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Reviews for Tomorrow That Never Comes

By : angelofinnocence
  • From fujinakaheero on January 28, 2008
    lmao, Neji getting hurt by her, priceless.
    Seriously, I had to laugh at that then at the part when Naruto gets home and she runs past sasuke, in the nude to see him.. haha, makes me think of something you probably did as a young child.
    I love Haru though, such a funny three year old, a good character for the plot, that is for sure.
    I loved this chapter, I found it highly amusing.
    Good job hun.

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  • From mls on January 28, 2008
    I can't wait to find out how sasuke handles this situation!!!!!!!!! loved this chapter!!!!!!!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Sabriel20 on January 28, 2008
    I love the last chapter, I laughed so hard. Kids say the darnedest things. So funny, I can't wait for the rest.
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  • From ANON - Halskr on January 28, 2008
    I like how you mellow out Sasuke through his daughter. It is a nice change from the norm of fighting between Naruto and Sasuke to get Sasuke to open up and express his emotions. The bit with Neji in the last chapter was very fun to read. Thanks for sharing this.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on January 25, 2008
    please more!!!
    I love it! Cant wait for when they find out about the kid in naruto!!!
    write soon please!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From serenagold on January 24, 2008
    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww



    You're going to give me cavities with all this sweetness.
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  • From fujinakaheero on January 23, 2008
    awww, kawai moment in the chapter.
    I accept this short chapter only because is it short and sweet and right to the point. Lol.
    But you know I likie the fluff so... it is not surprise that i am pleased with this chapter.
    I still must say that i like the Father Sasuke you have made sasuke into.. and the whole Haru getting upset over her spot being taken over by naruto was cute.. reminds me of another 3 year old we know and love. lol
    Love the new chapter..
    Btw.. i never did comment you on your previous chapter, i will say I liked it a lot, hehe naughty bits :D
    Anyways, keep up the wonderful work.

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  • From ANON - animelover on January 14, 2008
    ooooo, something is growing? hmmm, are you taking guesses? LOL! that was a beautiful lemon you wrote. i don't think i've read one from sasuke's perspective. and it was paced nicely too without a lot of verbiage. ;-)
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  • From ringpop on January 04, 2008
    Wooooooow This is ridiculously good.....Normally i don't like third person fics, but this is definitely an exception....I look forward to more updates. Keep up the detailed emotional work, we love it!
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  • From ANON - Hana on January 03, 2008
    Update soon, I love it.
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  • From mls on January 03, 2008
    Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From serenagold on January 03, 2008
    oh my!


    (I love this story!)
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  • From fujinakaheero on December 31, 2007
    awww.
    I likie how Naruto reacted.
    I am not much with words right now, as you should know that, seeing as we must leave soon.
    But i liked the new chapter and i`m just posting a comment before i jump in the shower.
    I am looking forward to seeing how this story progresses.
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  • From serenagold on December 30, 2007
    AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww



    You have no idea how big the smile is on my face right now. So freaking adorable!
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  • From ANON - sunsparked on December 29, 2007
    wow.. the snake bastured dies by getting a blowjob..
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