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Reviews for Goodbyes Paid Forward

By : inediblefrogs
  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens with Iruka and Kakashi.
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  • From Travellyr on January 30, 2008
    Mmm... hot and emotionally-yummy. And also kind of funny- oh, Kotetsu. XD Only the porniest of ninja masters can turn cockblocking into sage relationship advice. XD
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  • From ANON - Limonata on January 30, 2008
    wait wait wait wait! You can't just leave me hanging there! Oh, curse you, Shikyaku! What happens to poor Iruka, what's going to happen with Kakashi? Gah!
    On another note, I'm so glad this chapter came out! And I got to re-read the first chapter of this, which makes me snidely snicker to myself- buttsex sensei, and "spread wide for the chuunin syrup master" indeed. And this, "There is nothing you could tell me right now that would be freakier than the fact that Morino Ibiki popped by this apartment with low-cal beverages, in the vain hopes of having a heart-to-heart talk with you." You can almost hear his mind boggle. I also absolutely adore all the epitaphs Kotetsu comes up for for different people; "sunshine shinobi", "King of Torture and Mind-Fuckery" "Princess Sasuke/ass-clown"- I'd love to see you get ticked off at someone, in real life, just to see what interesting new and degrading insults you would come up with.

    ~Limonata
    P.S. I found you a typo in chapter one..."No." Iruka's voice reflected the regret in Kotetsu's eyes" (talking about the sad lack of video footage)- you want Izumo, I'm sure of it!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on January 30, 2008
    Your stories are awsome! I just wanted to tell you. I can't wait to see what happens next... I think Iruka needs to tie Kakashi to the bed, make him beg for it and tell him he needs to take off his mask.... Um but that's just me.
    Your Slave
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  • From Hestia on January 30, 2008
    Wow!!! Oh, my god!!! Kakashi's lost Sasuke and Iruka's heading over to fuck him--well, that will sure be a WTF moment for Kakashi!!!

    And oh my god, Kotetsu and Izumo--oh, man, wow, that's complicated!

    Gosh this will be remembered as the "cockblock chapter!"
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  • From llyoung on January 29, 2008
    Loved Izumo's and Iruka's conversation where Izumo explained the exclusivity of his and Ko's relationship. Loved the sex and loved what Ko said to Iruka. Now Iruka go get Kakashi.
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  • From ANON - Mila on January 04, 2008
    Wow, this was... hot ^^
    I really loved it x3

    I will look for some other stories of yours now :)
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  • From ANON - Kattmad on December 28, 2007
    xoxoxoxo

    OMGorshies...you sneaky little sweetie, you posted here without any help from me.

    YOU...YOU made my birthday enjoyable! I LUFF YOU! Thank you for bringing Kotetsu home to Izumo
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  • From purplelev on December 21, 2007
    I'm so happy to see another post from you. Your writing is not only sexy cause of the whole PWP thing but it's alos incredibly believable of the characters and emotionally pact. I can't wait for the next chapter. Ohh is the "Emotion" story part of the time line or just a similar story inspired by yours?
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  • From llyoung on December 20, 2007
    "You taught Ibiki how to screw Kakashi, while you laid Kakashi's boyfriend, Iruka. Are you sure this isn't something you dreamed? Hell, are you sure this isn't something I dreamed?"
    Loved that passage. Wonderful story. I love these two together.
    Looking forward to the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Anise on December 20, 2007
    I have been reading through your stories and you write these guys so completely and utterly kinky, which of course makes for very steamy smut! You do seem to like torturing Iruka and Sasuke, I'm beginning to think that they should just get together get themselves out of this mess and forget everyone else. I admit I suggest that because I like the iru/sas pairing and almost no one writes it but on the other hand they could be good for each other, plus I like how your being different you haven't just gone and paired Sasuke up with Naruto right away which seems to be what everyone does. I'm should stop right there before I start to ramble on and I'm sure you already have your ideas of what's going to happen to these guys, who knows maybe you will have Sasuke and Naruto together. I do look forward to what happens next these stories are so well written, it's amazing how something that seems to be all porn could be so heartbreaking and emotional. Anyways I've enjoyed reading all the stories and look forward to the next update :)
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  • From cynaga on December 20, 2007
    "Hell. yeah" Great story!
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  • From Travellyr on December 20, 2007
    Whoa, this is a beautifully tangled trainwreck... it's going to be interesting to see how you untangle (or entangle) this.
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