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Reviews for Sexy No Justu: Sakura Style!!!

By : fangirlqueen
  • From Vivichan on April 17, 2008
    This isa good story with lots of potential...have you abandoned it? T_T
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  • From MrsCake on January 17, 2008
    Hahaha! Jiraiya is in for it now. Looking forward to the next chap! :-)
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  • From ANON - Tari on January 09, 2008
    funny story hope to see more
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2008
    Sooo...I read the summary for this fic and became really interested. I got about a chapter and a half through and decided I needed to leave a review.

    Your writing style really shows promise. But stuff like spelling and grammar mistakes (or massive typos, either one) are really holding this back from being a great fic! If you can, try writing in MS Word and using the spellcheck and grammarcheck. If for some reason you can't get ahold of it (or a similar program) get a beta who's good with those kind of corrections. In either case, get a beta as well just for a bit of polish.

    I really hope you won't take this the wrong way. If I thought this fic was just bad through and through, I would've laughed and moved on. I'm giving you some concrit because I think it's worth the time. :)
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  • From Kaysan on January 09, 2008
    I love this! I don't really know what else to say except I can't wait for the next update! Oh and some KakaSaku would be splendid! Hugs & Kisses!
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  • From serenagold on January 08, 2008
    Bwhahahahhahahaaha LMAO!

    Jiraiya is so dead. ^^
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  • From ANON - Tinkerbell on January 07, 2008
    I couldn't stop reading, You definitely grabbed my attention and made me want to read more! I think your really good at writing fanfics and I hope you keep making them. You mentioned that if someone made a pairing request you might consider doing it? I am such a Kiba fan, I know he isn't really a main character but he is very, very, attractive. I read other fictions where his sense of smell got him into trouble and WOW that was hot! There really isn't enough Kiba goodness here in my opinion. Thank you for taking it into consideration.
    I LOVE YOUR WORK!!
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  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on January 07, 2008
    that was awesome when sakura slapped sasuke. n once tsunade n sakura r through w/ jiriaya he is gonna have pee sitting down.
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  • From SecretQuill on January 07, 2008
    LOL!! omg poor sakura! and stupid jiraya for messing up the jutsu!!
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  • From animekid on January 07, 2008
    hahahha it's getting stupid now.

    sasuke deserved it the ass hole

    but wait...what about sai? o_o; i noticed it's lacking him and kakashi!

    bah i'll still read this fic even if they are not in it.
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  • From sarge on January 07, 2008
    please pair sakura to naruto i dont like sasuke to be the one paired up with sakura update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2008
    Great story, but there are several spelling errors. Maybe you should get a beta?
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  • From ANON - Cory on January 07, 2008
    I feel so bad for Jiraiya right now, But I also laugh at his misfortune hahaha
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  • From animekid on January 05, 2008
    O_o

    whoa that's new......

    as long as it doesn't get retarded cliched, and Gaara is in here (well..not really...but I pray it's not the cliched, "Oh sasuke finds out sakura is hot so hot smex!")

    ......still it's interesting how sakura is like a 'woman' now lol
    '.'

    Keep up the good work...but I am wondering besides team seven who else will be watching her? Lee? Ino? Shikamaru?


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  • From ANON - selvira on January 04, 2008
    this is so funny.... you really should continue because i want to find out if any men get pounded by sakura.... how come you don't upload the naruto fics on ff.net?
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