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Reviews for Choosing My Way

By : NightEye
  • From ANON - CyberDark on March 27, 2008
    A nice intermediate chapter. I was expecting a little more following the wait, but it's a good start. The grammar was better and there was some good plot development. Update again soon!
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  • From DragonMan220 on March 27, 2008
    Hiashi is so screwed, Methinks Naruto will level the Hyuuga compound to get to him. I say use a Rasengan to slowly rip off every bit of skin from his body before letting Hinata kill him!
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  • From ANON - mike on March 27, 2008
    So far its a nice story I'm really looking forward to see how all the characters react to what happened to Hanabi. Great Job.
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  • From ANON - Ryu on March 27, 2008
    Well, a thinking:

    Sure Jiraiya seems to have died in the fight against Pain.
    And for ypur story I think it is the best if we assume that he really had died.

    But maybe we will see him again.
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  • From ANON - Ryu on March 27, 2008
    Uh oh. If that happened to Hanabi what I think that happened to her, than Hiashi should make his last will ready. Because if Naruto get's pissed of, he can be worse than a nuclear strike.

    Very good so far and I hope you will update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nasan on March 27, 2008
    This is good, if a little short considering the plot points you're trying to get across even taking into consideration that it's unfinished. The plot is believable (more so than most, actually), the lemon was good without going into cheesy-bad-hentai territory, and the story overall is well written--though there are a few spelling mistakes, there's nothing there so ungodly annoying that it distracts from the experience. On a side note, when I saw the 'Naru/Hina/Hana' tag I thought to myself "Naruto, Hinata, and Inuzuka Hana? ..No, not worth my time. ...Wait, scratch that, done right this could be almost as amusing as Naru/Hina/Anko." And then I actually read it, seeing Hanabi right off the bat I checked the tag to make sure, then kept reading. I was somewhat disappointed that it wasn't what I had expected, however it more than made up for that. Keep up the good work; finding new stuff that's well written, entertaining, and most of all leaves me feeling better for having read it is the best inspiration for making me want to work on my own stuff.
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  • From DarkHunter1 on March 26, 2008
    well that is worth the wait and very great twist on what happend. Well done
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2008
    you made a mistake in your story in the first chapther jiraya is alive and not writing stories and in the second
    he is dead. not a crititsism just pointing it out to be fixed or better explained.
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  • From Jin on March 26, 2008
    I really hope there was no rape involved in Hanabi's beating. I'm not sure if I would be able to handle that. This was some nice work though. Update soon!
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  • From marc7028 on March 01, 2008
    *re wirte * ok i read it a second time and nearly feel out of my chair both times its a well rounded story funny/serious both time 1 of the best nar/han/hana fanfic u *u should have let naruto put another ple up his ass*good luck and keep it comming bored out of mind with this w8ing and i'm going 2 try and read your other story
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on February 02, 2008
    Love the story can't wait for chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - dave on January 30, 2008
    love the story hope to see all three in action soon. cant wait
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  • From ANON - Ryu on January 26, 2008
    Very good start. I 'm waiting for more here. And I must agree. When Hanabi get's to marry that bastartd I will have to come after you with the biggest sword I can find ^-

    But I have the feeling that won't happen. I eager to read more, especially Hinatas Plan.

    And it seems Tsunade can't stand Hiashi either.

    I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From JasonBanks on January 25, 2008
    I've been waiting to see the next chapter of this story for a long time. I can wait a little while longer. Can't wait to see it!
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  • From darthme1011 on January 25, 2008
    awesome me love
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