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By : DannyLove
  • From mls on February 13, 2008
    loved it can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - evily on February 13, 2008
    of course I ;ike the storry, so you bettere ubdate soon with a longer chapter:)
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  • From kinai26 on February 12, 2008
    Hey, that´s an evil cliffie heh heh Plz update soon... I so want more
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  • From ANON - animelover on February 12, 2008
    oh yeah, bring on the lemon baby!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 12, 2008
    I think this will be good. It's a bit tough with the shortness of chapters. If you want one, ask for a beta. A lot of times, people won't volunteer becasue they don't want to insult. Also, I think on the forum, or somewhere around here, you can find a list of beta's. YOu might troll there for one who likes Yaoi. Because the mistakes you make are pretty simple and easy to fix. (I hope I didn't offend.) Can't wait for more.
    Slave
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  • From ANON - Sarah on February 07, 2008
    I like it Im curious to see what happens next. please keep writting and update soon if possible.
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  • From ANON - jody on January 02, 2008
    that was really good please continu XD
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  • From Dreamfool on December 31, 2007
    Except for the hyperventalating part Sasuke is in character. Good, I like Sasuke broody, which is not always easy to write.
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  • From evillblackcat on December 31, 2007
    nooooooooo...:((((
    you left me like this? droling?...that was the interesting part, why did you have to stop?
    update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TicTac on December 31, 2007
    This is interesting, so how is Sasuke going to get Naruto? Please continue soon.
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  • From mls on December 31, 2007
    I Love this story, I hope to read more of it soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From solitare1 on December 30, 2007
    OMG! This is so cute. I can't wait for another chapter.
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  • From ANON - animelover on December 30, 2007
    interesting story ... yep, you can't spell but neither can half of the planet so no worries! ;-) i dare ya to keep it goin'!
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