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By : riddlestar
  • From mixedvietgurl on October 21, 2008
    whoa back up HIS DOBE?! did he just admit something and not realize it lol
    hmmm looks like sasuke is going to have a hard time in the morning with naruto
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  • From hikarichan20 on October 21, 2008
    I have to say I love this fic... absolutely love it. I hope you dont let it fade!!!! It's in my favorites! And I want to know the ending or whatever so please please continue. I love how Naruto is just so mrawr now xDD lub lub it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2008
    Chapter 10: I forget which words Sasuke’s thinking of (“the words he least expected from his ramen loving best friend”). ____ Love Sasuke’s thoughts about how “Naruto couldn’t like him. He was just his friend,” etc. ____ Love the way he admits it, too. ^^ ____ Ahah. “He wasn’t like all the others [. . .] now he had to add one more person to his ‘avoid at all cost’ list.” XD And I like the sharp difference between Naruto and the girls: Naruto’s someone that Sasuke enjoys being with, so that might make it tougher. ____ Sasuke’s probably getting a headache, cuz the problem just keeps going around and around. ^^ ____ Nice specification: “because he didn’t know what to say.” =) ____ I like the frustration at the change in things. ____ So what if Sasuke hadn’t been home? Would Sakura have kept knocking until he came home? Even if it was, like, days later? I doubt it. She probably already knows he’s home, and she’s obviously being patient if she hasn’t knocked the door off its hinges. ^^;;; ____ Ooh, “fiery glare.” She sounded so quiet, I never would’ve guessed that she had a glare in her eyes. ____ Oh-hohoh yeah, his neck. I forgot about that. X3 ____ Hahahahah, this is gooooood. =D ____ Nice imagery of the guilt. ____ (*snort*) “If she thought that he was going to speak first then she didn’t know him well enough.” Heheheh, I find that line really funny. ^^ ____ Wishful thinking, Sasuke my man. More likely, he’d just rather keep it a little more private until he figures out what your response is. ____ Interesting: “I hate seeing Naruto like this.” Which is probably true. Of course, if she said, “I hate seeing you like this,” it wouldn’t’ve made a difference. But now, maybe . . . ____ Military time, cool. ô_o
    One of the sure facts about Sasuke: If he wants to hide and close up, it’s damn HARD to get him out. ____ He hasn’t even been eating his ramen absentmindedly? He’s pretty damn preoccupied then. ô_o ____ I love Teuchi. He’s neat. ^_^ ____ (*snort*) He just can’t escape, can he! XD ____ Love the emphasis on “fear.” ____ Little bit of advice: using terms like “the blonde” and “the raven” to describe people is easy, but not quite necessary. It’s usually only done to describe someone that the main character doesn’t know or can barely see clearly. (Except in fanfiction, of course, where it’s used as much as possible. 9_9) It’s a habit I try to avoid. ____ Yeah, those fangirls will age 30 years in 1 if they were to live with Sasuke. -_-; ____ Nice bit about Naruto wondering if even he deserves it.
    Neji, right? ____ Cool detail about Neji opposing Sasuke’s induction. ____ Hee-hee, “Could—not—win.” ^_^ ____ Ooh, animosity. That’d be fun if Neji tried to be a rival for Naruto’s affections. It’s been done before a few times, but it’s always fun. The bigger the challenge, the better. (Okay—sorry—back to the story now.) ____ Mmmm, it seems possible. ____ (*snicker*) Sasuke’s attitude towards the team selection makes me think of what Naruto thought a little earlier: that Tsunade “really knew how to pick a team.” Makes me wonder if he figures that’s good or bad. ____ By the way, it’s just my own preference, but I’d capitalize the H in “Hokage.” ^^;;;; ____ “I see.” (*snort*) I can hear Neji saying something like that too in these kinds of situations! ^^ ____ Oh man, Neji’s the one reporting. Yikes. >.< . . .
    That’s interesting about Neji opening up a little. Strangely I can see it (though not opening up hugely). ____ I wonder if they might need a fourth member just for the sake of breaking up tension so there isn’t an accident. ____ Yay, Neji’s at the back of the line again. ^_^ ____ I can feel the tension between Neji and Sasuke when the order’s issued. ____ Neji’s even better than me at walking while reading without running into stuff. ____ Oh yeah, that oughta get a response from Sasuke. (*giggle*) ____ Hmmm, interesting: “Is there something I should know?” What are you thinking, Neji? =)
    Boy, that revelation must’ve been a downer. ____ “The Uchiha” is another one of those weird terms. ____ (*snicker*) “Really . . . they were such children!” ^^ ____ Boy, Sasuke’s even more of a bitch than usual. He must be aggravated. X3 ____ I doubt Naruto would lie about something like this, but why’s Sasuke so insistent about it? And Neji can’t figure out that Naruto might possibly’ve made those hickeys? Even if he’s got the hots for Naruto, denial would be prodding his mind; it’s already eating at Sasuke. ____ Well, speak of the devil, he figured it out. 9_9 ____ “He really did not like this Uchiha.” Are there other Uchihas that he liked more? ____ I’m hearing a little too much of “the Uchiha” from all angles. ____ I just bet Sasuke’s itching to say, “Well, fuck you!” to Neji for that smug attitude, and he can’t.
    Yeah, really, Sasuke, you’re making a mountain out of a molehill. Naruto hasn’t done a damn thing yet, and you’re freaking out. ____ I’m pretty sure that if Sasuke was determined enough to not lean towards Naruto, he’d wake up on the opposite side of the tent. It’s a lot easier to control where you sleep when you want to than you’d think. Even if he did like it, he’d still be in control of where he sleeps. Dreams are a different matter, though. ____ Ahh, possessiveness. That makes sense. He’s got personal space issues and he’s possessive of his stuff.
    LOL, funny scene opening! XD ____ (*snort*) Good one, Naruto. ^^ ____ “Hoping that if he ignored Naruto long enough, he would go away.” Well, there’s a vain hope if ever I heard one. I guess knowing better doesn’t stop it, either. ____ Who was the last person “who had leched at him this shamelessly”? It sounds familiar. Was it Naruto? ____ Heheh, Sasuke’s fur’s on end, he’s growling and snarling and hissing, he’s baring his teeth and claws and puffing himself up—and Naruto’s still not backing off. =D ____ Go for it, Naruto! (Though if Sasuke asks nicely—fat chance of that—then really back off.) ____ I’m hearing a little too much of “the dobe” as well. He thinks of Naruto by his name more often than by the weird “pet name”—also, he hasn’t really said “dobe” that much when referring/talking to Naruto; he uses a variety of stuff. ____ “How long had it been since he’d just kissed someone?” If he means just let himself go and kiss, then I’d say never. But I like this description of the scene, the heated intensity. ____ “Flat on his back?” Wouldn’t he be underwater, then? Even if the water was shallow enough to not go over his face, it’d defeat the purpose of the spring. ____ Oh, so he’s not flat on his back yet. Hmm. õ.õ ____ Oops: “Shit, they was already hard.” Wrong word when talking about two people; you need “were.” ____ I take it that Sasuke’s not a virgin? (My surprise is probably more due to the long wait for this chapter; the rest of the story faded.) ____ So Sasuke’s got an excuse now: something physical. ____ Lol, “Or maybe not.” ^^ ____ The lust between them . . . I really wonder who’s going to end up on top (don’t tell me!). This chapter seems to hint at Sasuke, but I also remember Naruto’s aggression in those other chapters, his dominance. They’ll probably switch positions a lot, but I wonder who’s going to top first. ^_^ ____ Admit it yourself, Sasuke, and even take it slow if that’ll make you feel better. But get past the denial. (And choose a moment when Naruto’s not being ridiculously pushy; I like it when you hold your own and come out when you’re ready.) ____ (*gasp!*) Love the tension from that line! “There’s nothing to talk about.” And Naruto’s reaction made me like, “Uh-oh.” ____ “There was something disturbing about an unpredictable Naruto that was enough to make his skin crawl.” I dunno, him being unpredictable is normal, I thought. Still, I can understand why this reaction would make Sasuke uneasy. ____ Ah—! “HIS dobe!” I saw that! X3 ____ And of course Sasuke’s unsatisfied, even though Naruto’s doing what he suggested earlier. Sasuke needs to admit to himself that he likes Naruto. Or at least has the hots for him. Whichever.

    YES! Thank you for not letting it fade away! I’m enjoying it a lot! Keep going! I want to find out how this all turns out! (And not in a summary, lol.)
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  • From LadyLaran on October 21, 2008
    Naruto, you need to tell him the full truth!!! Great job on the chapter. I can't wait for the rest.
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  • From on October 21, 2008
    Ii'm glad I happened upon your story today. It's really good and I can't wait to read more lol. sasuke sure has a lot of will power to just hop out of the springs like nothing just happened. He still seems freaked but may be weakening lol I want to be on the update list. redzalot@yahoo.com
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  • From Mikra on October 21, 2008
    Loved this. From the bottom of my heart. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From goodchaos on October 21, 2008
    O!M!G! An Update! I'm so glad you haven't givin up on it!! This Ch. was great, keep it up!!
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  • From ANON - maruu on October 21, 2008
    why did u take so long in updating? this will defenitly coz the readers to avoid reading any of ur fics
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  • From ANON - Sam on October 21, 2008
    loved it :)
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  • From Sendrine on October 21, 2008
    This is one of my favorite stories at the moment >_< I LOVE the beast within Naruto. I can't wait for it to get poor Sasuke, but I also can't help but think that if Sasuke isn't going to bite, maybe Naruto should try his luck on his other delicious team mate... Neji!! Heheh. I'm glad that you updated and I can't wait for the next part. Top job so far! :)
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  • From ANON - Meg on October 21, 2008
    *runs around in glee* YOU UPDATED!!!! OMG! i cannot believe it. and it's soo LONG. i love it. the make out in the hot springs.. gah!! *melts* awesome!!
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  • From ANON - Felixia on June 28, 2008
    oooh! How considerate of you! Please, add me to the notification list - my mail is: bake_mono@wp.eu

    Thank you for writing such an awesome story *gives you a cookie* keep the good work up! :)
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  • From ANON - BelleDragon on May 27, 2008
    I love this story so far and loved how you wrote dialog and interaction for the 'confession'. You have kept them both in character and am looking forward to seeing Sasuke eventually coming around... XDD Please add me to your e-mail update list. Thanks! Courtney cmucha@optonline.net
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  • From ANON - Kang on May 26, 2008
    Wow. I must say I was delighted by this latest "awkward conversation" chapter! I don't think I've EVER seen a story where the character bites the bullet and maturely lets the object of his affection know it wasn't all just a silly misunderstanding. Oh my god, it's like Naruto isn't a scared 12 year old who would rather bemoan how Sasuke could never like him rather than let him know and see how things go. And Sasuke's reaction!! It was really cute. He's perfectly cool until "Naruto l-likes--me????" embarrasses the bejeezus out of him! Buwhahahaaha! I imagine he might be a little evil and bitchy to retaliate for his mortification... poor Naruto. Here's hoping Sasuke eventually decides "'tch. Fine. Whatever, loser. You better take responsibility for your idiocy and **** me real good then. >:/ I want lots of **** jobs, too, damnit." XDDDD I look forward to your next update. I check aff.net more than email, I think, but if you're making an email update list, I suppose I'd like to be on it. kudos.no.kang@gmail.com thanks!
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  • From Namaarie on May 26, 2008
    You shouldn't feel bad about that chapter, It was good! I love this story, so please keep writing more =D
    I loved the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke as well, it was awesome and I was nearly screaming out at the computer 'tell him already!' at one point - see? Emotional response, shows how into this story i am =) I'd like to be on this update list!
    nightcastsashadowonthemoon@hotmail.com

    Please continue soon!

    -Emily
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