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Reviews for Red

By : ElfenDream
  • From gaara89 on May 27, 2008
    OMG! That was so sweet! I'm glad Kakashi still wanted him after he told him what he remembered. Please update as soon as possible. There are few Kaka/Gaara stories and even fewer good ones. I really like this.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on May 22, 2008
    Hmmm, the part about the girl ,what she said,absolutely unbelievable plus no one does that for free more than once, so it seemed flat, unreal but perhaps it is part of the style.Sasuke thinking about Gaara now that was very lively, interesting, hot.Ita and Nar,?gag but thats a personal opinion and has nothing to do with your writing.I don't know if i can forgive gaara for hurting that girl, we shall see.You spark alot of emotion fer sure.
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  • From HannaFO on May 06, 2008
    Oh no... bad Sasuke, shame shame..... Really delicious chapter!!! XD
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  • From sweetciel on May 05, 2008
    Simply wonderful *hugs you tightly*
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  • From sweetciel on April 22, 2008
    I just LOVE the way Sasuke thinks whenever he's thinking of Gaara ^_^ I wonder if he'll ever get his wish and bed the redhead. Wonderful chapter btw
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  • From HannaFO on April 20, 2008
    OMG *plugsup nose* That was Damn HOT!! I read the entire fic just now :D Really really great !! :D
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  • From sweetciel on April 03, 2008
    I really like this fic. I'm glad that you were able to find a beta. If she's not up to beta-ing chapters 1-5, i'll be willing to take it on ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jamie on February 23, 2008
    I like this story, sounds like it could be a good one, you just need to get a good arc going. I'd gladly be your beta but I don't have an account on here (not sure if that's needed) My e-mail is lildesigner2@yahoo.com if you're interested.

    ~Jamie
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  • From ANON - Melha Seraphim on January 22, 2008
    Er I meant not just for me. Heh.
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  • From ANON - Melha Seraphim on January 22, 2008
    I did read it, but maybe I just forgot. And you should get a beta for yourself, not really just me Lol. You like to write right? You should want it to be as good as possible. Writing the story in a Microsoft Word program or whatever, first should help with spelling and grammatical errors, that way you aren't really cross checking on a website as often.
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  • From ANON - Melha Seraphim on January 17, 2008
    This could be very good. But I think you would benefit from a beta, or just re-reading what you wrote carefully. You had a lot of typos and grammatical errors. Also, your universe for this fic is confusing. They seem to be in a modern setting, but you still use things like auras, sand for killing, etc? Just another opinion of mine but the term "mother******" just seems silly, anywhere it's written. It breaks the flow. Oh and the group you had at the house. Kohonohamaru? That seems random. It's not a terrible story. but it could use some tweeking and such.
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  • From gaara89 on January 16, 2008
    I really hope you continue this soon. I can't wait!
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on January 06, 2008
    The pellets from a shotgun slug are called buckshot because it's been used to hunt deer for decades.
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  • From Idja on January 06, 2008
    Interesting start, aside from some typos it's a pretty good read. I hope to see more.
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