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Reviews for Sweet, Innocent Hinata-Chan (COMPLETE!!!!!)

By : ShouraiChan
  • From xXkuronekoXx on February 27, 2008
    i think the thing i love most about this story is that it started off as complete and utter hentai, but it has blossomed into quite the literary work! kudos!
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  • From xXkuronekoXx on February 27, 2008
    thanks for that! i've been having a shit day with my idiot sibling that i call my sister, and that put a huge smile on face!!! arigato gozaimasu!
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  • From DragonMan220 on February 27, 2008
    Okay, I like Atchi and I can see Hinata welcoming her like a sister if she proves her worth in helping Naruto escape and return to Konoha, but the other sisters are bitches.
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  • From roxnroll on February 27, 2008
    You've definately succeeded in confusing me. That's not a bad thing though. It's just making things very interesting. Now I'm curious what the plan is. I can't wait to read more. By the way, didn't Sasuke say that that girl that was visiting Konoha ( the one he had sex with) with her sister reminded him of Naruto? Could his fantasy have been her? Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From MarauderFox79 on February 27, 2008
    Hiashi Hyuuga.... Of course. How could I be so stupid? Of course it was him! We were all so naive to think that was all there was to him! *drops her head on her desk* And of course, I was so worried about my boys, I didn't think about what could be happening with the girls! I hope Hikaru is all right... but I wouldn't put it past Hiashi to hurt a defenseless baby. And poor Sakura, all alone while pregnant, while her love fantasizes about another girl.... guy... erm...

    Haha thank you for the e-puppy, its funny ‘cause I was about to tell you in my last review that you’re a sweetheart for responding to and indulging your reviewers like you do. As always, I look forward to more. You’d think I’d be able to figure it out, but I cant for the life of me figure out who the other ninja is. Stronger than Naruto… if he wasn’t already there I’d say Sasuke usually but…. Hm… Hinata maybe…. Argh I’m not sure! I guess I’ll just have to wait for more of your amazing writing. ☺

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  • From JAKKAL on February 27, 2008
    Why do you call Uchiha Madara Meidara? Anywho, I like the story you've writ so far. It's enjoyable, and semi-well thought out.
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  • From modoken on February 27, 2008
    This is getting very complicated and is developing nicely. Please continue.
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  • From DragonMan220 on February 26, 2008
    I'm surprised Sasuke isn't used to Naruto's Sexy no Jutsu form, I can't believe it didn't set off warning bells in his head. I hope Naruto doesn't fall for any tricks, Kyuubi should give him some resistance so he can break free and rescue his friends.
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  • From MarauderFox79 on February 26, 2008
    Oh my goodness, so I thought I almost had it figured out, then you pull the Naruko chapter on me! NYARGH! Now I'm completely lost. Totally. it seemed like they were all getting their happy life they wanted in these genjutsus or whatever they're in, except Sasuke, unless... its Sasuke's subconscious saying he's afraid of commitment, being with Sakura and having a baby. .........

    I guess no e-puppy for me. *sad*
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  • From MarauderFox79 on February 26, 2008
    Ugh. I'm sorry about FantasyFreak, don't let it get to you, you'll always get people like that who just like to be asses. Just ignore them. As you see, you have PLENTY of devoted fans who love your pairings, writing, and SMUT, ones who are wondering what they will do when you're done with this fanfic (all I can say is I hope that doesn't happen for a VERY long time) and we hope you'll continue writing!

    One thing I love about these girl sluts you've added to the storry (GRRRR I hate them!) is how each one has part of each of the girls names, like Tenchi or Kuchi or Richi. Its a nice touch.
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  • From xXkuronekoXx on February 26, 2008
    So, here's my guess at where this is going (again...). Each of the Yonnin were drugged (duh). The drugs make them realize their true fantasies and make them come to "life" so to speak. Um, probably no right, but it's worth a shot of uncovering this madness that is so freaking awesome!!!
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  • From roxnroll on February 26, 2008
    Now you've got me stumped. I'm trying to figure out what happened. I can't wait to find out what those girls did to our favorite boys. Good job. Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on February 26, 2008
    I love this story... Its such a great read... But your jumping the gun with the baby eating regular food for a 2mth. old.. I am seeing that All of the guys are seeing the future in a way but why are they getting headaches.... Neji seems like everything is fine but afew things.... Shikamaru should ask Temari about his earring... And he should know something is wrong when she doesn't smoke.... HOPE to read more from you soon
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  • From SPARTAN777 on February 25, 2008
    Grrr... *growls deeply from the bottomless pit in my soul* This is the kind of turn of events that has me wanting to know what happens next. I wish I knew. I hope everyone comes out of this alright. It seems to me that this is some kind of genjutsu. Being as there are a few too many similarities to pass on. Like neji and "ten-chan" shikamaru falling asleep and whispering "ri" when the girl in charge of taking care of him is names Richu. and her eyes flash red, which if I'm not mistaken is the color of temari's eyes. and Sakura is unusually gifted with genjutsu so getting sasuke wouldn't bee too hard for her if she had a good surprise on him. I just hope that they're all ok and come out of it. And I hope "YOU" are ok Shourai-Chan.... I haven't seen any authors notes from you in the last few chapters. I sincerely hope all is well for you. You're in my prayers my friend (Hope you don't mind me calling you that) Please take care of "YOU". The story can wait but you need to take care of yourself. I for one am a devoted reader and don't want my author to be in any sort of discomfort, pain, or any other type of undesireable condition. Hope to have an update soon if for nothing else than to know that you're alright. Peace Shourai-chan.

    -Spartan
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  • From xXkuronekoXx on February 25, 2008
    i'm guessing each of our yonnin will have a dream/hallucination like this one, ne? very awesome, and great twists with the story!
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