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Reviews for Pain of Betrayal

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From DarkDragonsFlyEverywhere on June 29, 2014
    I can't decide.
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  • From NarutoVixin on May 14, 2010
    ok you have finished Why Orange at least on here you have so have you taken a tally of the votes and are working on the next chapter ???? (you can respond on ygal same user name)
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  • From Mishamad on April 10, 2010
    I think I would like it to be Kakashi and a frame job at the same time, maybe someone used a mind control Jutsu (Is that how it's spelt?) making him think he'd seen Iruka hurting Naruto or something like that.

    But I like to make things complicated, so whatever you'd prefer.
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  • From NarutoVixin on October 25, 2009
    i hope im not to late to vote since im only reading this now but i want to see Kashi framed rather then the merder sides they were with him just before the Teacher was found
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  • From Ravnwyng on May 15, 2009
    Gah! Not Kakashi! *bites nails anxiously waiting to see what happens next* Your story is awesome, but the suspense could kill!
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  • From mixedvietgurl on March 17, 2009
    i would say framed b-c kakashi can still be iruka's lover, but someone else love iruka enough to kill him then let anyone else have him
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  • From ANON - Garfield on December 28, 2008
    i LOVE kAKASHI LIKE A DOG WITH A BONE - BUT i'D LOVE TO SEE WHERE YOU CAN TAKE THIS IF HE IS THE JEALOUS LOVER WHO KILLED iRUKA.

    Framing Kakashi would take the sting out of what promises to be a biting climax, no?
    Also if the culprit IS Kakashi then Naruto and Sasuke will have experienced the same thing wherby they lose family at the hand of someone they love and respect. It will give a much deeper understanding and connection between the boys.

    And a little Kaka angst is refreshing in this light.

    Love ya
    garfield (HSBS @ Y)
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  • From ANON - dustin on November 03, 2008
    ahhhh! im totally spazzing out right now! if the poll isn't over, id like to request that you frame kakashi. i understand that it is completely up to you, but PLEASE don't make me hate kakashi! id rather hate yamato. hes creepy as fuck. make it him if you can!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tammy on October 03, 2008
    I vote for 2)The killer is someone else and Kakashi is being framed
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2008
    Kakashi. I would like to read a story where he is the bad guy.
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  • From ANON - Yuutousei on June 12, 2008
    Kaka-chan's being framed, I just know it "P It's too cliche for him to be the killer, anyways. And, honestly, Kakashi is an idiot enough to lose his jounin vest somewhere and totally forget about it, making it so easy for someone to frame him.

    Wonderful fic so far and, now, I may go off and read 'Why Orange?' for myself :3


    Have a good day,
    Yuu-chan
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  • From solitare1 on February 26, 2008
    I still say Kakashi was framed by someone who was jealous of him and wanted to get even by killing his heart. Kakashi is ex-anbu and would not be so careless about hiding evidence. Plus he;s not stupid and know about the dog peoples skills with the smelling thing. And Naruto has the foxes senses of smell. No, this has frame up written all over it. Be glad to see another chapter soon though.
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  • From spooksies on February 26, 2008
    I VOTE #2!!!!!!! please #2
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  • From lupin2000 on February 26, 2008
    OMG... you killed Iruka... *goes and cries his heart out*... i think that it should remain as Kakashi being the killer. he was drunk and jealous...
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  • From ValheruYaoi on February 23, 2008
    i'm voting kakashi being framed. if it wasn't iruka killed then i'd be fine with kaka being the killer, but with his past i just can't see him killing iruka unless iruka was a bad guy. (guess if you did that well i'd be ok with that version.)
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