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Reviews for Sweet, Innocent Hinata-Chan (COMPLETE!!!!!)

By : ShouraiChan
  • From Zarrthtion on June 16, 2010
    absolutely a wonderful story im really sad to see it end but at the same time im happy it had such a great ending i hope you keep writing i could have been around when you first started so i could have joined in on sum things but i'll keep up with all of ur work its very good and also nice jobs with all the pairings
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  • From Aleya on May 07, 2009
    Okay, I have to tell you something. I Have been looking for this fic FOREVER! I caught it when it first was posted like 2 or 3 chapters in, then i forgot the title and man. Whats funny is when you reviewed MY fic I clicked the name and went: OMG THERE IT IS! And i have much to read... So my Geek moment has passed and i will continue with my reading and thx for the review on 8 ways.
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  • From zephyrdark on August 28, 2008
    Ok, first of let me say that overall, you're story is awesome. Really, I mean that. Not completely accurate (the five great shinobi villages are Leaf/Konoha, Sand/Suna, Rock/Iwa, Cloud/Kumo and Mist/Kiri with Sound, Grass, Rain, Waterfall, Snow being the minor ones without a kage) but hey minor detail. Also I think you ought to be congratulated. When I started reading this story, I thought it was going to be a story about a submissive Hinata becoming the love slave of her 'Naruto-kun', you know kinda like 'Naruto Punishment'. Yet somehow you turned it into a vessel Hinata story where she becomes the leader of another village. Never in my wildest dreams did I think of that being conceivable, but hey, you pulled it off. Congrats on the great story.
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on August 20, 2008
    P.P.S.I Loved The...S.E.X. *Blush*

    ONLY HinaNaru's,Though - 'cuz Their's Is What I Only Read. *Blush*
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on August 20, 2008
    One Word : Perfect.

    I Laughed,I Cried,I Nearly Died.
    But I Kept Reading,Hoping To Find,What Was On My Mind.
    Something,Somewhere,Which Would Make Me Care.

    ...Oh,God.Random Poetic Influence.Sorry About That.

    I Loved The Fic!Beautiful.You're An Amazing Writer...And I Read EVERY Part Even If I'm Not Into Yaoi/Yuri Stuff...Doesn't Matter,'cuz There Wasn't Any.But...I Loved It.Wholly!

    I Love Hinata...Doesn't Matter What Pairing.

    You Kept All Characters In Check.And i Imagine Hinata Being As Strong As You've Portrayed Her.

    Also,I Enjoyed Reading About The Children.Adorable.

    I Loved The Plot,The StoryLine,No LoopHoles.

    Yes,A Fic About The Children Would Be Amazing...Only If YOU Want It. ^^

    P.S.I'd Love To Talk To You About Your Fic!Add Me On Yukiko Hosokoawa On AIM Or chrysallis_reborn@hotmail.com

    ...But Only If You Want To. ^^

    I'm Willing To,Also,Be Your Beta!

    I Hope I'll Get To Read More Fics!With HinaPower!

    Also,I'm Happy This Fic Has Ended But Sad,As Well. =(
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  • From 1upmushroom on July 19, 2008
    This fic started out freaking awesome. But then it got gushy enough to break records... I do enjoy waff, but not as much as dark-waff, what a pity.
    This is the second, maybe the third fic I've seen use that plotdevice where the _____ saves ______'s kid with a chakra _____. What's my point you ask? I dunno, originality?

    You're a good writer, I think. But this fic just switched tracks and missed my stop.

    Chiao
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  • From on June 11, 2008
    wow i cant, no dont want to, believe that it's over. this was such a good story. so well written. i hope we get a story of the second generation with all of their kids or something because im loving their characters too. thanxs for writing this story it was just so good to read.
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  • From Archfiend on June 11, 2008
    Well, now that your story is finally at it`s end, I must say I enjoyed the last chapters immensely, though I must say you seemed to be in a hurry to crush the Hyuuga`s. Not that I mind , the way you portrayed them showed them to be extremely evil and good riddance as such. I still do not understand the wish you made hikaru do. You said that the beasts had been freed, but Naruto was a Jinchuuriki, meaning that he `d die if Kyuubi left him, just as Gaara did.Although you mentioned that Shukaku had returned to Gaara, you do not deny that the Akatsuki had killed him, and that only Chiyo rescued him. Furthermore you said that Shukaku had returned, because he knew that`s where he belonged, then shouldn`t have Kyuubi returned too? Anyway I`m so sorry thatyour story has ended as it was great. I look forward to seeing other stories written by you. How about a sequel?
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  • From Archfiend on June 05, 2008
    Well, your description of the battle between Hinata and Naruto was pretty intense and the battle had a worthy winner in my opinion, but there is o0ne thing. Both Hinata and Naruto are insanely strong and that Hyuuga bastard could never hope to be that strong, otherwise it`d be completly illogical. Well can`t wait for the next chapters
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  • From DragonMan220 on June 05, 2008
    So... now that the fight is over does that mean Hinata will return to Snow village and leave Naruto alone in Konoha again???
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  • From Archfiend on June 04, 2008
    I`ve needed about one and a half dayys to read your entire story so far, and I ust say, that I haven`t seen a story like it for a long time with all its different and surprising quirks in the story. The story is written really well, even though there are some mistakes and grammatical errors, but overall it is still more than bearable. I still don`t know how to feel about you making Hina even stronger than Naruto, and then shoiwing her as a submissive mosochist, ah well.... What I do not understand is the fact that Hikaru is able to make an ice jutsu, or Hinata, because ice jutsus in the Narutoverse would be a kekkai genkai, just like the Hyuuga Byakugan, or the Uchiha Sharingan. I am very interested in the outcome of the fight between Naru/Hina and I hope they kick hinata`s brother`s ass ASAP. he seems to be a bastard. What I also do not understand is the fact that neither Hinata nor Naruto have been shown conversing with the beasts inside of them, because your story revolves around the reawakening of their child, as far as I understand the current story, wouldn`t it also be logical to ask Kyuubi and Byakko directly about the thing concerning the current situation? Anyway keep up your work and Update this amazing story ASAP please
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  • From DragonMan220 on June 03, 2008
    I don't like the fact that Kyuubi came out to play, when Hinata seals it off it will make Naruto drop like a rock since he'll suddenly be running on near empty. It's a lousy way to win!
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  • From modoken on June 02, 2008
    Naruto, in perfect cool-guy postureing.
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  • From hotfire on May 16, 2008
    OMG OMG INCEST!!!!!!!!! INTERESTING AND THE PLOT THICKENS. WHAT WOULD BE THAT THING THAT HIASHI HAD IN HIS ROOM?
    I THINK PERSONALLY IT COULD BE A COLLAR FOUND THAT COULD SUPPRESS HINATA AND BYAKKO'S POWER. CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER

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  • From JAKKAL on May 14, 2008
    It's good to see you posting again. Although these last two chapters were, well, not as good as previous ones, it is still nice to have it continue. Welcome Back.
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