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By : riddlestar
  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2009
    I hope Sasuke makes the right decision about having a serious relationship with Naruto! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - NeonOranges on March 16, 2009
    Oh wow, put me on the update list! I love that this isn't just about hot raunchy sex, which, don't get me wrong, is great to read. But the character development is there too here, you can see how fragile this relationship is and how difficult it is, and how they're both going to have work harder on it than they have on anything else to make it work.

    It really is a beautiful story, and I commend you for it.
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  • From Sigart on March 16, 2009
    You totally shouldn't worry about the smut, it's excellent! I especially like how Sasuke gives in.

    Also... yay! You updated twice in not so long! I am very happy now.
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  • From guitarmania2007 on March 16, 2009
    thish fic ish love *hearts* Yayz for updatez! Woot!! Awesome chapter! and yes Sasuke is just innately emo, its in his blood XD
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  • From angelofinnocence on March 16, 2009
    You have managed to catch my attention with this fic thus far, it is interesting. I was a little weary at the beginning that it might become a meaningless PWP, but you have definitely kept my attention and proved that there is a good plot involved. Don't get me wrong, smut can be fun, but only when it is well-written, though i would rather read plot than porn any day. I am eagerly awaiting the next update. Keep up the good work. If you ever need another beta, I am willing to lend a hand, just email me. Ja!

    >Xander
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on March 16, 2009
    You little snot! You didn't tell me you had it done! and It's great. There are only like two small mistakes, otherwise it's perfect and the smut was beautiful hun. Love you!
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  • From ANON - Meg on March 16, 2009
    SMUT!! *dances* it was really good.
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  • From Mikra on March 09, 2009
    Nice chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Adele on March 04, 2009
    i usually dont review but i suppose i had to since its ure birthday n all.. lol. happy birthday!

    great story, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2009
    (Sure has been a long time.

    Oh, Happy Birthday! ♥)

    Chapter 11: Hmm, that’s quite a dilemma Naruto’s got there. = ____ Lol, “The bastard sure knew how to ruin the mood.” ^_^ ____ What would happen if Sasuke refused Naruto too long? It seems to indicate that Naruto would die, but surely that’s not the case. ____ Lol, “All he needed was Sasuke to want and believe it too.” That’s all he needs. ^^; ____ Heh—love how Naruto works himself into confidence that it’ll all work out. =) ____ Ahhh, interesting: “After all, if Sasuke didn’t care about him, he wouldn’t have stopped him like he did at the hot springs. He would have gone ahead, unmindful.” Very clever. =) ____ Yay, an idea. The suspense is fun. ____ Okay, this last paragraph of the scene is scaring me. What is going to do??
    Love how insecure Sasuke is. He’s in unfamiliar territory. ____ I really like this line: “. . . wonder if he would be even able to resist Naruto, now that he had a taste of what it would be like with him.” =) ____ Heh—Sasuke realizes that this might not pass when he thinks the word “permanent”. =) ____ Yeesh, he’s so threatened that he feels the need to grab a kunai? o.O Dang, talk about overreacting. ____ Love how suspicious Sasuke is, and he’s not sure what he’s suspicious of. ^_^
    Hahaha, he can’t forget. ^^ I’m surprised that Sasuke doesn’t just jerk off so he can relax. ____ Mm, I don’t know if I’ve mentioned this in earlier reviews, but it’s not really necessary to call Neji “the Hyuuga” or Sasuke “the Uchiha”. To me it sounds a little . . . exaggerated. ____ “has been in rain only for a total . . .” I’d capitalize the “r” in “rain”, since you’re talking about a country. ____ Hmm, interesting detail about the target. Makes me wonder what these guys plan to use the info for. ____ Yeach, a whorehouse for pedophiles? >.< That’s . . . sad. ____ I like their discussion on the mission. It sounds . . . really cool, if you ask me. ^^ (Sorry, I know that sounds kinda dumb, but I like it.) ____ Love Sasuke’s irritation at not getting the whole story. ____ Boy, that’s gotta be rough, taking those kinds of orders from Neji. Neji can really flaunt himself when he wants to. ____ Lol, “Fucking jerk.” XD
    “Sasuke was such an idiot sometimes.” Me too, apparently. I’m lost. -_-; ____ Oho—! The landlord leering at Sasuke. XD ____ LOL, his question! XDD You wish, man! (No wonder Sasuke’s in a bad mood. And it’s wet out.) ____ There’s not much about Sasuke that isn’t attractive, that’s for sure. ____ Well, the outfit could be worse, I suppose . . . ____ Hmm. For Neji to know all the little details about the mission, I’m a little surprised he didn’t tell Sasuke. (Well, not really.) I wonder if he could get in trouble for that. ____ Sasuke definitely knows how to make an outfit look good on him. Intentionally or not. ____ Hard work? ____ Lol, “the bastard had done that on purpose!” *__* (*drool*) ____ Lol, N: “What are you doing?” S: “Leaving.” ^_^ ____ Okay, Naruto’s beginning to blow the situation out of proportion. Byproduct of sexual frustration? ____ And Sasuke’s not the only tease around here, riddlestar. You’ve got some nerve leaving it right there. (*glares*) Lol, I’m only joking. ^^;
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  • From Sigart on March 02, 2009
    Yaaaaay! this is one of my favourites and it finally updated! I love you! And -what- an update?! Oh, Sasuke's gonna get it now, the bastard. *can't wait*
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  • From serenagold on March 02, 2009
    Happy Birthday!!! (Although I must admit, with this update, I feel like I'm getting the presents. ^^)

    Keep up the great work!!
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  • From sakuyalove on March 02, 2009
    No! I want to read the next part but you don't update often. Please, I've been waiting, and thanks for not giving up on this story.
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  • From ANON - Rachelleryan on March 02, 2009
    Happy Days! What a wonderful update. Thank you. Please keep them coming! I want to see Naruto put Sasuke in his place, underneath.
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  • From Jan on March 01, 2009
    Love it! Poor Naruto, he’s in for a tough fight with Sasuke’s stubbornness ;-)

    Please update chapter 12 soon ^_^

    Jan

    PS: If it’s not t o much to ask is there a way that you could email me a notice when you next update?
    My email is naiomi2nailyn@yahoo.com

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