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Reviews for Sakura's Submission

By : Gnosismaster
  • From deathwalker on June 22, 2008
    can someone give me the link to were the original is
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  • From UzumakiIno on May 29, 2008
    Good update. Keep it coming.
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  • From deathwalker on May 29, 2008
    can you get me the link to where you found this story
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  • From deathwalker on May 29, 2008
    add hinata most harems dont get alot of respect if she is not in it
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  • From HentaiFox64 on May 28, 2008
    Hinata has got to be on the list!! She has a exellent body and seems quit innocent. Besides the idea of sakura doing "things" to hinata just sounds awsome!!!
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  • From Chronostorm on May 28, 2008
    Well this is interesting so Ayami is first needs a little bit more discription on the bondage but thats ok i wonder who will be next include Hinata for sure also cold you put in Yugito and Shion (from Shippuuden movie)
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  • From on May 28, 2008
    Wait this isn't your story? (as it says at the end of chapter 3) then who is writing this one? And again no sex...I'm starting to not like this could you at least add some sex in there if you're posting it for someone else or at least ask them to put at least ONE scene in there?
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  • From Archfiend on May 28, 2008
    A very interstingg idea making Sakura into a submissive slave, seeing as how dominant she is in the series. The chapters so far are excellent , but could be longer. Anyway, I hope you keep up the story and update soon, as you still seem to have manypeople enter the fray, and I really want to know how you`ll do that
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on May 28, 2008
    So Sakura is taking Ayame and turning her into Naruto Slave just like her.... Man he is going to have fun really quick... Hope you put in the Hokage in three more chapters and lets see what would happen when Naruto becomes a man so to speak
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  • From SagashiIndustries on May 27, 2008
    If we can vote girls in, I'd like to vote for the Hyuuga sisters please.
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on May 27, 2008
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From on May 27, 2008
    Damn it just when it was getting to the really good part you had Naruto say no? I thought after two chapters or just lightly teasing the readers you could have done a bit more than that. Oh well I do hope you actually get back to writing this it just seems that you've forgotten/ignored this story longer than you should have and you're only focusing on the other story you got up here.

    The ending was funny though and I do hope you continue this story. As for other playmates I say Temari (I know she's not on there but I'd thought I throw her out there) Anko maybe for a chapter or two, Hinata of course she's a born submissive. Not Hanabi she's way too young and I don't think this Naruto could go with a kid that young. Kurenai well normally but by this time she would be with Asuma and pregnant in the timeline so not her. Tenten is a good choice but not Yugito if that's the person who I think given the history with both villages she would more likely try to kill Naruto on site for her village's defeats thanks to his father.
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  • From KaelHyun on May 16, 2008
    Hinata is a good one but Sakura would have to get her to Serve Naruto AND her.

    TenTen Would be a good one ... there just isnt enough NaruTenTen.

    Yugito... just remember shes a few years older the Naruto.

    Kurenai... I beleave shes Pregnant(sp) with Asuma's child at the time but im not sure.

    Anko would be interesting, seeing as how shes prity much second incomand at the tourcher and intaragation so that would be a nice one but also i dont think she realy is how she acts its just a mask like Naruto's, so it might work.
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  • From Cyraxr on May 09, 2008
    Just so that it is clear the Hana I mean is Kiba's sister. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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  • From Cyraxr on May 09, 2008
    Good story keep going. Hinata, Anko, and Kurenai should be definites. Temari and Hana should be added. And Tayuya would be an interesting addition to the fun. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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