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Reviews for Sweet, Innocent Hinata-Chan (COMPLETE!!!!!)

By : ShouraiChan
  • From DragonMan220 on January 21, 2008
    I really think Kushina should have appeared with Minato and Shioriko so she could say she didn't mind Shioriko sharing Minato with her. I get the feeling that Kushina was a woman much like Naruto, with a big heart who would have been Shioriko's best friend.
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  • From roxnroll on January 20, 2008
    That was a nice emotional chapter. I can't wait to read the confrontation.
    Rox
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  • From MarauderFox79 on January 20, 2008
    You know, I liked your SasuSaku chapter, I wouldn't mind at ALL getting one of those every once in a while, but I agree, I think you should do chapters for the other pairings too if you feel up to it, especially ShikaTema and NejiTenten
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 19, 2008
    Another great story, I loved it. It reminded me alot when mom told me she was pregnant with my brother. After I shook off my daze (and picked myself off the ground) mom started doing alot of things I never saw her do. Heck I did alot things I never done to help with the pregnancy; run out for take out late at night, search all of town for salt-vinegar potato chips, get myself stuck in a babybed while assembling it (it was one of those cloapseable models). ANYWAY, I just can't wait to for the next chapter, Hiashi had better mind his p's and q's or else he might be missing a p! You know what I mean?
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  • From roxnroll on January 19, 2008
    great job. I love the side story in the previous chapter and can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From JAKKAL on January 18, 2008
    Besides the insane OOC, it is quite an enjoyable story. Sometimes you seem to rush, but that happens. :P I find it amusing that everyone is hooking up with one another. I wonder who will get pregnant next? Temari? My favorite Naruto-babe. ^_~
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  • From mrse7en00 on January 17, 2008
    finally represent the pairing that is NARUHINA , at first i was confused you had me for a minute dude KEEP GOING !!!!!!!
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 17, 2008
    I learned an important lesson in my writing classes; your enemnies will often surprise you, but so will your friends. Or in other words, you get can get good reviews and bad reviews anytime. And when it comes from a good story I try to leave my best intentions for the writer. Your story is among my favorites, 1. it's Naruto/Hinata (a big must in my book!) 2. it doesn't bore anyone in the bedroom flare (yeah I'm a perv aren't we all?) 3. you keep the characters in good style (very low OC) and 4. you keep the reader wanting more(Darn you!) Now thank you for keeping the kitten in the story (it fits Hinata don't you think?) and Naruto loves animals anyway (lets hope Hoi-chan don't mistake anything that's apart of Naruto for a scratching post)(Ouch I think I hurt myself with that one) and Hiashi's days are officaly numbered! Not only Naruto, Neji and Sasuke but Shino, Kiba, and alot of pist off ninja girls.
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  • From roxnroll on January 17, 2008
    Great job.
    Rox
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 16, 2008
    (review was interrupted) Ahem.... NO MAN AND I DO MEAN LITERALLY A MAN WOULD ATTACK A PREGNANT WOMAN ESPECIALLY HIS OWN DAUGHTER!!!! "When Naruto finds out, heaven, hell, purgatory, and all of earth won't stop him from getting his revenge!!! Kyuubi is going to look like a freaking butterfly after Naruto loses his cool!!! (Great story as usual I knew it wasn't going to be that easy so please keep up the great work. Ps keep the kitten)
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 16, 2008
    GGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (eyes glowing red) THAT'S IT!!! I DON'T CARE IF HE IS THE HEAD OF THE HYUUGA FAMILY HE HAS GONE TO FAR THIS TIME!!!! NARUTO MY MAN IT IS TIME TO START SWINGING YOUR TAILS CAUSE THERE SOME THAT IS TIRED OF BREATHING!!!!
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  • From zdw on January 16, 2008
    Beautiful story, I have to say I've really grown a liking to it. Please keep writting!
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  • From roxnroll on January 15, 2008
    That was really good. I can't wait to see what they have in store for Hiashi.
    Rox
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  • From gordafarid on January 15, 2008
    awesome chapters, even though slight dissapointment, that it was Kibahina in the first place, but could you make a chapter about Hinata dominating Naruto, after all, she's pregnant. xD
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 14, 2008
    Good to have you back. First my suggestion is take some Wal-born tablets (they dissolve in water and taste like orange juice)cause they work really good, have some chicken noodle soup, and get plenty of rest. Oh and go easy on writing it gives some writers headaches. Now second is DAMN!!! Hinata CAN KICK ASS!!! she took that idiot down like a picture! Keep up the great work but please get better also okay?
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