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Reviews for Staking Claim

By : BishounenKrazed
  • From ANON - Anon on April 29, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    Ooh, chains? I like the sound of this so far. (Probably because I’m in a good mood.) . . . . Love the second paragraph; it’s saying, “I’m so stupid to have fallen for that, but it’s not that surprising in this case. -_-” Nice. . . . Oh man, he’s sick? I hope he doesn’t die in this. ó_ò . . . . I have no clue who this person is. The attitude sounds kind of like Orochimaru, though. . . . Jeesh, I was gonna say, “That’s mean,” after reading, “He heard the unmistakable sound [. . .]” Should’ve known, though, that it wouldn’t stop there. Clever, though, making him lean towards what’s probably coming. . . . “But let’s see how much progress I need to make here.” I like the wording of that, for some reason. . . . I wonder if this guy really knows who Sasuke is and where he’s from, or if he’s just fucking with him (scuse my french). . . . Hmm, maybe it’s not ‘Rochi-kun. õ_ô . . . . I like the paragraph, “A warm hand [. . .] no other sound.” Good imagery. . . . (*snicker*) “And here I’ve been told all my life that Uchiha were geniuses. Why don’t you at least try to make an educated guess?” Love that line. ^_^ Sounds a little like Dei to me without his “un”s. . . . Brrrr, that’s creepy (“He heard shuffling [. . .] uncontrollably.”). =D . . . . “Are you sure you don’t want to answer my question?” Now I’m getting Itachi in my mind for some reason. Man, you’re good at this! You’ve got the characters floating smoothly in and out of my mind, and it’s not overdone! It’s very subtle! =D . . . . Maybe it’s Tobi. (He just occurred to me.) . . . . “The same way you’ll never get Itachi?” That kind of turns away from the possibility of the guy being Itachi, but still can’t rule it out. (Sadly, I doubt it’s him; Sasuke probably would’ve recognized him unless Itachi disguised his voice completely.) . . . . Ooooooooh. (*shiver*shiver*shiver*) Just read the lines about innocence. O.O . . . . Love the line, “Not even Orochimaru had dared to do this to his ‘vessel.’” I like the use of the word “even”. ^_^ . . . . “I’m glad to see [. . .] as I feared.” O.O . . . . I love the way you described Sasuke’s fear and panic in, “He didn’t know how to handle [. . .] heavier about his wrists.” . . . . O.O That was sudden. . . . Huh? Pleasure? Where did the fear go? Where did the pleasure come from? õ_ô (Sorry, it’s just very suddenly going from not-enjoying-this to enjoying-this. Sasuke, I mean, not me, I’m loving the story.) . . . . (*wince*) Owwwch. >.< . . . . Ooh, I like this part: “[. . .] and fanciful dreams of who should be behind him right now.” Cool line. =) . . . . Awww, that’s sad. ó_ò . . . . (*reading the “So you need a reason” paragraph*) O.O O.O O.O Is it -- could it be. . . ? . . . . Now Sasuke’s angry õ_õ . . . .

    (*Whooooo*) NICE ending!! =D Saddish, but I liked it! That has got to be one of my favorite angst stories! ^_^
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on January 18, 2008
    Awesome.... Truly truly amazing!!!
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  • From Allys on December 11, 2007
    Oh man that was the hottest, most twistedly sweetest thing I've read for a while XD. *huggles u* LOL, but I knew it had to be great cause it came highly recommended and LOL, well you wrote it XD. Is it bad that that makes me feel all warm and fuzzy?? :) I sort of feel like it should be, but LOL, nah XD.I loved it. Especially at the end when he knew, and oh gods that mini paragraph - This was it. This was what his life had come to. He was indeed a slave, bound more tightly to his new master than he’d ever been to Orochimaru, or even his father. Love it to bits. 10 points honey. I kinda wanna beg you to enter it into D/s on y! LOL, will have to sneak over there soon and put in a formal request *Loves on you* Thanks for this XD.
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  • From noit on December 11, 2007
    i like the pace of the story. it's not being rush and allowed me to jog along with the pace and getting to know the characters.
    btw... that's naruto right?
    without saying too much the whole portrayal of naruto screaming that we wants sasuke back.
    though, sasuke is a little OOC. I would expected that he'll be the ice prince and not feeling anything.
    *shrug*
    i still like it :)
    thanks for the great story.
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  • From Sinslayer on December 11, 2007
    freaking awesome one-shot (applause) ^___^ awesome job !!!
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  • From sakuyalove on December 10, 2007
    Damn Sasuke for never thinking he has a reason to stay in Konoha! He deserves to stay chained up. Great one-shot.
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  • From serenagold on December 10, 2007
    ooOOoo.. this is dark! I love it!

    Sasuke is so pathetic at times. Naruto is so demonic in this! Well executed. Great job. Keep up the good work. ^^
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  • From nekochannya on December 10, 2007
    That was... for loss of better words... great. It would be interesting to see if the slave will return to his master or not. Really hot and demanding... Truly raw images. Nyrawr! ^>^
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on December 10, 2007
    *fans self* I knew it was Naruto. This was excellent and I really want a sequal or something cause I soooooo want to know what Sasuke will decide to do.
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  • From ANON - yum on December 10, 2007
    I really liked it. You should keep it going please up-date

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