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Reviews for Making Lemonade

By : kagehoshi
  • From 24CaratCoal on January 19, 2008
    Alright, I'm sorry but I'm going to be bluntly honest about this. That sucked. Plain and simple it was way to short, yes I did read the little not down at the bottom but if you want people to be able to give you an opinion about whether they like the idea or not, you have to give them a little more than a paragraph- experiment or no. I know I kind of sound (really sound)like a jackass right now, but if you're going to do something like this and ask peoples opinions as a rule of thump make sure the preview is at least five paragraphs long. The reason behind that being, if you can write out a full five paragraphs, not counting speaking parts so just kind of skip over anything in quotations, it becomes a lot easier to decide if you want to continue on with the story or not. I mean if you can't come up with five paragraphs that meet your standards for writing a story, discard the idea and move on- maybe save a draft in case you want to come back to it at a later date, or maybe if you just want to have a good laugh while asking yourself. "What the hell was I thinking?" I do it all the time, I have over two dozen stories on my computer right now that fall under that catagory- and one sitting in my desk drawer that has about a snowball's chance in hell of being recycled. Anyway, hope you find this even slightly useful, and once again sorry about sounding like a jackass. But hey, somebody has to play the bad guy some time, I just happen to have practice at it. Later.
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  • From Overlordofnobodies on December 30, 2007
    I think I would read it but it would have to have a good paraing.Not one you see all the time like Naruto,Itachi,Sasuke or kakashi.They are to many of those.I think Gaara will be a good choose.
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  • From Dynamo on December 30, 2007
    this sounds realy good, i for one would love to read more!
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  • From MrsCake on December 29, 2007
    Nothing ventured, nothing gained. Just write and see what happens.:-)
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  • From Pomona on December 29, 2007
    Yes, it sounds intriguing :)
    I'd like to see how the story will unfold. The plot seems to be dark and twisted, but I'm not into WAFF, really, so I guess I'll enjoy your fic pretty much :)
    Carry on!
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  • From Gnosismaster on December 29, 2007
    This is interesting.

    What is the pairing? NaruSaku? *please say yes*
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  • From roxnroll on December 29, 2007
    Sounds good so far. Give us more.
    Rox
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  • From sarge on December 29, 2007
    i really dont know what to say except that maybe you should do another chapter so that i would know what kind of story you're posting and could you show in the next chapter who the main characters are besides sakura and please make it a little longer next tme...
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