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Reviews for Pain of Betrayal

By : NinjaToadsAteMyBaby
  • From MikaSamu on January 10, 2008
    Very well written story. I strongly hope and vote for Kakashi being framed, and not responsible for Iruka's death (which well fits with the motive being someone else being jealous of seeing Kakashi and Iruka together).
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  • From ANON - darkmousy on January 10, 2008
    i say framed... the thought of a dark kakashi is frightening.
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  • From monrque on January 10, 2008
    Well I was going to say let the killer be him but, it was way to easy to find the vest. that scarecrow is a ninja after all, why would he make it that easy. now it has to be some one else.

    good story
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  • From ANON - Nefra on January 10, 2008
    Well, to be honest, letting Kakashi remain the killer would be interesting but it's too predictible at this point. I would go in a different direction myself and make it look like someone was framing Kakashi. The story is absolutely awesome and I can't wait to see an update.

    Ja ne!

    Nefra
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2008
    oh dont make him the killer!!!!!!!! that would suck big time
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  • From nm1716 on January 10, 2008
    Please #2. For naruto to loss both father figures. I t would be too hard. Please update soon.
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  • From lexjamandme on January 10, 2008
    Well, I reviewed the story through ff.net and from that, I think my vote is pretty obvious... not Kakashi. I'd rather him be dead too than kill Iruka. That's my vote... I'm a sap, what can I say. Of course, it should probably be someone Naruto knows and cares about... but there are plenty to choose from and suspence rocks.
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  • From despairs on January 10, 2008
    I also vote #2 Kakashi being framed. Its hard for me to imagine him doing that...but then again he is one of my favorite characters so i'm biased lol. And also if it is really Kakashi then Naruto loses two of his most precious people instead of one :(
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  • From Kativachan on January 10, 2008
    Haha, I REALLY WANT it to be Kakashi, but that would take away the suspense, so maybe it should be someone else...like...trying to get Naruto's attention cause he likes Naruto? Just dont make it Sasuke, lol, I'd cry.
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  • From llyoung on January 10, 2008
    I vote for Kakashi being framed.
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  • From serenagold on January 10, 2008
    Honestly, it doesn't matter whither or not you keep Kakashi the killer, its where you go with the story that matters.


    Personally, I like Kakashi as the killer. It plays off the relationship between the two teachers and adds to the tragedy of Naruto's loss. The question is why? If it is a frame job, I think it would be pretty awesome if Kakashi showed up dead too... of course, there really is no reason to target Iruka as he's a nobody ninja and the story will work better as a crime of passion.

    Either way, I'm looking forward to chapter 3/4(?)! Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From jbjewel on January 10, 2008
    I vote for Kakashi being framed. Like you said to predictable and I think to much like Itachi and Sasuke. But I love your stories no matter what.
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  • From TheSoulmater on January 10, 2008
    Ooooh interesting idea! Seeing how Naruto will react in Sasuke's position, sweet! And nuuuuuo let it not be Kakashi, let it be him being framed pwease? Kakashi rocks too much for that!

    XXX
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  • From Thegoldenone on January 10, 2008
    Please Have Him Be Framed. Please
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  • From dirtygirl42 on January 10, 2008
    I'm all for a psycho Kakashi!
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