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Reviews for Sweet, Innocent Hinata-Chan (COMPLETE!!!!!)

By : ShouraiChan
  • From roxnroll on January 14, 2008
    Nice, very nice. I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read what happens next.
    Rox
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  • From roxnroll on January 09, 2008
    That was a nice little story in a story. I like that you've included more development into the other characters. Will you be doing this with all of the couples. That would be cool even though it is a Hinata/Naruto fic. Good job.
    Rox
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 08, 2008
    Oh boy here we go again! Looks like theres gonna be some trouble before this ends. COOOL!!! Just don't forget the good stuff among the action. Oh and was it Kill Bill that the scene reminded Naruto?
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  • From zeroharm on January 07, 2008
    I had guessed that Ino had used her jutsu based off of her unconsciousness, but even with that to work on, I did not see that coming. Should be interesting to see the shenanigans that arise based off of Ten-tens impersonation... just hope one of them doesn't check with a byakugan and see through the henge :-)
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  • From edelta88 on January 07, 2008
    O_O wow sadistic much Naruto?
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  • From roxnroll on January 07, 2008
    That was really good. The story is starting to get serious now. I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From edelta88 on January 07, 2008
    good so far(chp 1) but it reads like a first draft
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  • From GhostwriterMO on January 06, 2008
    "AHEM..." referee clears throat, "Ladys and Gentlement in this corner we have the mightiest bloodline in Kohona: THE HYUUGAS, lead by Hiashi and Neji Hyuuga." crowd roars of approval. "And in this corner we have the amazing TEAM SEVEN; the hyperactive loud mouth Naruto Uzumaki, the master of the Sharingan Eye Sasuke Uchiha, and the beautifuly deadly or is deadly beautiful Sakara Haruno." Ring side announcer, "And here we have it ladys and gentlemen the battle we have all known to come. Will Naruto win the most importent fight of his life? Will Hiashi get his head shoved up his @## by tailed Naruto? Will Neji sleep on the couch from an angry Ten Ten? These questions and more in the next awesome, beautifuly written chapter of our story." Keep up the great work!!!
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  • From Chronostorm on January 06, 2008
    Way to put Neji down Tenten kick his ass and Naruto better give Hiashi the thousand years of pain*10 edition ;)
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  • From roxnroll on January 06, 2008
    Really good. This story keeps getting better.
    Rox
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  • From uberleettehpwnzor on January 06, 2008
    hehehe...i can already tell the next chapter's going to be awesome, shourai-chan! please hurry!
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  • From Fubban on January 06, 2008
    awesome story so far im lovin it great writing style keeping me enthralled
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  • From Anonymous7 on January 05, 2008
    "They both moaned as they felt their first and final orgasm together" Does this mean they won't be together? Or does "final" simply refer to them being done for the evening? Because, no offense, if this is going to have a sad ending, I'd rather just stop right now. I'm rather looking forward to things working out for the young couple, followed by some more somewhat-plot-driven smut.
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  • From roxnroll on January 05, 2008
    That was good. Can't wait to read more.
    Rox
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  • From Chronostorm on January 05, 2008
    Hinata should get Pregnant soon i think (Naruto has super seed in my opion ;) ) i like how still kept Naruto being the aggressor as well i also think Naruto should hand Hiashi his ass with thousand years of pain but i will leave that to how you Characterize him
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