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Reviews for Immolation

By : UbakeNeko
  • From ANON - too lazy to log in on February 08, 2008
    Oh? So it wasn't you when Immolation was posted on fanfiction.net? I thought it was kinda bold for you in posting it back there with the whole more strict thing. Have you tried pushing the 'Report for Abuse' thing at the end of it? If it was me, I'd just copy and paste Flames to that fic repeatedly or report for abuse many times...
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  • From SexyMomma on February 06, 2008
    I loved this story/ oneshot as I adore NaruSaku pairings. It's a damn shame that someone had to freaking plagerise ( I know it's not the correct spelling, but I honestly forgot. ^^;) your good work, and yes it is good. I hope to see more stuff from you soon. Don't let the copy-cat dunderheads get you down!


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  • From roxnroll on February 06, 2008
    I think I've read this before. I liked it then too. I think it would be cool to continue it.

    Rox
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  • From REM1985 on December 22, 2007
    I have to say that this was a really good start to some great smut. I would say that you should continue it but I know how hard it can be to write something if it doesn't just come to you. If you feel the itch to make another chapter I will be watching for it. Thanks
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  • From Gnosismaster on December 19, 2007
    I like this story. Please continue it.
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  • From Sanity on December 19, 2007
    Wow. This story was, as has been said before, HOT. I'm also of the opinion that this one is well-suited to the one-shot listing. It stands beautifully on its own - to be honest, I think another chapter might put a damper on things. But this was incredibly fun to read, regardless of whether or not you still want to add to it.
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  • From ANON - Anime Baka on December 19, 2007
    I remember Before, and that was a tease! I would really like to see this fic continue! The curse of my NaruSaku addiction....
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  • From s8young on December 18, 2007
    How should i put this???? KEEP GOING!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!
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  • From ANON - A Reviewer on December 18, 2007
    Much too short.
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  • From serenagold on December 18, 2007
    Although brief, this is a very good story. =^^=

    Honestly, I don't think you need to continue it. "Immolation" is like a snapshot. Its a captured moment and when Sakura utters "my place," it is a promise of things to come, left up to the reader's imagination. Not that I'm discouraging you from writing more (lord knows I enjoyed it), but honestly, the fic stands alone well enough by itself.


    Excellent job! Keep up the good work!
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  • From UzumakiIno on December 18, 2007
    Pretty good fr a start. Keep it coming.
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  • From Tricia1224 on December 18, 2007
    Oh yes! You have to continue this.
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  • From roxnroll on December 18, 2007
    That was pretty steamy. I say continue it.
    Rox
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  • From promise2003 on December 18, 2007
    That was a really good short. Because of where you stopped, you should leave it as a short, otherwise it would break the flow of this lovely little piece of smutty fun you have. I could, however, see you doing a chapter that dealt with them two weeks down the road. You know Sakura would be completely hooked at that point. kukukuku
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  • From Lunar84 on December 18, 2007
    That was HOT! And it was NaruSaku! So i love it already. It was written amazingly and if you wanted it could be left alone as a one-shot. Though I really hope it isn't. It has potential to develop into something more. Please update when you have a chance if you decide to continue!
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