you are writing her is just as great. There are a few editing errors but nothing that really takes away from the story.

    Please write more and soon!

    -Titavi
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  • From E1224 on October 02, 2008
    OH

    MAI

    You have done it again you mad thing you!!! Another excellent chapter, loving the interaction between Pakkun and Kakashi, I laughed, I cringed, I laughed some more...

    Hmmm, I have a few ieas to where you are going with this, one being the fact that Tsurenai was possibly the only one who slept with Yellow and wasn't kidnapped, and the fact that Miyabi was one of the more beautiful dancers on her hate list so she may have something to o with this. However, it could go any way at this point and I just adore the fact that I can't fully predict your intentions for this. Hell I can't even say if Sakura and Kakashi are gonna end up doing it in the next chapter. I can allways go either way.

    The kiss was so beautiful, truly a lovely piece of writing that left me feeling all fuzzy by the end, because it was like suddenly there was more to it than just lust. Obviously they do care about each other, but there is more underlying feelings there that was assentuated by that little moment, and it was utterly wonderful. Thanks sooooooo much for that.

    Eagerly awaiting your next update with an open mind. Ooooooh, I really hope Miyabi is okay!!!
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  • From SweatyCup on October 01, 2008
    You are so evil ! DX
    Ugh we don't even get to see his reply to it or anything!Oh your good...very good....
    I am so hooked on this story that I can't get away though!
    I wonder whats gonna happen???Oh well
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  • From ANON - Darkside The Fallen Angel on September 27, 2008
    just kidding.^^ i have read most of your stories i love them! ^^
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  • From ANON - Darkside The Fallen Angel on September 27, 2008
    MURDER!!! I SAY MURDER!!!
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  • From ANON - red_katty on September 24, 2008
    Wow, this story is honestly amazing. This is the first Kaksaku story I've read and I'm glad it was this one! I read like the whole thing in 2 days it was that good, I couldn't stop! Anyways, keep updating I want to know whats happens next, it's so intense!
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  • From LunayaWolf on September 23, 2008
    WHAT! How dare you leave your loyal readers just hanging like that. You are a twisted unfair person! Ahh, just kidding, ya it kinda sucks but that was one hell of a chapter. You covered a lot of stuff and I feel like even though their situation can't get any worse you've managed to move the story forward a lot with a single chapter. I can not describe to you how happy I was to see that you had updated btw. I just finished a huge project for a class and this was the absolute perfect indulgence after all that brain wracking work. I check in at least once a week for updates and Im so glad to finally have one. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - puppydog on September 22, 2008
    Love you!!!!!!!! Finally theres going to be some action! I hope. There will be right?
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  • From LadyVorlana on September 22, 2008
    Gah! Dont stop there! PLEAAASSEE I wanna see what happens. With how wonderful the rest of this story has been, I know its gonna be awesome!
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  • From edhelwing on September 22, 2008
    AAAAAAHHHHHHGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!

    *brain anurism*

    *death*

    Ok, I can understand that you are busy and I can respect that. Really. I'm in college so I too know what its like to not have all the time in the world, but come on! That's just cruel! Its like blowing your boyfriend, only to slip a cock ring on at the last minute, fuck him until your satisfied, then walk out of the room. That's it.

    If I was going to have to deal with a cliffhanger, I would have rather dealed with the "Miyabi's missing" one than the "I want you to sleep with me" one! I'm patient! I could have waited until you were ready to post chapters 15 and 16 together!

    Man, what a cock-block. (Well...maybe not a cock-block for me, being a girl, but it still fits)

    Can't wait for the next chapter!!!



    Really.
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