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Reviews for Goodbyes Paid Forward

By : inediblefrogs
  • From mistressdragon89 on July 13, 2008
    this story is great i cant wait for the next chapter. keep up the excellent work.
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  • From RyuEarth on June 06, 2008
    I love this! even though it is so sad! =/
    thanks for writing it, and i can't wait to see what will happen next! ^^
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on March 28, 2008
    Always a great storyline!
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  • From LydiaEddins on March 19, 2008
    AH! What an ending! (unless you write more--which I'm all for, by the way)
    I just read your entire story (including the parts by others), and it was amazing (I've only seen one other epic like this to beat it).
    You have great voice, it especially shows through Kotetsu (his language is just so...creative, lol). And, if this is the ending, I absolutely love it. I really don't think that Kakashi could ever make up his mind, so he'll end up doing nothing.
    The way you wrote Sai's character was just so cute (his way of acting and speaking, not the angsting). And, though I agree with Kotetsu and Yamato's view of Sasuke, the way you wrote him was wonderful too (no matter how much I dislike him, he continues to grow on me).
    You've convinced me to get a Y! account...that'll be what I do the next time I log on.
    Thank you very much for your work. I don't have many fanfictions myself...but I have many Naruto vids on Youtube under this same name (Joslin1). Your sharing this saga, makes me want to share something too..if that makes any since.
    XD
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  • From ANON - purplelv on March 06, 2008
    I love how you develop and these characters and their relationships. I can't wait to see where things go from here.
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  • From ANON - Anise on March 03, 2008
    Despite the fact that I like Kakashi and Iruka together I'm glad Iruka finally got up the nerve to do that-good for him! Now I'm curious to see how this unfolds because I'm sure everyone wants them to be together but who knows if Kakashi can or is ready to do that and maybe Iruka deserves someone else, but whatever happens I can't wait to see how this all plays out! :) Also I liked getting some of Iruka's background and seeing that this isn't about him being a prude he's just moved past all of this stuff, it's such a good story I can't wait for the next update ^_^
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  • From ANON - anon. on March 03, 2008
    awwww... this chapter almost made me cry T.T
    pweeeeeeease get those two together :[
    it wouldn't be right if they didn't... D=
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  • From dkf on March 02, 2008
    Well...I'm happy for Iruka that he could tell him that, even though I have a feeling Iruka wont be for a long time...
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  • From honZeldaFitz on March 02, 2008
    That was beautiful. I don't know if Iruka would be better off with Kakashi or not. They're all such a mess. Wonderful writing. *hugs Iruka* I'm sure the fourth chapter will be worth waiting for. :)
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  • From ANON - KorikumoStereo on February 05, 2008
    ah. amazing. you're a genius. you and penbrydd should write a fic together :]
    it'd be so godly that people would have to fast and pray for thirty days before reading it,
    and it would still be totally worth it :D
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on February 03, 2008
    I hope you continue this series... or at least start another. Thank you for a great story!
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  • From charmpit on February 02, 2008
    This is intense. I can't wait to see how Sasuke fits into all this.
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  • From VanityBlake on January 31, 2008
    Dude, can you tell I worked 15 mother fuckin' hours today? I'm sorry for the downgrade in my spelling/proof-reading ability in my last review. Oh yea, any your story's still great. Rock on!
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  • From VanityBlake on January 31, 2008
    OMG!!!!! 'Kotetsu has great instincts with all things cock.' That line was priceless. I laughed so hard I fell out of my chair! (no rally I did, I have to be the world's clumsiest person.) Anyway... this update really made my day. It had been totally crappy up until this point! But now I'm in a much better mood! Much love and update soon.
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on January 31, 2008
    That was fucking great. I feel so bad for Iruka but I know you will make it up to him some how. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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