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By : Telpei
  • From spoon10488 on February 24, 2008
    Awesome story. I love this chapter. I think it's cool the way you portray Naruto as an excellent ninja, instead of an idiot. Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From lexjamandme on February 24, 2008
    My favorite part was when Naruto was the only one who noticed that Sasuke wasn't bound. Brilliant writing. Stupid council. And excellent story. Can't wait for more.
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  • From serenagold on February 23, 2008
    I love Naruto in this. Despite his impatience and brash attitude, he's still a competent overall cautious shinobi. I like how he's testing Sasuke's limits and securing his domain before he allows Sasuke any liberties. He takes his responsibilities seriously and if Sasuke had any allusions to obeying the council (which I doubt), he would find himself in having a hard time to do so.

    Great job on the fic. Looking forward to chapter 3. ^^
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  • From lexjamandme on December 17, 2007
    Awesome beginning. I can't wait for more. I'm interested to see where you take it.
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  • From LadyLaran on December 17, 2007
    Oh my god, that rat bastard. Although, I detect a subplot there. I wonder...hmmmm. Please update soon so I can see if my suspicions are correct!!! :-) Great job!
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  • From leanne on December 17, 2007
    Oh that bastard! but then what else could he had said uner the circumstancesm, but still... Good beginning, though I don't really think the council has the full authority to send the Hokage away, but I don't really know.

    Any way this will be really interesting to read.
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  • From Ordained on December 16, 2007
    Shooort! I want more. XD

    Yep, this one looks really interesting. -nodnod-

    Good job. ;D Update soon!
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  • From Nanaka on December 16, 2007
    ooh. This sounds great so far. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From serenagold on December 16, 2007
    Oh shit!!!


    This is fucking devious!!! OMG!! What a fantastic plot twist! How incredibly freaking believable. I'm really looking forward to where you go with this. The plotline alone promises it to be a good one. Hehehehehehheh!

    I am so excited by the prospect of this, you have no idea. =^^=
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  • From Kimra on December 16, 2007
    :D More more more. :D
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  • From ANON - BennyPeace on December 16, 2007
    Oh. my. god.

    what a predicament.
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  • From spoon10488 on December 16, 2007
    Ahhhhhh! Bad Sasuke, Bad! Poor Naru-chan!

    This story sounds interesting can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From vanessaclarke on December 16, 2007
    Woooo... Interesting plot. I definitely haven't come across another quite like this. I'm most intrigued. Carry on. Carry on. You're off to a good start. ^.^
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