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Reviews for Stripped Bare

By : emeraldfire84
  • From ANON - mirumototsubasa on March 23, 2009
    I think this chapter is...well, saying "good" doesn't seem quite right. Heh. But it does fit the plot and it is well done. :) I don't usually nitpick things, but because your stories are usually so well written and edited I thought I'd point out the 2 things I caught, for fixing. (15 page papers fry the brain. I'm amazed at your ability to write this as well!)

    "Sakura’s head was spinning and she found she could barely breathe as she was filled over and over again by her enemies throbbing cock." should be "enemy's"

    Also, it looks like something got cut off in transferring/uploading/whatever the file, here: " How could she face him with nothing to show for having to sleep with their target? She was so ashamed of "

    As usual, I eagerly await the next installment. :)
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  • From KdaAnimefan on March 21, 2009
    epic chapter, very interesting, good piece with tsuneri, guess she is a partner of the yellow eye guy
    i look forward to the next chapter
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  • From LadyLuck87 on March 21, 2009
    i think this new chapter is really fantastic! please update often. this is one of my favorite stories.
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  • From ANON - Dei on March 20, 2009
    Damn....


    It's as if he has a leash on the nervous system.

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  • From Queenie7 on March 20, 2009
    I rate a story based on three things: Character developement, plot, and ability for the story to evoke emotions. You have done all three. You've taken us (the readers) from nervous, to happy, to lusty, to HAWT, to anger, to fear, and now you have brought hatred to the mix. I clap to you as a writer.
    As a reader, however, I want there to be a happy ending or at least closure. Hence why this last chapter brought out the hatred emotion. I want Yellow to die a painful and horrible death at the hands of the women he's tortured. My heart physically hurts for Kakashi and i can only hope and wait that things will turn out for the better. I eagerly await your next chapter.
    ~L
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  • From ANON - nicole on March 20, 2009
    very good chapter.
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  • From tasukigirl on March 20, 2009
    It's an interesting direction that you took the story. The only problem I had with it is that I don't think you needed to describe all the gritty details of the quite extensive bedroom scenes. I wasn't really all that offended by it, but I found myself skimming/skipping parts of it because it kept dragging on. Sometimes just hinting at what happened is enough. Believe it or not, I'm actually pretty interested in the plot at this point and I was hoping the story would progress more.
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  • From ANON - anon on March 19, 2009
    daaaamn, that was intense.
    Regardless of the fact that she was used like a slave, the sex was interesting. There wasnt any bondage, or abuse, or sick stuff in there. Thats good, I cant stand stuff like that. I wouldnt doubt that if you had put twisted abuse or anything of the sort in there that you would have lost many reviewers.

    I feel so damned bad for her at the end when he leaves and she doesnt realize that hes drugged her or anything. Gosh, it was intense. And that Kakashi had no idea that all of this was done against her will! You wont lose my attention on this story though, Im curious as to how you are going to write the next chapter. I like the way you wrote it, it was realistic, and intense, but not in a way that was disgusting and screwed up if you get what I mean. Some people write stories about sex slaves and bondage, but really twist it in such a way that its just horrifying and disgusting. Some people just write such sick things that you just wonder "what in the hell was his person thinking writing something like that!" You didnt, you just put plain sex in there.
    So keep up the good work and I hope to see another update soon!
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  • From ANON - A.J. on March 19, 2009
    Okay...first off, thank you for the warning at the beginning of the chapter. It definitely helped my prepare for what was coming, and what did come was very twisted and intense. The 'happy ending' part of me really, really wanted Sakura to find some way out of the situation, but I know in reality that just doesn't happen. I could honestly feel my heart sinking when he took her and completely break when it was all over. But I still can't wait for the next chapter and hope that Kakashi will find something wrong with Sakura before the end of the night.
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  • From ANON - Pengutron on March 19, 2009
    Very nice. I lost the story for a while and couldn't find it, i came back and 3 more updates had been done. Very well written, love the direction the plot is going in. Keep them coming, pun intended.
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  • From pibi on March 19, 2009
    i think the turn of events was okay, its to be expected considering the flow of the story since the begining,
    a little angst is alright with me just as long as the ening is not bad,
    i still believe in happy endings if u know wut i mean!LOL
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  • From Alpine02 on March 19, 2009
    What can I say? I loved that chapter.. I get so sick of reading fluffy crap.. This put the rest of the story into perspective and I like it.. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Please update soon.

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  • From Kaysan on March 19, 2009
    I'm not questioning your decision to go in this direction with the plot. After all, only you know what will happen in the future of the story. I will say that I'm INCREDIBLY relieved Kakashi didn't do anything with Tsurenai. I can't stand it when Kakashi 'cheats' on Sakura. My only problem with this chapter is that Sakura can't remember the drugs she was injected with. Hopefully, she remembers soon and things will get smoothed over with Kakashi. Angst during a story I can deal with, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending!

    So, is Tsurenai a kunoichi? Partner for the yellow-eyed man? Is Dajaku involved, under some sort of influence or just too greedy to care? I'm guessing influence since Yellow Eyes said he himself sent for a kunoichi. Ugh, so many questions! And aren't Sasuke and Naruto on the way? Can't remember at the moment. Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - mmartini on March 19, 2009
    I can't tell how much I've waited this chapter. And I love it although it was disturbing. Im worrying because Kakashi has a soft spot in my heart, I just need to see him happy! He isnt happy now, then maybe later? Please? Pretty please? Maybe after he rip the yellow eyed man to pieces? I love this story, cant stop reading if I wanted to. So continue quickly please. You are great!
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  • From ANON - Katrina on March 19, 2009
    I totally agree with the direction of this story! I've always seen this story as something a little darker than traditional fluff. That chapter was really well written and the plot wasn't confusing at all like some stories. I liked the little hint about Tsurenai's mission; can't wait to find out more about that! GREAT JOB!!!! Keep writing and please update soon!
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