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Reviews for Haven

By : CrazyToffee
  • From ANON - kit on February 20, 2014
    wonderful story! I really enjoyed all the uncertainty involved with finding out if you love someone and what type of leave you fee for another. I was really satisfied with the ending. My only wish is that we could have seen how it all turns out in the future. Did naruto and gaara make it work out? Will sasuke find happiness in the path he chooses?
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  • From ANON - kaarsis on October 14, 2008
    If you were going for real you nailed it (no pun intended). This was such a wonderful fic. I wish there was more but anything else would ...well the way it ended here was great and to change it would be a sin lol.
    Awesome job, and I hope your other fics are half as good as this one (*goes to see*)
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  • From ANON - kaarsis on October 13, 2008
    Of all your fics that I've read I must say that this is the best. Such an accurate portrayl of what might happen when Sasuke comes back (probably what is most likely to happen). And Naruto's personality! So pained, and beautiful and perfect. Sasuke so ...mean yet also in so much pain you can taste it. You nearly made me cry with this chapter several times... good job! lol
    Hope the rest is as good as this
    Keep up the awesome writing!
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  • From Banimal on May 17, 2008
    Ahh so lovely. Love is complicated and brutal, yet we just keep trying to find it. The one thing I detest about adultfanfiction.net is that it is so damn hard to find decent fics because they all get pushed into archive oblivion. So it was very rewarding to find this jewel of a story. I think i especially liked the imagery presented. I really felt like I was standing in that oasis and I felt the water and the sand. It just gave such great depth to the story and was a wonderful backdrop for the characters.

    Wonderful, wonderful story. Thankyou for sharing it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2008
    Very good story. Please make a sequel! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Gabby0214 on March 14, 2008
    I am speechless, that was absolutely amazing! I must say it was the best Yaoi story I have ever read. And trust me I have read a lot of them. The ending was perfect, not fluff, but real. I think that is why I loved this so much you, the reader, could completely picture everyone of the scenes. It was so realistic even though it is fiction. You took Naruto to a whole new level. I don't think I can express how much this story touched me. I guess all I can say is it was simply wonderful. Gabby
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  • From ANON - cocopower1 on January 20, 2008
    I love this story. Not many Gaara and Naruto stories out there so well written. I do hope you continue and make a sequel. I'd love to find out how they will work through their long distanc relationship. Also, I'd like to read Sasuke's reaction to the new development.
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  • From berkie88 on January 12, 2008
    I feel sorry for Sasuke. Naruto is probably right in thinking that he'll always regret not choosing his other choice... I hope he'll get over it... it makes me sad. but at least he'll always have an awesome-cool uncle for his children around who can annoy him :-P

    this may sound shallow... but while reading I kept hoping for more smut. I love the triangle Naruto finds himself in and how he figures it out but the way you portayed Gaara here kept making me think of what he might be like if they went all the way... are you sure you won't do a one-shot PWP sequel? of their first time together or something? :-P
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  • From ANON - Ana on January 10, 2008
    This was amazing. My heart actually hurt while reading this. I love it when that happens. You are a great writer. I actually liked that you did not make Naruto fall in love with Gaara all of a sudden. This made the fic more realistic. Again this was great. I hope that you write somethings else about thses two later on. Until next time. ^.~
    ~Ana~
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  • From nawatia on January 10, 2008
    Wow! you had me reading the entire thing with out a break. I have read far far far far far past my bed time!!!!! Fabulous story!
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  • From ANON - animelover on January 09, 2008
    sometimes, a "happy ending" isn't the best solution, so you came up with a "real ending". we can't always know who we love even after we ponder and think about it. naru understands himself and his feelings now, and he's willing to explore. that's why i think your ending was just the bomb!

    thank you for this story!
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  • From serenagold on January 09, 2008
    God, I loved this. Great job.

    Can't wait until your next story. ^^
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on January 09, 2008
    Ahhh, you ended it here????? Come on, you need to have an epilogue of mind blowing sex!!! Please!!! The characters were awsome and it was a wonderful story, but please.... one more
    Slave
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  • From ANON - Ariya on January 09, 2008
    T_T I'm soo sad it's over! *sniffles* I definately liked the realism of the ending. Perhaps there will be a sequal? *hopeful eyes*lol This was my ultimate favorite Naru/Gaa fic!
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  • From ANON - LenaKitsune on January 09, 2008
    Great ending! I was close to tears with Naruto and Gaara's final talk. And the scene between Naruto and Sasuke was just perfect.
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