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Reviews for Sweet, Innocent Hinata-Chan (COMPLETE!!!!!)

By : ShouraiChan
  • From animekid on January 05, 2008
    holy hell....first hen pairing in a long long time (bah....)

    I just love the many various viewpoints, and how each character is in character! I even like the sassak bit, even though I LOATH that pairing XD (maybe it's because I wish lee would hook up with someone other than her or....gaara ^^;)

    Still good piece! I haven't read a naruhina before and I enjoyed this one a lot. Even the D/S was a interesting touch on their personalities (i.e. Hina's introvert and Naru-kun's extrovert.)

    still....I wonder what other pairings will be? And is Neji really with tenten? (mmmmm...like that one.)

    keep up the youthful job
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  • From Chronostorm on January 05, 2008
    Well didn't see the emotion conflict coming but it works out really well for the plot though i do wonder if Naruto and Hinata's sex life will continue with dom and sub stuff i hope so
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  • From roxnroll on January 04, 2008
    Yeah- Now that was really good. I said I liked an aggressive Naruto but he was getting a little sadistic for a minute there. I liked the fact that he was insecure and that he's toned it down a bit.
    Rox
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 04, 2008
    For a moment I thought Naruto was going to give Kiba a Rasengan Enema! And of course Neji is going to be a BIG reason that Naruto and Hinata haven't gone public (seriously Ten Ten should've removed the stick up his ass by now). Or is more like a tree? But Naruto does love Hinata and can love her gently if she likes it that way of course. Any chance we get to see Naruto verus Hiashi Hyuuga or is Team Naruto vs the Elite Hyuugas? OH I CAN'T WAIT, I JUST CAN'T WAIT!!!
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  • From Chronostorm on January 03, 2008
    Well that was interesting dang he really put it to her ass man i am wondering when the BDSM will come into play but i pretty sure you have that planed out.
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  • From Anonymous7 on January 03, 2008
    An excellent chapter, though I'm still confused as to what Naruto's feelings are for Hinata. He held her after all that, so perhaps he does have some feelings towards her, but I'm unsure. Maybe we'll find out later; either way, I'm looking forward to chapter 7.
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  • From uberleettehpwnzor on January 03, 2008
    hahahahahahaha thank you, your writing and storyline's really good, and you update a lot! you're a really good author! the last chapter makes me wonder...how's naruto going to 'punish' hinata after dinner? :D
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  • From KagomeCowgirl007 on January 03, 2008
    well... i'm not sure how to send you a email so i decided to review your story, which is really good by the way (i'm only one chapter in), but anyway. I've updated my story Extremely tonight and i believe you were the one who wanted me to contact you when the update was posted.
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  • From Anonymous7 on January 03, 2008
    I just thought of something else; why can no one know about Hinata being Naruto's girlfriend? Surely that'd make it easier for them to sneak around together without people wondering what was going on.
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  • From Anonymous7 on January 03, 2008
    So she's his girlfriend, huh? Does that mean he actually has feelings for her? We know she's in love with him, but we've yet to see how Naruto feels for Hinata, other than his jealousy about Kiba, though that could simply be because he views her as his slave. So which is it? I'm looking forward to the next chapter; Hinata clearly wants to be punished, but just how will Naruto punish her, since it seems his current actions haven't been enough to keep her in line.
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  • From Chronostorm on January 02, 2008
    oh Hinata loves the punishment now i get it lol i wonder what Naruto will do next i look forward to it
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  • From roxnroll on January 02, 2008
    So she's not sweet little Hinata then? And Naruto is just really hot!! I can't wait to read the next one.
    Rox
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  • From roxnroll on January 02, 2008
    By the time I got to read this, you went and updated on me with a new chapter. Bad,bad Naruto. I can't wait to see what he's able to think of next.
    Rox
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  • From Chronostorm on January 02, 2008
    Well i am glad you will update daily i look forward to seeing how Naruto continues to toy with Hinata and how she submits to and a happy new year to you as well also i am guessing this takes place during or after Shippuuden
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  • From uberleettehpwnzor on January 02, 2008
    woot! you're the greatest, shourai-chan!
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