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Reviews for Untitled_SasuNaru

By : TheReapersMule
  • From ANON - poluskinha on January 12, 2012
    Hi,

    And wow. This was the first story in here that made sense from beginning to end, and kept me captivated enough to be on the edge of my seat for every page. Congratulations on this story and thank you for writing it.

    It is a pity what happened to the girls, Naruto and Sasuke.

    I noticed a few mistakes, some exaggerations, a few kunais to grammar but noticed too bad.

    There are parts that are a bit vague so it's difficult to understand what is happening, specially at the fight scenes.

    The ramen guy, you called him Ichimaru, was it a mistake or an original character?
    I assumed you meant Teuchi from Ramen Ichiraku.

    I hope you haven't planned a sequel for this, sometimes stories must simply stay done. Kinda like Matrix, you know, it should have stayed on the first movie.

    In any case, I don't have much more to say other than Congratulations again.


    Hugs,


    Poluskinha
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  • From niceladysakura on October 07, 2010
    i definitely love the story!!!!!!!!!! ^^,
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  • From smint45 on September 01, 2009
    I absoloutly loved this story!!!! Thank you so much for creating such a wonderful piece of art!!!! I will read your other naruto fic asap!!!! See you!!!!
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  • From Surathan on May 03, 2009
    All in all a great story ^_^

    (Oh Haha.. my ReCAPTCHA words were SHAFTED and GRATEFULLY)
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 20, 2008
    It's sad that Aito and Hikime died. I really liked them. But I'm glad Orochimaru died. He's way too evil to be left alive. I love Itachi but I can't believe what he did to Naruto. I'm glad Sasuke was able to bring Naruto back to his normal self. The ending was great. It was so funny. Great job. Definitely one of my favorite stories.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 09, 2008
    Ah, I wasn't expecting Itachi to show up at the end. This story just keeps getting better and better. I love the relationship between Naruto and Aito. I thought it was adorable when she called him "Da". I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the amazing work.
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  • From on August 02, 2008
    awesome, I can't believe I just sat here and read all 13 chapters. lol I couldn't look away apparently. loving ya fic, itachi showing up ahh...the plot thickens. hope to read more.
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  • From roro237 on August 02, 2008
    That last line was a (do Z)! "Uchiha Itatchi." Where did that come from? I bet Naruto is saying the same thing huh?:) I have been enjoying your story very much:) Looking forward to more.
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  • From Dragon7 on August 01, 2008
    Love the fast update..... I can’t wait to see what part Itachi is to play in this story..
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  • From solitare1 on July 31, 2008
    HOLY CRAP!!! Didn't see that coming!
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  • From Dragon7 on July 27, 2008
    I love chapters 9, 10, 11 and 12 they were all fantastic. I Hope Sasuke and Naruto find Hikime really soon.
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  • From Dragon7 on May 05, 2008
    I really HATE Sakura she such a BITCH !!!!!! Poor Sasuke everyone is so mean to him and now the girls are missing.


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  • From Imagy on April 22, 2008
    WOWZERS~!
    I lurv this story, babe
    definately one of my favorites
    the characters are hardly OOC
    which makes their reactions all the more facinating
    I can't wait to see what'll happen next!
    'til then, hun ^o^
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  • From Dragon7 on January 15, 2008
    I love this story its fucking FANTASTIC. I just started reading it and I can't get enough of it. I can't wait to read more so update soon.


    P.S Sasuke MPREG RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Jien on January 08, 2008
    Sasuke's pregnant?
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