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Reviews for Making Love: Compilation of Erotic Shorts

By : animechick262003
  • From Saitochan on June 07, 2008

    Hey there! You know, I really really liked this story, and was wondering when you'd post a new chapter? I know it's hard to overcome a writer's block (I'm trying my best) and I thought maybe a few reviews will help you out. Can't really say it worked for me though... (I was writing just fine without any kind of reviews, then I managed to get a good chapter finished, people liked it, reviewed it, and BAM! writer's block hits me again). I hope that doesn't happen to you.

    But never mind that! Keep up the good work, I'm dying to know what happens between Kiba and Hinata! Please update soon and I promise I'll review your next chapter!
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  • From Saitochan on March 20, 2008
    Hey! That was reeeally nice. I actually found it MORE interesting when I realized the fic was set in an AU.
    And besides, I love the Kiba-Hina pairing. As for requests... I'd like to read something between... Lee and Tenten. It shouldn't be too hard, right? That's another of my favorite pairings (Truth to be told, I already wrote a Lee-Ten fic, but I'm not sure it came out too well... lack of feedback T.T)
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  • From ANON - L on January 12, 2008
    Hmm… I have to say, I was initially excited when I saw a KibaHina fic (those things are as rare as diamonds) And the concept, albeit rather creepy, was fitting and intriguing. However, I must admit that Kiba's character was, well, not in character. He seemed way to proper and starched; I realize that was the mold he was SUPPOSED to fit, but remember we're talking about KIBA here, and he pretty much does whatever the crap he wants. I don't know. The dialogue was also a little strange with them constantly saying each other's names instead of "you." Hmm… Other than that, I think this has great potential to be an awesome fic, it just needs a little cleaning up =)
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  • From ANON - Tommy on January 10, 2008
    I have never read a story so well how can i put this um so
    sexual in all my year of reading manga or anime or whatever keep it up sexcii muah peace

    p.s. your lips r cute
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  • From UbakeNeko on January 06, 2008
    Loved it! Normally I dont do the AU thing (too many high school ones bleh) and that is totally a personal preferance thing, but I liked this a great deal. I enjoy the idea of Hinata, shy, quiet Hinata, indulging in secret perviness. It adds to her humanity, I think. Continue, please!
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  • From gordafarid on January 05, 2008
    that was such a great chapter! More KibaHina please!
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  • From animekid on January 05, 2008
    I think I get where this is going......

    just hope you label the pairings...because well I don't want to be reading hinaxkiba and bam its sassak x.x;;;;

    .......i actually want to see gaianko >_>;;;;;

    or anything with Lee XD

    bah don't mind me it's late

    keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - demoneyeskyo on January 04, 2008
    i must say, that was very hot and very well written. i love it! can't wait to read what happen next. wonderful job! keep up the good work and don't keep us readers waiting too long!
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  • From roxnroll on January 04, 2008
    This was really hot!! Kiba is sexy as hell in this fic. Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From MoiyaHatake on January 04, 2008
    WOOT! Go Kiba-kun! So erotically beautiful. Poor Hinata. She's got what she needs right in front of her and she still cant see him. Like a certain blonde we all know. LOL Blind as a bat! Very well written.
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  • From ANON - Mules on January 04, 2008
    Sweet!!! she is back??? is she or is this a chicky Tease??? omg its a fucken tease isn't it??? you better not tease me this is good omg so fucken good so hot and wet and moist... i want more i want more yesterday... Keep it up and please keep this up its awsome and glad to see this couple i love Kiba Yummy in his own right and you sure make his so fucken sexy... Go Kiba babe!!!

    Huggles
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  • From sarge on January 04, 2008
    nice work. update soon and could you make a naruto sakura kiba threesome or sakura chouji story were chouji uses his familie's secret jutsu to do sakura or please do both of my request.
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