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Reviews for Pain of Betrayal

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From nawatia on January 10, 2008
    OK, I vote #2. Kakashi was Iruka's lover, and is distraught in his "unique" way. Kakashi was overly protective cause he knew someone was obsessing over Iruka. Just throwin it out there...
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on January 10, 2008
    Hell, please, please don't make Kakashi the killer... please.... I love Kakashi too much.... pathetic, but true.
    Slave
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  • From Xenosangel on January 10, 2008
    However if the killer were ANYONE other than Kakashi I wouldnt mind
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  • From Xenosangel on January 10, 2008
    Im am maddingly in love with Kakashi so I beg you to have him framed. Otherwise awesome fic. Very heartwrenching
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  • From LadyLaran on January 10, 2008
    Framed!!!! I like Kakashi too much, and it'd play with Naru's head a bit. lol
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  • From Anissa34 on January 10, 2008
    Keep it going... I read the first chapter on FF.net, but then switched and found it here for the dirtier scenes... Hehe. I kinda suspected Kakashi, but I wasn't sure if he was actually him, and it's possible that you're just toying with us readers, and are really going to change the killer and make it so Kakashi was framed or something... I'm not going to set it in stone that Kakashi is the killer. But this is turning out to be a great murder mystery!! >.
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  • From LadyLaran on January 10, 2008
    Ohhh man. I hate being right sometimes! Great job! Glad to see this updated!
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  • From Dynamo on December 28, 2007
    omg i love your work i cant wait till you continue
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  • From ANON - inuyashalove04 on December 27, 2007
    You're downright evil! Killing off Iruka, that's just cruel. But, I guess there's a reason for it somewhere. Anyway, I really liked how you started your story, even if Iruka did die. I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From Luma on December 25, 2007
    D< Awh jeese... Not Iruka. Dx You're making me sad, but I also want to know who the hell did it so I can either cause severe bodily harm or kill them. -nods- Either one works really.

    Anywho! Can't wait to see more.
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  • From nm1716 on December 24, 2007
    So sad. I like the story and want to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From LadyLaran on December 24, 2007
    OMG!!!! I was bawling by the end of this. Poor Naruto...oh crap. Please update this one soon, TW!!!
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  • From lexjamandme on December 24, 2007
    AH man! Such an awesome beginning. I can't wait to find out more. And I love the relationship you already have building between Sasuke and Naruto. Poor Iruka... and Naruto's reaction was so perfect... heartbreaking to be sure, but perfectly written.
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  • From solitare1 on December 24, 2007
    Great start....but I never would have imagined Iruka being murdered. Looking forward to more.
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  • From Mayana on December 24, 2007
    Iruka can't die! :'( Poor Naruto... I can't wait to find out who was the murderer. I like it so far, keep it up! :D
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